My Hex Campus Daily

Warning before viewing: There are both praise and criticism, both subjective and objective. This post only reviews the plot from the [reader's perspective] Considering that the author is also from Fujian, the following comments may be a little regional. The word "rebirth" at the beginning of the introduction may mislead new readers, so I would like to correct this point of view first. This book is more of a "campus love story" than an "urban rebirth article". The plot rhythm is biased toward daily interactions, and it also indicates that the "emotional line" will be the main one, and the "career line" will be the supplement. It is also confirmed that the entire work will revolve around the four-year campus life of the university and will not continue to write the story of the male and female protagonists after they enter the society. Compared with previous urban novels, this kind of story structure may lack the ease of "expanding your career", but since this book does not use "rebirth" as a gimmick, you don't need to pay too much attention to it. After focusing on the golden finger [Hex Option] in the book, you can clearly understand the differences between it and similar works. [Hex] is not refreshed every week, but is superimposed selectively. It focuses on cultivating the male protagonist into an "extraordinary person" who can highlight his temperament in addition to walking. The settings of [Hex] with different types and different scenarios are enough to make up for the monotonous shortcomings of the career line and make the work sometimes show a hint of "fun-loving attributes" from the originally sweet love story. However, the writing style revealed between the lines in the book is a bit changeable. It is a pure campus style in which the male protagonist is messing around with his gay friends, but it has changed to a business literary style in which the male protagonist is high-spirited and loud in front of his teachers and seniors. This does not mean that "big principles" cannot be conveyed to readers through words. Transmission, but such a style transformation that alternates between "superstructure" and "mass line" and cannot switch freely really makes me feel a little uncomfortable╯╰In the process of reading from beginning to end, I can only choose to read it intermittently, otherwise it may be a bit discouraged, but if I can match the author's brainwaves, I should be able to read it in one sitting. One more point to mention is the choice of the emotional line of the book. Single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists are often considerations made by the author before starting the book. However, this book puts aside some basic characters of "cold school beauty", "sweet senior sister" and "shy Shen Youchu". What is quite unexpected is that the author based on the image of "Shen Youchu", and on this basis created a shining point for the heroine as a "special person". This can only be attempted if she has such experience in her own life. Ordinary authors are better to be more cautious. As for how the final plot of Shura Field should unfold and end, and how to write a he-style ending, my evaluation is that it depends on the development of the subsequent plot. Mainly considering that the author does not have much social experience, so I am worried about whether the emotional line can land safely.

The writing is very good, the high school chapter has the feeling of youthful memories, please continue to work hard for the college chapter.

It's a very good book that fills up a lot of regrets. Many times I have been thinking that if I could go back to being 18, I would have a lot less regrets. If I could, In my senior year of high school, I sat in the back row of the classroom and played Three Kingdoms with my classmates. I ran so fast that I went to college in a daze. The friends I played with in the back row also had 1 or 2 books. College life was also I joined the student union, started a business, and worked as an intern during the winter and summer vacations of college. I was confused and beeping. When I left after graduation, my classmates said, "Goodbye if we are destined." Until I said the words "no fate" came out, the classmates after graduation went their separate ways and had their own lives. It has been many years since we met again, and I don't know when we will meet again. Graduation season is not a grand farewell, it is an ordinary summer style

The young man behaves like a saint. He has not eaten a single meal of meat for so long since he was reborn. He is so outstanding. How can you make society progress? If you are like the protagonist, how can you make those supporting characters so embarrassed? You are rich, your wife is more beautiful, and you are better than others in everything? This can always only be a self-pleasure mode, just deceive yourself. It's definitely not possible to have only love in the city, love should not be separated from home! What have you been pretending to be? The reality is that if you pretend too much, you won't even be able to get along with a second-hand person!

In fact, I have a question: Do we really have to write about this kind of family situation? I think there are not a few normal families in China. Isn't it okay to write about an ordinary family with normal parents? Is it necessary to have a story about bitterness and hatred, just to show that the protagonist has changed the family after being reborn?

I used too much force in the first few chapters and it was really embarrassing. I'll look through it again to see if I can withstand it! What I want to see is a touch of pretentiousness.

Damn it, where is the male protagonist label? Is this a Lily text?

I want to ask everyone, my ex-girlfriend borrowed money from me during our relationship, and the total amount was about 30,000 (enough to file a case), but there was no IOU or receipt, and WeChat had already deleted each other without any mention of the loan. Only Alipay still had transfer records. When the police station just asked me to send the transfer records to him, I clicked on Alipay crookedly, and accidentally opened Qidian and saw this novel, so I wanted to ask by the way, why haven't you updated it yet?

I have listened to more than half of the book, let me tell you about my feelings. Song's progress can be said to be one version ahead. Except for not confessing, the way they get along is basically that of boyfriend and girlfriend. The other two relationships with the male protagonist 200 chapters ago are that one is a superior and subordinate and ordinary friends, and the other is also a good friend. The way they get along basically does not cross the line. But after Su expresses her feelings, her progress immediately skyrockets. To be honest, writing the male protagonist in this way is really too scumbag. After all, Chen Gou has a clear start and flirts with two people. Soon after, it is really a Shura field. The author is really not good at handling the emotional line. After two hundred chapters, it really feels too abrupt. I feel that I have lost the desire to continue chasing.

The protagonist and Zhang Kai are a perfect match

I know you will think of that book, it doesn't matter, the sky is dead, Huang Tiandang will stand😡😡😡

If you want to get rich, you must go to Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou and Shenzhen. Going to Xiamen, there is no environment, no funds, no talents, and no supporting facilities.

In every next chapter, Song Song must appear once, otherwise I will report this book

When I saw this paragraph, I had an inexplicable memory of falling in love for the first time, and I'll give it all to you

I've read a book similar to this one, it's also a campus love story with multiple female protagonists, but I decided to switch to it. My Hex option is refreshed every week.

Do you want me to pay you for reading your book? Are you rebelling against Tiangang? 🙂

Has the author ever been in love? Just write about campus love. I take it for granted.

Where is my devil's contract? The protagonist's Hex doesn't deserve a devil's contract?

There are only 3 female protagonists in 160,000 words?

Su Qingqian

White Rabbit toffee-flavored perfume, but the self-portrait behind it is actually her in my mind

How many words are there to finish the book?

The overall writing is good, but there are no exciting points, there is less excitement, and it is too bland. The relationship with the heroines can be ordinary and sweet, but the career line must be exciting and show off, otherwise there will be no hook. If you don't watch it for a day or two, you will forget it. If you suddenly think about it, the upper limit will be waived.

I didn't watch more than a hundred pictures at first. The problem is time and characters. The time span of high school is very fast, and then college slows down. This is understandable, after all, the main love in college The character problem is relatively big Protagonist: The character is not a scumbag at the beginning, but he is a complete scumbag when he is a freshman Song Song: Maybe the writing is too pure, and then count the relationship between childhood friends, the first confirmed relationship, the advantage is too great, it is easy for me to gain sympathy Class Leader Su: High school was okay, nothing promising. I got a little obsessed with love in college, but something was wrong at the sports festival. I didn't have the cold, decisive, academic character Deaf-mute: Well, I don't remember what it was called, it should be a relationship promoted by a golden finger The relationship progressed a bit fast. It is easy for Shura Field to control the relationship, and it is not the kind of person who can bear to share a relationship with others. Maybe deaf-mute people can, Song Song is a bit heartbreaking

When will the author update? It's too hard to wait, only one card per day

Referring to reality, the foreigner Wang Shuiniu can have a harem and date more than 100 steaks without problems such as the Shura field. The author of the novel wrote about the harem and the Shura field of several women, but the readers criticized it as unrealistic.

The author doesn't post the picture, I will post it

When will the author plan to finish?

Song Song is so heartbreaking. I can't think of how to make her and the squad leader accept each other in the future.

It looks good. Come on, author. It's really good so far. I'll give you a monthly pass. Remember to keep it up