The Outcast: The Ninth Marvel, Peerless Chinese Martial Arts

You say you need to practice your boxing a million times at the beginning, which sounds good, but have you considered the actual situation? Let's do the math. The protagonist says he'll practice for 12 years: 12 x 365 = 4380; 4380 x 24 = 105120 x 60 = 6307200 ÷ 1000000 = 6.3072. Okay, that's a little over 6 minutes to do one repetition.

That's not just direct ascension; look at the Star River Emperor. His divine indestructibility surpasses even the Manifestation realm. The Manifestation realm can destroy stars. The realms below are all dragons and snakes in comparison. With increased energy and combat power, he can destroy continents, nations, and cities. Indeed, in the battle between the protagonists of Under One Person, whoever comes will die.

There's a Great Luo realm in Under One Person, right? Why not just have a Other Shore realm instead?

It's not that I look down on Chinese martial arts. The Ming Jin and An Jin stages are all about integrating and utilizing the body's strength. The later stages are about fundamental improvement. The Qi in Under One Person is more like strengthening energy such as internal force and chakra. As a skilled fighter in the original work, Feng Sha Yan could fight with Ming Jin.

A person's Qi is divided into innate and acquired. Innate Qi is like superpowers, while acquired Qi comes from martial arts. However, a person's martial arts encompass many things, not just Bagua, Bajiquan, and Yixing. Each school has its own unique martial arts style. You don't think the Golden Light Mantra is just chanting a spell, do you?

Jiang Jiang is here, popping in to say hi!

Isn't your positioning exactly the same as that of the Six Treasuries First Thief?!

No flaws. The writing is solid.