My Rise in the Story of the Stone

I only read the beginning and the part where they scare Madam Wang, storm into the old lady's backyard, cripple over a dozen guards, and then suddenly become a bunch of idiots. They have a space, food, and drink, and at the start, they sell some yarn and soap to Leng Zixing, who then gets them imprisoned by him and Lai Da.

It was all wrong from the start. If you started hanging around in high school, you should know even better how treacherous people can be. Even in modern society, people know not to flaunt their wealth, yet you went to ancient times and didn't even have this basic common sense.

If Jia Huan were an ambitious and driven individual, how many more years would he have lived? As a reminder, Jia Lian is called "Second Master," meaning he has an older brother, who, according to the original text, should be Jia Hu. So, where is Jia Hu? Why is Jia She so at odds with the second branch of the family? Therefore, Jia Huan's actions are precisely a case of feigned foolishness with great wisdom.

Copying books and pairing them with princesses—it feels like this has become a fixed formula.

The author clearly didn't look at a map. Tongguan has historically been the gateway to Guanzhong, located at the border of Shaanxi and Henan. Yanmen Pass is far in Shanxi; even the fastest cavalry of nomadic tribes couldn't possibly travel hundreds of kilometers directly from Shanxi to Tongguan when they moved south. The author wanted to create a fictional version of the Battle of Beijing, but inexplicably set the capital as Chang'an, which is completely illogical.

It's a bit childish and lacks depth; it's suitable for first-time readers of time-travel novels like Dream of the Red Chamber.

I reread his older novels today, and the biggest problem with them is their unsatisfying nature. The main issue is his penchant for playing the subservient, especially in his two Republican-era novels (excluding *Bright Sword*). In the others, for example, the Duke is a dog from beginning to end, even when he becomes the emperor's dog, constantly being tormented.

Why are those maids so arrogant? What are they writing? They're blind and deaf!

He wrote "Bright Sword" and "Dream of the Red Chamber" alternately.

The author's name is Hongbaoer E The book is called "Dream of the Red Chamber: I Only Want to Fight, Not Fall in Love". This book is a rip-off of your work, My Dream of the Red Chamber; he didn't even bother to change the protagonist's name.