My Bright Sword Days

I'm used to this update speed, can it be slower? No, I'll send you some Viagra. You can take some and get better!

This chapter is too little, please write more next time

Can you be more serious when writing a book? There are too many mistakes.

A single bombing has wasted a whole day's worth of updates. I estimate that the bombing will be completed tomorrow. When will the protagonist go back to kill Little Japan? Let's wait and see for a few days.

In order to make a comment, I subscribed to a chapter first. The main thing I want to say is that I particularly like the author's first book "My Warlord Career". I always have the downloaded e-book on my phone.

From the author's "My Career as a Warlord", "My Career in the Republic of China", "My Wife is a Bandit", "Travel to the End of the Ming Dynasty", "My Career in the Ming Dynasty", the author's anti-war novels are better written than the novels in the late Ming Dynasty. I hope the novel can be completed, come on

The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this.

I'm really convinced. It doesn't matter if there are a lot of typos in this book. As long as the plot is well written, I can tolerate it. But I can't tolerate the setting that forces the protagonist to suffer! In Chapter 81, when the protagonist built the armored battalion, it was clearly written that it was equipped with bridge erecting vehicles. Then dozens of chapters later, the protagonist clearly dispatched with all the main troops, and the armored battalion was also there. It was clear that the previous battle was against the Japanese, and the armored battalion only lost a few tanks. As a result, when retreating, a bridge was bombed by the Japanese, and it was in trouble and could not escape, and had to fight head-on with the Japanese. Where's your bridge erecting truck? Did he forget or was he deliberately suppressing the plot? If it's not used, then why did you write this bridge car is used?

Maintain your previous style of writing about the war and avoid risks appropriately. In the end, our brothers are silently supporting you, come on! ! !

Please correct the typos, it affects the reading experience too much.

I don't know if the author's account has been sold. The names of the protagonists in the first chapter are not consistent. Sometimes they are named Qian, and sometimes they are named Gao. It looks like a copy and paste text. The reason for the second protagonist's coma is inconsistent. In the first half, he was injured and comatose during training, but in the second half, he was injured and comatose in an ambush. There is also the price of weapon exchange, which is a direct loss. Machine gun bullets are 0.2 Yuan for 1,600 rounds, and rifle bullets are 0.2 Yuan for 200 rounds. The obvious loopholes have not been discovered after writing nearly 100 chapters, and the author who is waiting to die is not so excessive. If you are upvoting yourself, don't write this account. You have already dissuaded a group of fans. There is no point in writing anymore and it will only continue to ruin your reputation.

I think it would be better to change the title of the book to "I'm Licking Li Yunlong with My Sword"!

The author has pointed out errors in any of your books, but you haven't corrected them.

Um, I don't think the name was right. It should be called My Sword and Dog Licking Career.

I have no other good qualities, but I am honest, and my writing is really disgusting. Forty-one chapters were poisoned to death! I paid a dollar to scold you. If you don't like it, there is no need to delete it from the bookshelf. If you are disgusted, I will scold you directly! Never see you again!

It's already rotten, which is a pity. . . 8888. . Monthly passes and subscriptions are like feeding dogs

Chu Yunfei helped you stop the Japanese army, and you didn't even mention it. Li Yunlong calls you a local rich man, and you send guns and cannons like crazy. Although the conditions of the revolutionary ancestors are difficult, it doesn't matter if you support them a little bit, after all, it is for the sake of resisting Japan. But the Eighth Route Army was not the only one who fought against China. Why didn't I see you supporting anything? Apart from the word "water", the only thing left was "lick". I really regret subscribing to the previous ones. Goodbye.

The first question is about the heroine. I feel like the author has never seen a woman before. It has been like this since my warlord career. It feels like I have never seen a woman in my life. I am so hungry and thirsty that I still have sex with women in the book all day long. The second problem is the procrastination. If you don't want to write it, you don't have to write it. The third problem is that the character description is very rough and the climax plot is too bland. The summary is that the author is sexually obsessed with women. She masturbates so much that her brain is exhausted, and then her limbs become too weak to write.

Today's military novels are limited to one group, which is so disgusting.

I am very curious about one thing. You have always despised the anti-Japanese drama, but now you are praising this anti-Japanese sacred book?

A question. There is no national justice and no national justice. To be honest, there shouldn't be too many traitors in a team raised by ordinary rich men. This is not a game. It's not that if you spend money to recruit a soldier, that soldier will be willing to fight for you until death. Why is the Rabbit Army called the strongest army? Look at the armies in Europe and the United States. As long as they are at an absolute disadvantage, they will choose to surrender. You know that the soldiers recruited by rich people will not be afraid of you. Especially soldiers, they are not ordinary civilians who can be threatened with guns. How many times in history have soldiers bombed camps. Why are there so many spies in the army of the national army and local warlords? You spend money to poach the artillery soldiers today, and you don't know who the spies are. The national army surrendered to the Japanese in an organized manner on the battlefield, such as Qian Bojun in Bright Sword. This is still a small battalion commander. The protagonist is the artilleryman you spent money to recruit. Tomorrow the Japanese will come and he will be rewarded with a high official. Or if you say he is not willing to be a traitor, then if it is a high official from the National Army or Yan Xishan, do you think he will still be willing to do it with you?

There are not many books that can poison you in the first chapter.

It's better not to write novels like this, be real, and stop anesthetizing yourself.

Fuck, the whole day anti-theft chapter. Damn, I wanted to vote for the count. . Now invest in J8

Finally, there is a beginning and an end. The environment is like this. I can't write many things. It's a bit unsatisfying. My warlord career is still enjoyable. It's a pity that I haven't finished the next few books.

Has the author changed his past style and started writing dog-licking articles?

After reading it, it is not easy to write an anti-war novel. How can the protagonist understand Li Yunlong. But in Chapter 130, the Japanese cavalry fought the protagonist so viciously that the protagonist's troops, armed to the teeth, couldn't beat the Japanese cavalry. After the emergence of machine guns, the cavalry should withdraw from the stage of history.

The time-travel belt system is also charged for fourteen years. If you haven't time-traveled, you will also be charged for fourteen years 😥😥😥

I have read all the novels A Ding wrote before that I can read, although the original ones have been harmonized. It can be said that it was from him that I gradually became fond of the history of the Republic of China. However, since "The Duke", the overall quality has dropped significantly, and the plot is no longer as logical and self-consistent as before, and it is also full of enjoyment. I hope A Ding will adjust well and return to his familiar writing style.

The eternal supervisor always sucks! !