Naruto: It's Not Easy to Be a Konoha Ninja.

The author writes very smartly and knows how to exploit strengths and avoid weaknesses. It is not difficult to see from the text that it is difficult for the author to describe many plot connections smoothly using the logic of his writing style. In this regard, many Spring and Autumn writing techniques are used to blur the description of the development of events, and instead use the writing method of clouds and mountains to cover this part of the content, leaving this part of the content to the readers' imagination. Generally speaking, there are no particularly poisonous points in the content of these thirty chapters. The writing style is bland and gentle, and it is a good book. I am also looking forward to the development of the plot in the future, which will flow naturally like running water. (ps: According to this way of writing, I will continue to read the follow-up content, and I will also subscribe after it is released. Please continue to work hard, the author)

The idea may be good, but the writing style is uncontrollable. The protagonist in the novel is too loser and has not yet recovered psychologically, like a husky who has blended into a pack of wolves 🙄

It can be seen that the author wanted to write a different Naruto, but he failed to understand one thing. If he fails to become a butterfly blowing the wind, it is easy to have trouble in this world view. If I were Danzo, then the protagonist was in the village at the stage when the Sandaime died, and I would just send someone to kill him. If he was not there, I would say that he should be a spy inside and outside. After all, he is just a special one. Isn't it difficult to die in an unknown corner?

As a golden finger for extracting blood, why don't you use the Shisui entity and the corpses of the Uchiha after the genocide? Even if it is difficult, you have to make a plan, but you have done nothing. How can you purify it later when it is not a war? The four-stop plot is coming to an end

The author's hobby is really special. He even used the Ninja Turtles genre ten years ago to write about it.

It seems that the author deliberately wanted to write indifferently or coldly? The plot of saving Quan on the night of genocide is obviously very thrilling, but there is no positive description? Did you even take it with you? What a magical way of writing.

I just saw it before putting it on the shelves, so I will give you my opinion. The writing is too flat, and the characters seem to have no ups and downs. It feels like everyone has a Sima face, and there is no emotional appeal at all. The idea is a bit like escaping from Konoha, and I feel that I can borrow a little bit from it. As for growth, the upgrading aspect is also a bit sparse. At first, he was said to be a civilian genius, but in the end, he learned medical ninjutsu very quickly, and also learned sealing techniques very quickly. He also opened kaleidoscope without any stimulation. He didn't know why he grew up so fast. It was so unrealistic. Overall, it looks too flat.

No, after reading more than a dozen chapters, there is only one word, boring. It is just like a Naruto fanfic from more than ten years ago. There is no life without success.

After reading thirty chapters, I couldn't help complaining. The writing style feels similar to that of a light novel in my childhood. The protagonist is also very characteristic of my childhood. He is like a tolerant husband. His partner is chased by many people and he goes to his house with the intention of drugging her. The protagonist has nothing to do, which is awesome. The most important protagonist is not the heroine, which is even more awesome. There are also some parts of the plot writing that are not explained clearly until now, and the test readers use their brains to think about the plot. I can only say that the writing is really amazing.

This cheat can't be written at all. It looks like a running account. I suggest that the things the author strengthens each time be reflected on the settings panel, or the previous cheats can be strengthened. When he collected blood for the first time, how much did he collect, to what extent, and what effect was there? Nothing? If not, you have to be more considerate of yourself. Since collecting from corpses is useful, then if you directly become a doctor, you won't be able to collect even a few corpses, or go out to do missions and kill some wandering ninjas. The ninjas must have Otsutsuki cells in their bodies, otherwise the chakra will not be used at all.

Although Kishimoto left a lot of bugs in his paintings of Naruto, people in China like to rely on conspiracy theories when writing fan fiction. I really feel like vomiting after reading too much of it! My opinion on this book is definitely eunuch.

There is no foreshadowing at all, and the plot is forced to follow, with a strong sense of fragmentation, and even inexplicable. It feels like I have written where I thought, and patched up the connections. It feels like the writing method was the same as more than ten years ago. In fact, it is very unpopular. Overall, it is barely watchable, but it is not as good as fairy grass. There is a high probability that it will be released, but there will definitely not be much subscription.

Boruto is even more magnificent than this

The writing method of stream of consciousness is sometimes confusing to read.

It's a pity that there are not many novels with such a good artistic conception.

I thought this was the author's first book. The main character has already reached the film level before the 100th chapter. How to write the rest of it? This is too incompetent. I didn't write the process carefully like the Konoha subversion plan.

The first few chapters are not well written, but after the tenth chapter the plot officially begins to rise, which is a good source of food. If it can be stabilized, it will be a small masterpiece.

Except for the women, Yuan Fei and Danzo, all the key points are hidden too tightly. In this way, the readers will not be able to grasp the feelings, and it will become more and more boring. You don't know when you will stumble when you write further.

Looks good, has a light feeling

A eunuch? 😰

Don't write anymore? The writing is quite good. Why don't you write it again? Just follow your own ideas and listen to what the readers say. Why don't you write this trivial novel?

It's a bit of a stream of consciousness and may not be very friendly to new readers. For old readers of Naruto stories, it is still good, at least it has some new ideas.

The writing has the flavor of old fan fiction, and overall it's pretty good.

As shown in the picture

They were all at loggerheads with Konoha, and ended up doing something small like a terrorist attack and then reconciled, and then for no apparent reason the main character became Hokage.

Happy New Year's Eve! May all go well with you! May all your wishes come true! The most important thing is good health!

Why don't the author go to Death and read poems? If you don't know how to write combat, just follow the mechanical flow

No update yet, what's going on? Are you getting married?