Naruto: the Uchiha Who Lives Forever in Konoha

The unique human cultivation method is exchanged for S-level forbidden ninjutsu...

The original heroine left in a very poisonous manner...

The original heroine is pretty good too, she doesn't have to be like the female characters in the show.

I don't really care about the original heroine, as long as it's written well. But can she be the original heroine of Kaleidoscope at every turn? I think the little genius has a three-magatama, and I think it was given to the protagonist. Now the protagonist is 16, and the original heroine is about the same, maybe 17/18 at most? This is like a kaleidoscope. It's so awesome. Why didn't the original work have any scenes? .

The plot is a bit watery, and the main character is too self-centered, so there's nothing interesting about it.

A running account, not Uchiha at all, no sense of pleasure at all

It's okay in the front, but I let myself go a little bit in the back.

Tell Orochimaru all your secrets. I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

To be honest, the more I think about the Ninja Village War, the weirder it gets: 1. The Ninja Village is so big and ninjas are not engaged in production and are not landlords, so why are ninjas grabbing territory? Does the daimyo increase military spending? 2. When ninjas grab supplies, what do they mainly grab? Who to rob? Ordinary food is not necessary. Ordinary civilians and no nobles dare not take action to rob treasures. 3. It's even more funny to blow up bridges and cut off supplies. Even a genin can fly on water. The sealing technique makes it easy to carry supplies. Ninja soldiers consume less money and there are also special foods that can't be grabbed. It's okay anyway, and you won't starve to death. In terms of weapons, some kunai and detonating charms are very small, and ninjas will bring them with them when they go to the battlefield, so I really can't figure out why they have logistical pressure.

The power of the Six Paths is not the same as the Blood Stained Snare. Only Kaguya's Expanding Seeking Dao Jade and some techniques are at the Blood Stained Snare level. The ordinary Seeking Dao Jade is not. The Six Paths Realm is based on the Sequential Blood Stained Network.

It's okay if you want to create original fan fiction, and there's nothing wrong with it. The problem is that you have to write your original characters well. If you don't have the ability, don't write original stories. It's easy to be criticized, and passers-by readers have to say good things about it when they see it. As for whether the genius setting can be written, why is there no reputation at all in the original work. All I can say is that when you go to the battlefield, you are a genius even before you die. If you die, you will still be promoting something, so you can write.

I can't use it even if I have it. Is it bad for studying if I use it for scientific research?

Are there any hooks for fighting? It's wasteful and meaningless. It's used for scientific research and making plug-ins for yourself. Don't you feel good about it? Isn't it cool to have a humanoid tailed beast jade rapid-fire cannon?

There are too many typos, especially in various names

It's bland, too flat, and doesn't look interesting.

Can't it synthesize the blood stains of Escape Technique? Not all attributes can be practiced, but when the effect of immortal magic on the body reaches its limit, you won't be able to think of a way to do it?

Now there are ten fanfics and eight Uchiha books.

Naruto: Uchiha in Konoha

Overall it's good, but the writing about the cultivation process and ideas is too general. There are too many typos and wrong sentences, please correct them.

The writing is a bit bland, not very passionate, there are almost no fighting scenes, and it's a bit boring.

If you live forever with a woman, you will still be unscrupulous

Recommend a novel - Peerless Tang Sect: My Simulation of the Dragon King (formerly known as Peerless Tang Sect: My Simulation of the Dragon King Legend)

There is a problem in the first chapter! Uchiha is born with a lot of chakra, not a lack of it! Otherwise, why would Uchiha Madara fight Senju Hashirama until he was exhausted?

Yamanaka Haiichi frowned when he heard the screams in the morgue. A forensic doctor ran out sweating: Today's corpse did not cooperate with the autopsy at all and struggled very violently. Hai Yamanaka patted him on the shoulder: Look, you didn't get the consent of the corpse when you dissected it. Isn't it normal to not cooperate? But the family agreed. The family members are not the deceased. Forensic doctor: That makes sense, so how can I get the corpse to agree? Unable to figure it out, the forensic doctor simply took out a copy of "Super Limit High Martial Arts" and looked through it.

I chatted with Orochimaru for 7 chapters,