I'm a Ninja in Konoha

This book is not pleasant. It feels like a job. In reality, rubbish bosses are annoying enough. I really don't have the patience to read this kind of life-and-death struggle of little people.

How should I put it? First of all, the time of Hex is unclear. It comes suddenly, and then when will it appear next time? Secondly, there is the clichéd problem of the substitute technique. Nowadays, it is very criticized that the substitute technique is written like the power of the hand. This work still does not change it. I hope it can be adjusted in the future. To put it bluntly, the Substitution Technique is not a technique that allows you to switch places with an object to hide yourself during a battle. It's a technique that allows you to hide when you're facing an enemy. You change it before the fight and then hide quietly. The protagonist's current Hex ability can clearly be used to hide well with the Substitute Technique.

Does the author really know how short twelve meters is? Hyuga's perception is measured in kilometers. You should be 100 meters at least.

I thought I was playing with Konoha genin, but it turned out to be a genin.

A classic with overwhelming combat power He even killed a jounin He was also evaluated as mediocre in ability Still a genin Kakashi described Rin as being able to call her by her full name The level is really a bit low

But as that comment said, the protagonist is like a camera. In your writing, everyone's characters are well drawn and fleshed out, but the protagonist feels a little too weak. It would be nice to add a trump card to the protagonist that can flip the table. Even if this trump card has limitations and the cost is high, it is still better than nothing. Oh, by the way, the protagonist has learned eight doors, and eight doors are indeed very strong. You want to develop in this direction, but it takes too long. It is so difficult to open just one door, and that is not all. When you can open seven or eight doors in the future, the day lilies will be cold, and the results will be too slow. What you have to do now is to give the protagonist a hook that will make him popular immediately.

Can I only smoke Hex once?

It's too bland and looks boring in other works of the same type.

The writing is better than most Naruto fics, but the trigger of Goldfinger is inconsistent, and the protagonist is too weak and has no sense of existence. Judging from the current growth, after the three battles, it is still a little transparent and has no impact on the main plot.

Some of the comments seem like Long Aotian is addicted. He has to play with the overall situation and has to control his fate. This book's portrayal of small characters on the battlefield is a relatively rare perspective among Naruto fans, and it is rare for it to be well written. As for changing this or that, small people have the self-consciousness of small people, and it is proper to care about whether they can survive tomorrow.

It's a novel with nothing to look at. You say it's about ordinary daily life. The protagonist does a life-threatening job. You see the passionate battle. The protagonist is just garbage. Anyone who comes can kill him. You see the novel ideas. It's no different if it is enabled or not. The Hex plug-in is about the imagination combined with different enhancements. If you open it and you're offline, it's better to just write that the protagonist has sentience. It's boring. Let's go.

The writing is a bit nonsense. You are a genin. If you don't improve yourself as soon as possible, you will just follow the plot! Kakashi was already a jounin at that time. You are a genin and give someone a strength. You have the nerve to write. Kai was not that good when he was a genin. His father became famous after killing many ninja swordsmen.

The author, Yun Huoying, has a protagonist on the side of the road + a camera. He also likes to send the protagonist into the original plot and force himself into it. The plot has to be copied, and the character has to be squeezed into the OB. The evaluation is that Shuangdian's aesthetics lags behind the current starting point audience, another turtle article.

Did the system give it to you? If so, with Goldfinger it's still the same as the one on the roadside. The protagonist's combat power is severely suppressed, the plot is also very bland, and there are no exciting points to catch people.

Actually, I quite like Naruto's early combat operability. All kinds of cheats, all kinds of operations.

Don't add plug-ins, just let the protagonist gradually become stronger. What you can see is the taste of ordinary ninjas struggling to survive during the war.

During the Third War, Hinata and Uchiha were probably more active in the Kirigakure area. After all, Shisui was famous on the Kirigakure front, and Kirigakure took the opportunity to acquire the Byakugan of the Hyuga clan. With all the clans involved, there must be more branch clans.

It's like AI, but it can see typos. Sentences with repetitive meanings, "one" and "such one" over and over again, are like a primary school student trying to make up for the number of words in a composition. Very disappointed.

These last few chapters were probably written by AI. I don't even know what they are talking about. My scalp feels numb when I read them.

After it was put on the shelves, things started to get messy and there was no sincerity.

It was originally a slow-burning article, not a cool article, but the batch that was put on the shelf has not changed.

Keep observing, it feels a bit bland 🙂

The writing is not good, it is too bland, the incompetent protagonist cannot save anyone, and can only torture himself in the plot. I have seen more than 60 pictures, and there is no great cheat so far. It is like watching the ninja version of Shoko, and there is no success at all.

The original plot was about forcing a passerby, which is of no use, it's just a camera...

What are you doing? Why don't you take a look at your comment section? If your grades are not good and you can't write, it's better to go to the palace. Good results. Hydrology has just been put on the shelves. Are you full?

The screen is filled with the names of the protagonists, which makes me have a headache. The protagonist's name can appear four or five times in a paragraph. Also convinced

I don't understand the purpose of writing such a useless protagonist. He doesn't have any talent. The trick is just a joke. The first trick is to indirectly sense hostile units within 5 meters. The throwing speed of ordinary humans is about 40 meters per second. What is the difference between 5 meters and hitting the face? The average arrow speed is about 50 meters per second. The top-level bow has an arrow speed of 150 meters per second. With only a ninja's defensive power, ordinary ninjas do not have 50-meter perception. What is the difference between them and dead people?

I want to know if the protagonist has really always been a genin?

The author took a break for two days, so how come there are fewer updates?

Look at your first one. . It's really hard to clam. . It's all done scientific research and has a system. . This one is the best written. .