Live as an Immortal in the Southern Song Dynasty

If the martial arts literature is written as a historical text, if the deduction continues, the overall contradiction will inevitably appear, so Jin Yong's own martial arts will be quite far away from history. It is recommended that the author think about this issue carefully. After all, in the world of martial arts, it is absolutely impossible to be completely consistent with the real historical development. Just like if you add an external driving term to the equation of motion, the dynamic function of the system will inevitably change.

The top masters fight guerrilla warfare and kill 180 Jurchens every day. In a year or two, the Jin Kingdom will have to run back to their hometown in the Northeast.

The protagonist in the author's novel is an aborigine or a time-traveler. Not to mention the nine-year compulsory education knowledge and the common sense that ordinary people in modern society know, the protagonist is from a medical family, so the knowledge of biology is enough to become a miracle doctor in ancient times. Another funny thing is that the waste system adds some points

If the protagonist is looking for orphans, it is better to find more women to give birth to children, build a big family, engage in business and politics, and accumulate strength, so that he can overthrow the Song Dynasty at any time and become the emperor himself.

If you are really not good at writing about war and hegemony, then don't write about it. It's too natural. . . The more I write, the farther away I get from martial arts

The power system is so touching. It goes up and down. Sometimes it feels powerful, and sometimes it feels like a weakling.

The protagonist now wears triple heavy armor and can't he kill seven in and seven out among thousands of troops? Why don't warriors wear armor?

The writing is good, but the plot is too slow. The memory of awakening at the age of 2 is too far-fetched. It is too far-fetched to add a second time until the beginning of the chapter. The time traveler's research on cheats must be a top priority, and he must try every means to try it. Just because he is afraid that his family will worry, he has not moved for more than ten years. This is not the level of drug addiction. The doctor still can't explain it. Secondly, what is the use of the protagonist's father? I don't understand. Shouldn't the time traveler have moved to the south long ago? Waiting for the war to come to your doorstep? I didn't see any money being made, just stocking up on precious medicines and the like. Jin Yong's martial arts background, a doctor who has never seen martial arts practitioners? It's impossible, the old farmers may not know, and it's impossible for doctors. It was actually heard by a passerby. The martial arts world is not that far away from the common people. Finally, the protagonist knows that this is the late stage of Tianlong. Shouldn't the best choice be the Vulture Palace? Only the Xiaoyao ➕plug-in can have hope of immortality. Go to Mantuo Villa to steal a bunch of garbage? The Small Phaseless Skill is there, so the time traveler should not take detours in practicing his internal skills.

Good grass, but a little watery. It introduces a lot of historical knowledge in detail. This is a martial arts novel, not a historical novel.

I can't stand it anymore when I see the Qian family and other families rebelling and killing all the royal family without even destroying the family!

Tell us what you think of this book. Originally I came here because of the title of the book, thinking it was about a family behind the scenes. It turned out to be surprisingly okay at the beginning, but things started to go wrong after the death of Pigfoot's father. Later it turned into a historical conspiracy novel. I can only say that from following updates every day, now I occasionally subscribe to a chapter that interests me through its title. There is a reason

However, to watch martial arts is to watch grudges be resolved with pleasure. For example, you use your medical skills to save a hero, and the saved hero saves more people. This is also good, but don't shrink back and look blank. This is neither martial arts nor history.

I don't understand whether it's a historical novel or a martial arts novel 🤔

The writing of this book is very good. It is more realistic and slow to read. I have been running alone for more than 20 chapters for too long. Now I have finally settled down and I have to leave the camp and start playing alone again. I don't know what the author wants to write, and I have a weak sense of expectation.

The author must be old enough and wants to make money. He used to write cartoons, but now he has changed. His writing style is good, but I don't know if he can stick to it.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I will share my thoughts after reading it (if the author feels that the impact is not good, I will delete it). In terms of writing, the novel only has narration and no story. The key is to narrate it from the perspective of modern people, which cannot bring readers into the world in the novel. This is also a common problem in many time-traveling novels, which show the superiority of modern people everywhere, standing on top of the ancestral graves and laughing at the shortcomings of their ancestors!

This introduction is wrong. During the Tianlong period, Wanyan Aguda, the ancestor of the Jin Kingdom, was still struggling to survive in the north. He was suppressed by the Liao Kingdom and couldn't live anymore. He was still many years away from destroying the Northern Song Dynasty.

When I see internal energy trading, I inexplicably think of blood selling in the United States; I also think of organ trading; collusion between internal and external forces to resell internal energy; cultivating talented warriors to absorb internal energy; ...

I obviously feel that the writing is okay, but I feel that the taste is very bland.

From the title of the book and the first half of the book, we can see that the author wants to write about martial arts, a story about a man who has great martial arts and is immortal. This is what attracts readers. But later it deviated from it and went towards military history, with some martial arts mixed in. The article was not good, but this way of writing made people feel a little uncomfortable. The martial arts at the beginning dissuaded the readers from history, and the military history at the end dissuaded the readers from martial arts. The military history is average, but the martial arts is not pure. Both history and martial arts are unpleasant, but they are not too poisonous. It's a pity to throw away tasteless food

During the Jingkang crisis, who was Duan Yu, the current emperor of Dali? In the Eight Tribes of Tianlong, it was Yelu Hongji who succeeded to the throne after the Chanyuan Alliance. This was almost the late period of the Renzong Dynasty. Later, Duan Yu was the emperor for more than 40 years, and he should have gone through Yingzong, Shenzong, and Zhezong. He died in the early period of Huizong (about ten years?). And the Jingkang crisis happened in the 26th year of Huizong's reign. It couldn't be during Duan Yu's reign anyway, right?

How many more chapters are left in the plot of "Fighting Gold"? Waiting for the review of the martial arts line.

When are we going to get rid of this internal force thing?

As title

When the protagonist first met Yue Fei, Yue Fei gave him an evaluation that it was only a third-rate dancer. After so many years of development, he should even add some points, and he was only between two and one. According to the Jin Yong martial arts timeline, Wang Chongyang was not yet born when the Northern Song Dynasty fell (1127). Wang Chongyang was born and died from about 1112 to 1170 (according to the setting of official history/martial arts). He was only about 15 years old during the Jingkang Revolution and was still alive. However, he had not yet practiced Taoism and founded the Quanzhen sect at this time, and was still an ordinary scholar/warrior. To put it simply: Wang Chongyang existed when the Northern Song Dynasty fell (he was still young), but he had not yet become the "Chinese Supernatural Power", but several of them should have already begun to wander the world. The author did not describe the other factions at all, and the force value of these people at that time should be equivalent to the main character who cheated

The author is good at writing about daily life. It is plain but interesting, not refreshing but has a long lasting charm. This kind of life style is very suitable whether it is writing about high-minded low-level martial arts or classical cultivation of immortality.