Naruto: Life Player in Konoha

Good news: There's more detail than just looking at the outline. Bad news: It's like reading an outline

Damn it, asking the village's strongest logistics personnel to forcefully go to the battlefield, is it true that there is no consideration for long-term interests at all? With this logistical potential, it won't be a loss if you die? Brain?

Refining equipment for the public. Shouldn't the public provide materials?

This paragraph is comparable to what I write in my essay.

Is it another nanny article?😴

Can the protagonist modify his body, just like Scorpion?

Why do you feel like the protagonist is omnipotent? You come to the protagonist for any problem, just like you can't fight without the protagonist. Logistics work is inseparable from the protagonist, including weapon manufacturing, food, namely soldier food pills, transportation of seal scrolls, dismantling of Kong Ninja equipment, and mass production of Tsunade's antidote.

Although it's unfinished, I'm still paying attention to it and I'll invest in the next book.

Regardless of whether it is the original work or the author's own secondary design, there is no need to explain it so clearly. Sometimes if you omit those explanations after reading an entire chapter, there will not be much effective content.

Has the author considered letting AI polish it?

The subject matter was mentioned. Most of the fans went up and down to kill it, and there was no big problem with what they wrote. They just gave up in the end and stopped writing.

The timeline is so messed up, I feel like I didn't pay much attention to Naruto at all, it all depends on YY.

Good news, I clicked in, bad news, I was persuaded to quit after reading the introduction.

It's hard to describe in one word, not at all enjoyable or interesting. Author, what type of story do you want to write? Daily life is not like daily life, and upgrade is not like upgrade. Straight talk, bland and tasteless. The entire text description is like a notepad, you might as well keep a diary. Cut it off and find another job

Similar to the genius next door, he is a bit ordinary. One problem is that he likes to analyze, explain, and be verbose. There are a lot of analyzes in one chapter, and the last one has little to do with me. Basically, the chapter is almost gone.

... It's a waste of time. Why don't you send me your outline or draft... No matter what, you have to let us see what you probably want to write, but it ends up being thrown away halfway.

I feel like a bit of a tool. Aren't you considering improving your strength now?

The author writes well. Congratulations. The magic that breaks the fate of the Sage of Six Paths

It's so tiring to read, no sense of immersion, just a simple instruction manual