
In the World of Conan: Thaumaturgy Disguises the Magician
在柯南世界:用奇术伪装魔术师
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- Completed
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- 699k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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To put it bluntly, I want to save Miyano Akemi and gain the favor of Miyano Shiho under the pseudonym Haibara Ai. There is no love without reason in the world. Helping others who are not relatives or friends always has other motives.
Just write in the introduction that there is no heroine.
The assets for the novice time traveler include Dragon God Island and Dusk Villa.
The subject matter is good and the writing style is great.
The subject matter is really good, especially the setting of magic. It can be written in many other types of novels. But the writing is terrible, there is no main line, and the writing is very messy.
Don't comment if you don't like it, personal opinion
Setting is OK! The choice of words and sentences gives people the feeling of a running account. I just saw Conan Shrinks and it made me feel that the author has written too many psychological narrations. I can only say that you can read it when there is a book shortage. I don't particularly like it.
It feels like most of the protagonist is using Goldfinger to watch the original plot of Conan without being present. I want to see the protagonist become a great magician, but I don't want to see the case in the original plot. If I want to see this, don't I know to read the original Detective Conan?
To be honest, the first part was okay, but I felt a little uncomfortable when I reached the point where the skyscrapers were detonated. The protagonist knew that many innocent people would die, but still let it go, just to get more thaumaturgy. The protagonist felt that he was not handsome anymore. Being strong is a matter of time, but being handsome is a lifetime thing.
So what is the purpose of your thaumaturgy setting... It feels completely useless. It looks like he is reading a running account. There was no performance or doing my own thing, giving people a pure camera feel.
A large amount of space is devoted to the setting, which is outside the protagonist group, and the most critical magic takes up very little space.
Kaitou Kidd took out a crystal monocle from the void and stuck it in his right eye. He looked at the chaotic dates on the calendar, raised the corners of his mouth slightly, and whispered to himself: "Is the time lengthened by the chaos? Interesting!" All around, whether it was snow-white pigeons, dark crows, or even countless microorganisms in the air, they all exclaimed the same: "Interesting!" 😂
Brother, such a good subject matter, why did you write it like this...
So boring, I thought I was pretending to be a magician, but it turned out to be boring...
There are too many narrations, please read them
No, this is a Conan fan with a fantasy background. . . It's really embarrassing to see explosives being handed over anonymously to the state. . . . Is there another plot like this later?
Tsukamoto Sumi, who had similar combat power to Ran, also died of murder.
I would like to apologize to all readers. There are indeed many typos in the book. Actually, I checked it after I finished writing it, but how should I put it? When I was in school, I couldn't check for errors every time I wrote. The result is still the same now. I will read all your comments in the chapters. As long as there are any mistakes or typos, I will make improvements in time. Thank you all.
The world setting of Conan written by the author is weird
At the beginning, you are inexplicably close to Kudo Shinichi. Speaking of which, Kudo Shinichi's detective intuition actually didn't see your intention, and to be honest, recording cases is very strange -_- || And later on, Shinichi immediately turned into Conan. Secondly, does the author have any misunderstandings about human beings' three views and time concepts in the world of Conan? In terms of the passage of time, I am not going to understand the normal passage of time and the confusion of time. Why do you compare the three views of people in the Conan world with the three views of people in the normal world? The living environment and ideology are completely different, okay? For someone who kills people at the slightest disagreement and can come up with a feasible plan casually, it can be said that if you live in the world of Conan, you may be resented and want to kill you because of one or two words you said inexplicably. Moreover, the protagonist's golden finger is obviously not weak in the world of Conan, so he is actually afraid that the prisoners will hate him when they are released from prison? In terms of the ability of the protagonist Goldfinger, to be honest, if he was a land fairy in ancient times, let's not talk about the cases that Conan solved. In fact, none of the prisoners came after being released from prison. There are possibilities and examples of revenge against the solvers. The protagonist is inexplicably timid. To be honest, most of the prisoners will not do anything to the solvers. What a trouble, not to mention after you have experienced repentance, but in fact, the hatred towards you after you are released from prison will be displayed intuitively. Moreover, instead of facing the slightest chance of harming yourself, the prisoner's revenge, you are at the crime scene every day, and when you meet the prisoner, the probability of others attacking you is obviously several times higher! Then comes the main thing! ! ! Why do the boy detective team almost never appear in the Conan plot? Where are the Miyano sisters? After solving a lot of cases for a long time in the past, it turned out that the Miyano sisters didn't show up, Xiao Ai was gone, and the winery just disappeared, right? It is completely the daily life of the Maori family in solving crimes. The existence of other people is infinitely lowering. Moreover, you are a magician and a thaumaturgy. With such strong abilities, you are actually afraid of the revenge of a prisoner who has already been imprisoned. It can be said that in the world of Conan, there is no prisoner who takes revenge on the detective. Moreover, there are very few uses and displays of thaumaturgy. It can be said that the plots and cases written by the author are basically not much different from the original work, and they are not as good as the original work! There are so many characters in the original work, and only the Maori family is left! Moreover, the protagonist's three-dimensionality is not very high, and his sense of presence is actually not much. It feels unimpressive, and the protagonist seems not to be short of money. He is making money there, and I don't see the protagonist doing anything enjoyable with the money! And inexplicably, you actually said you wanted to return to China when writing about the world of Conan? Then there is the protagonist who does not find a girlfriend. In the world of Conan, the level of participation is even lower. There is no CP and no highlights. Just write a sweet emotional line! If you want to write a story without a female protagonist, at least it must be interesting elsewhere! The protagonist has a golden finger and miraculous powers, but when something happens he is worse than an ordinary person. The miraculous powers are not very useful at all. You are just acting for others to watch, right? -_-||
I thought this thaumaturgy was from the collection.
There really is a witch in Conan! The kind that knows witchcraft😅
I read Chapter 16 and I don't understand. What is the meaning of this golden finger?
It's a bit boring to watch. When will you interact with Kaitou Kidd? The male protagonist conquers the female protagonist.
Thaumaturgy, does it have foundation content?
Forget it in the early stage, why do you feel that the protagonist and Conan, Ran, Suzuki and the others have not become good friends in the middle? The protagonist feels like a loner, and apart from Conan and the others, they do not regard the protagonist as a true good friend.
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The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁
I thought it was the thaumaturgy of EVA particles