The Primordial Wizard Returns to the Modern World

In this kind of behind-the-scenes drama, you must pay attention to the allocation of roles for the protagonist and supporting actors, and never engage in a plot where the protagonist and supporting actors rob the scene. In many books of this type, the protagonist becomes a seeder, sowing a seed but not showing up for more than ten or twenty chapters, and then the supporting characters blossom and bear fruit. The feeling of separation is too great, and the protagonist is dispensable and has no sense of substitution. In the latest chapter of this book, the plot of the protagonist taking over the puppet at a critical moment is well arranged. The protagonist has his own way. He can play however he wants, rather than watching the puppets play. This is something that behind-the-scenes actors must pay attention to.

Personally, I suggest changing the title of the book, such as returning to the modern world and becoming the ancestral wizard. The current title of the book is a bit misleading, and it seems that the protagonist was a very powerful wizard in the past. However, if you click on it and see that it is not like this, there will be a psychological gap.

It was pretty good before 47 pictures. In 47 photos, you give yourself a whole two-dimensional female supporting role. Do you think this cold-blooded wizard behind the scenes is right to play a two-dimensional female character? The poison points of the 47th picture have been reduced a lot, and the style of painting is wrong.

But the universe is so big. I don't want your eyes and subconscious to be limited to a small place like the earth. If you don't have enough talent, you can transform other planets and immigrate there. The universe is so big, what material materials don't exist? Just don't be too stressed

Is there a female protagonist in this book? If it's not a harem, I won't watch it. I feel like there are a lot of stereotypes nowadays. Wizards must be ruthless and selfish to be considered sane?

In the later period, there was a reference to the protagonist of the Way of the Lord God, who incarnated into the world and asked all mankind to upgrade and work for him. He robbed and pirated infinitely diverse materials, including animals, plants, and stones. He also had to work and practice for the protagonist, so that the whole world, whether living or inanimate, organic or inorganic, could become stronger and upgrade as long as he had self-awareness. As long as the world was ascending and all sentient beings were getting stronger, the protagonist, the incarnation of the extraordinary technological world, could lie down and become stronger, and no longer have to worry about things like cultivation and focus on experimenting and having fun.

Psychic wizards need to absorb the emotional energy of living beings. No matter how you look at it, it is a path similar to belief in God. This is not a wizard at all! In traditional fantasy, there are two main categories of people who rely on emotional energy. One is the belief in gods who become stronger or even survive through belief, ranging from totems to omniscient and omnipotent gods; the other is devils or devils who absorb fear and become stronger, often forming a dynamic balance with the belief in gods system.

Someone is putting it on the shelves with a small plot climax. If you are still playing house with children when you put it on the shelves, you should quickly advance the plot to the time when the soldiers enter the game and then put it on the shelves. Chapter 3 will introduce the protagonist to collect garbage. You really acted too high and acted low. You originally wanted to see how the protagonist would play and raise all human beings, but you have been playing house and forced me to read it, and your desire to read it has been lost. Think about how many days it has been since you wrote this plot. Could it be that I subscribed to you every day just to read this?

With my 10-year experience as a bookworm, as long as you, the author, write according to the current pace and quality, and update two or even three times a day, the book will definitely become popular because you are willing to listen to advice, and you will make changes and give feedback when readers say it. In this regard, you will scorn your peers.

Why not go to the real world trial? Being addicted to space trials is not a good thing! The best thing about behind-the-scenes stories is the fight between different organizations