Ascension to Immortality: from Evil Spirit to Supreme Detachment

As long as there is some content involving women, the descriptions of women are very disgusting, with third-rate characters and third-rate plots. The protagonist's performance is even more unbearable, like a third-rate gangster who has never seen a woman, and his poisonous points come one after another

. . . . . This princess is convinced and is being taken advantage of by the ladies again.

What did you write? ? Is there no technique for rebirth? Or does the attack method require special records before it can be used and practiced? There is also a rebirth expert who is the same as a 250 when facing reconstruction! Where is this protagonist? Is the heroine of the world a kind of person? Are all kinds of stunning women always gathered around this big thing?

All kinds of women appear, then lick them, and then become dogs

Isn't it disgusting for a person in modern society to first think about hunting to earn his first money?

Out of nowhere, the protagonist starts to be used as a bait, and then the protagonist doesn't want to say that it can solve the physical problem. It's not a buddy. If you have no strength and no background, why should people deal with you? Just find someone to tie you up 🤔

As soon as it involves women...

The routine writing method of 20 years ago has been eliminated

Hahaha, I gave up the book after reading Chapter 25 of the confrontation. This chapter exposed the author's outdated aesthetics, outdated writing techniques, and rigid thinking. This book will not be completed. He will be blocked and run away.

There are too many bugs. The protagonist travels to this game and remembers the rituals and recipes. I just don't remember the exercises.

In just over 20 chapters, three stunning beauties pop up. What do you want to do?

The top grade Dao foundation is only a hundred times that of the ordinary low grade Dao foundation. I don't even understand cheating. Anyone who achieves something has either cheating or extraordinary talent. Hasn't the author learned much about geniuses? ? The difference between geniuses and us ordinary people is clouds and mud. Similar to the author's setting, the highest level of Taoism (genius) is a hundred times higher than the lowest level (ordinary people)? ? The author is very careful in setting the protagonists to be obscene and trivial. The author goes to understand how big the gap is between these geniuses and ordinary people.

Shennong is dead! It was written stupidly... The author writes a story about a modern person who traveled through the era of spiritual revival ruled by feudal emperors and acted as a dog, cow, horse, and savior for NPCs in the game.

It's not pleasant to watch at all. All kinds of pressures are placed on the protagonist to suppress the combat power, but that skill, which is obviously a basic skill, was LV 9 a few months ago? If it appears again later, it will be LV 10. It's just not perfect. Hey, I just don't practice. I say I want to get traits as soon as possible to increase combat power, but I just don't practice. All the resources and techniques are the strongest and first-class. Alas, it takes thirty or fifty moves to defeat an enemy. Finally, I said It was solved in a few minutes, but judging from your description, it doesn't look like it was solved easily. Every time I was beaten, I collapsed. There was also the part in the desert that I originally planned to leave alone, but ended up showing up out of nowhere because I didn't want people to die there. Didn't you think the injustice of the death was unexpected? Why didn't you think so before? Then you can just show up and beat people to death a few times, but in the end you were almost beaten to death, and you still pretended to be that way. In the end, you only won by using a trick that puts you at the bottom of the box. Is there any need to pretend? Every time I see the protagonist pretending to be cool, I feel very unhappy. If you want to pretend, you will be hacked to death a few times. It makes you look powerful and makes people feel that you are really cool. But after you finish pretending, you will hack the person thirty or fifty times. It's so fucking embarrassing. I don't feel anything at all.

Apart from anything else, there is a Daoji setting in your game People with strong Daoji not only upgrade faster (when they break through the realm, they fly as fast as a rocket), they will not be stuck in the level stage (when they prove to be true immortals, they can easily obtain the fruit status without too much pursuit), they even determine their own exclusive skills (Daoji breeds magical powers), and the speed of magic regeneration (the efficiency ratio of the highest level is medium). (Exceeding the quality by dozens of times) Then this game determines that there are countless Taoist skills, which are difficult for players to obtain (the protagonist relies on the Immortal Sutra to lay a solid foundation in the early stage and cast a Taoji that suits him only after he understands the rules and barely has a place in the later stage) And the Taoji is basically decided when the player is still in the novice village in the early stage, and it is not sure whether it can be modified. Then the question is, who is playing this crappy game of yours?

I don't understand, a cultivator with the advantage of being a prophet works as a dog repairman in a feudal empire (maybe the author wants to say it's modern society, but you wrote about an emperor and a prince)!

I feel like the previous chapter was pretty good, but Chapter 25 is a direct poison, leaving no room for error. When Shennong came, he had to dig a hole with his feet and then bury himself in it.

As I said before, this book was originally about infiltrating into the game. The biggest golden fingers are the prophet and the panel. In the past, it was fine to just pursue the skills everywhere. According to the profile of the protagonist in the main line of seeking magic, he also had a bit of fun. After joining the special bureau in the last few chapters, has he become a scheming and thoughtful person? I don't know where my confidence lies when I'm engaging in power-based tactics, but I feel like I'm holding on to my wisdom every day. I'm meticulous and carefree. Doesn't the writing feel very abrupt? It's like his personality suddenly evolved from "Han Paopao" to "Sima Yi"! It's just abrupt! Unexpected! Unexpected!

After settling down, the protagonist was well written in the beginning, but what should I say later on? I felt that I was superior, knew everything, knew everything, and female characters such as empresses appeared. Do you think it is good when you read this book?

If you contact a big shot too early, what qualifications does the protagonist have? Without a background, exposure of strength is the fate of Slice

The opening routine is too old, and the setting is disconnected from the plot.

Once readers connect the novel to the game, they lose their sense of involvement with the protagonist, and the background and setting lose their seriousness. The loading and resurrection attributes of the game naturally erode the real atmosphere created by any language.

You can give some exercises settings for refining Qi, refining body, refining God, etc.

You describe too much about the exercises and practice, but there is very little advancement in the story.

I saw the protagonist cast a few small spells and said to use up all the blue. Then he went up to fight with the knife and was speechless. .

What era is the plot of the obsolete goods? Did the author just come out of the mountains and forests to find a job?

I don't know if Pig's Knuckle is trash or if there's something wrong with the setting. It stands to reason that Pig's Knuckle was powerful before and should have no shortage of top-level techniques. Even if he didn't have top-level techniques, where would the mainstream techniques he practiced go? But after time travel, he doesn't know any of the techniques.

I cut the book, and I want to write a new book immediately. I think the author should stop doing useless work and improve his plot concept first. I have a collection of 10,000, but the results are very poor. It is obvious that the results in the later chapters are very poor, which means that the first chapters are still OK, but the hips are stretched later. Later, the author has written more than 300 chapters, and the author level is still lv1, which also clearly shows the problem. If you don't reflect on and modify your plot concepts, and blindly open a new book, the author will have a higher chance of flopping in the next book.

If I were 17 years old and saw that command, I would think it was okay. I am already 34 and it bothers me when I see that name. Still testing this way and that. The writing in this paragraph is not in line with the contemporary version. I don't know what will happen next, so I won't read it. And don't you think that name is embarrassing? What is the difference between Long Aotian and Long Aotian?

Author, I suggest you delete Chapter 19, really