On Top of the Tower!

What I want to complain about is, can the protagonist not have so many psychological changes, such as sudden shocks and heartbeats, etc. There are too many various psychological changes, and he feels more mortal than a mortal. No matter how many things he goes through, he does not make any progress, no matter how much his strength increases, how much experience he has, he is always shocked and shocked, and no matter what he encounters, there are a lot of psychological manifestations. To be honest, this kind of has no charisma, just like a gangster. He also plays some old and bad jokes every now and then, which makes him lose his sense of immersion. I may have been a little harsh.

It's really time to speed up. Don't say that fellow practitioners of the Three Paths will slow down the speed. It's pure nonsense. You set it yourself. Increasing qi and blood can also strengthen the spirit. Strengthening qi training can also strengthen the spirit. The three of essence, energy and spirit are not separate. Even if you only practice one, the other two will not be able to slow down too much. Therefore, each item will promote the other two. When combined, the training speed should be faster.

Author, you won't be the same editor as Wu Chaojie, right? He was also the editor who told him that the title of his book was not good and asked him to change the name. Originally it seemed to be an abyss with an equipment bar, but the details are not clear, but the title of the book has the background of the abyss and the equipment bar as the protagonists Goldfinger and Cool Point. As a result, the editor asked me to change it to Penetrate the Abyss starting from the world of martial arts. It was just a theme, background, and main plot. Goldfinger is completely gone. Honestly, why do readers care about the main plot? Doesn't every book become more powerful and powerful? Unless you regret your past with the humanities, aren't the main lines exactly the same? Anyway, if he had used the title Balabala from the Martial Arts World from the beginning, if I pursued him as the author and kept reading, I would have to give him more than 500,000 words before I killed him. Serious readers looking for new books don't look to see if there are elements in the title that interest them? He is the abyss, and it would be cool to add more equipment slots. As for whether the first world is a martial arts world, a world of cultivation, or a world of fighting spirit, is there any difference? Are you guys going to see the multi-equipment column Kai Wushuang, or are you going to see something about the world of martial arts? He was fooled by the editor into forgetting the highlight of his book. But he is an old author and has a group of fans. It was also published on the 1st and published in Sanjiang, and then he changed it. I'm too lazy to say it. Anyway, whether or not his situation changes, it's just that. After it is changed, it won't be much better or worse. Even if it is changed to the three words "fighting the abyss", there won't be much difference. The follow-up will purely depend on how well he writes. The title of the book has already served its purpose. Changing the title might be able to deceive a few new readers. But the author is you. . . The recommendation process is working, and that's when the title of the book is most effective. What do you think you should do to attract interested readers for your book? What is the biggest selling point of your book? Isn't the biggest selling point of your book right now the subject matter [Tower] and [Each book has an awesome talent]? You are not a master of writing novels that attract fans, and you are not even a semi-platinum writer who is trying to adapt this book. What kind of B-style do you want in the title of your book? To put it bluntly, you haven't become a god yet. What do you think of a new account without fans? [Liu Bei: I can't enjoy it anymore? B box? Well, it's almost one o'clock, I'm going to sleep, and I don't want to continue typing. I have so much nonsense, I just want to express my own opinions and persuade you, and I just want to bb it on a whim. Author, you don't have to think too much. You can change it if you want. Anyway, I have already read your book. Whether or not you change the title is none of my business. Chun suddenly remembered that both of you authors were scolded by editors for having rubbish titles and asked you to change them, but I was attracted by the titles of your books and read them. To put it bluntly, the current readers of you and him are all readers attracted by the original title of the book, and I have not seen any posts in the book that think your book title is too low. They are just editors bb. If you really change the title of the book, the new readers you attract will definitely be quite different from the current group's pursuit of the book. Nonsense is that if you create a high B-style book title such as On the Tower, then your writing style will be more high-B style. On the contrary, other elements such as logic, plot structure, etc. Will be sacrificed. . . The writing style has changed, and the current group of readers will leave, and there will be no new readers who like the current title. If you don't change your writing style, there will be fewer new readers. To say no nonsense is still too much nonsense. Author, think about it yourself with confidence.

I have read more than 300 chapters and will give you my personal opinion. The characters in this book are lackluster. If you give them to a few teammates and then act alone, what is the point of having teammates? The daily drama in the main world is a mess. His cousin, everyone treats you like shit, and you still show off your authority to save people when something goes wrong. I don't know what it means to write this kind of plot. I want to start a harem, and the emotional drama is written in a way that makes me embarrassed. There are still a lot of meaningless descriptions of water, so why not just write down the results? Why do you write down details about skill and talent point upgrades without any changes every time you don't click on them? Can you just tell me what effect the talent has and how much it costs to upgrade it to a level? This thing is really disgusting, and the way the task is triggered is too deliberate. It should be the protagonist doing a series of things to trigger the hiding, instead of taking the hidden task and giving out benefits while walking on the road. The Twilight Witch can be considered the first harem, but she doesn't even have a name.

What does this mean? I don't know the meaning. This book title is really bad for a web article.

This golden red is so casual. That's it from the beginning

The cheats are too big. There are a lot of high-level things in the novice copy, and they are crazy to cheat the protagonist. I don't know what else to write about later. No wonder the results are not good.

The description of the protagonist's parents is too embarrassing. After a while, nothing happens, but he frowns. This emotional expression is too rich. Impression reading sense, those at the bottom should know better what extraordinary means, isn't it just about turning over? The people at the bottom help everyone know how to fear the extraordinary, but the relatives around the protagonist do not take the extraordinary seriously. Will there be stories about parents urging marriage, giving birth to children, and then the protagonist smiles bitterly?

Moreover, the characteristics of the Night Watchman are not very good. It is not cool enough. It is not that the identity is not good, but the design is not very good. When you light the night watch lamp, you need to use energy and blood. You need to use a little less energy and blood. Even if it can be replenished, the pleasure is not enough to stimulate the protagonist's driving force to fight monsters. It should be designed so that monster flesh and blood can be used as burning objects. In this way, watching monsters fight is very satisfying.

The introduction is so poorly written, it's so confusing. This whole paragraph can be summed up as cyber cultivating immortality.

Change the last sentence in your resume from "See Daozu" to "See College Students!" Will this deceive a few more people into killing them?

I've read this book title several times, but I don't want to click on it 😅

College students are so embarrassed, so the doctor can't wave his hand to destroy the stars 🙂🙂🙂

Why do today's novels always describe techniques as successful techniques? For example: Five Tigers Breaking Door Knife is a fighting technique. Many novels often use practice to improve cultivation. Since this thing is written, it means that there are fundamental techniques and techniques in it.

Fairy role-playing is boring. If you choose Superman, it will look 10 times better.

Very good🙂🙂🙂. I thought it was not very good, but I didn't expect that I tried my best to patch it.

Author, did you do something, or did you do something less? Or did you forget to do something? Something's wrong with the grades.

Isn't this Sanjiang Book? There are only about twenty discussion posts? Has the back of this book collapsed?

The Lord of Witches... I'm a little afraid to click on it because I'm afraid it's another book that won't advance the plot without a woman.

Originally, the upper levels of the world killed tower climbers and took away their organs and brains. Now that the tower has started recruiting tower climbers, should their organs be passed on together? As a result, the talents of the tower climbers were not recruited away by others using their brains and organs? So do I think so, this is also a way to avoid being drafted! After all, when I become a practitioner, I can just seize other people's bodies or replace their brains with others, let others work hard to get the benefits, and then exploit them. If I do this, I will be directly invincible and my talent will be wasted. If it can be passed on, then is it the most wasteful way to kill people who climb the tower to harvest their organs?

I've finished watching Tun, so I'll add an update. The plot is pretty good so far. Try not to delay upgrading. Come on.

This book is still a bit too advanced, and the "a little uncomfortable" culture is too advanced.

" "Too many. It looks annoying

Give it a try

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When is not enough

Why is such a good book not so popular? I would like to make a few comments from the author, which are for reference only and are not malicious. 1. This teammate is indeed sometimes redundant. I know the author doesn't really want to write about knives, but properly writing the supporting characters to death can give people a feeling like O. Henry. For example, if Bai Xiaotian dies, the story of his sister becoming a tower climber can be introduced the following year. At least it will look fresh to everyone. 2. The protagonist's solo actions are indeed very good, but sometimes he is still too holy. It feels like a worldly master who does not hold grudges at all. 2. The realistic plot is too watery and boring, so it is better to write less. This is not an author problem, it is a common problem among too many unlimited streaming authors. To be honest, the author's realistic content is really not too poisonous except for being boring, but for most readers of Infinite Streaming, the realistic word count itself is a poisonous point (the realistic content I am talking about does not include plots to improve things such as robbing things, trading, and practicing martial arts).

Pig's feet have the ability to write about the real world

There is a saying, this kind of book can suppress the combat power and it is amazing, no wonder it is thrown into the street

There are too few updates and it's not enough to watch.