Immortal Cultivation: I Have a Black and Yellow Pagoda

When I wrote this introduction, I thought you wrote A Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality. . .

The protagonist is Jin Fan, who is re-cultivating. The way he writes is consistent with how he behaves in the world. There is no obvious sense of intelligence reduction, and the feeling of strategizing in the early stage is also very comfortable. I have read a lot of immortality books, and I am a bookworm. I would like to make the following suggestions: Don't exaggerate the enemy's level, don't be jealous of women, and don't have enemies that make the protagonist feel too powerless. The development of the sect should not be too outrageous. After the sect is out of danger, it is recommended to go out to look for opportunities. After the foundation is established, the pace can be slowed down, and some good-looking plots of major events can be written. Now that I see it, I think it looks very good, and I look forward to the author's big update 😌

There are two serious weaknesses in this book. The first life travels through time and space, and there is no golden finger. Where does the opportunity come from? ? There are also four floors of Xuanhuang Tower, which are like semi-finished products, defective products, and their abilities are extremely weak. This shows that the author's imagination is not good. The writing is good, but it is too retro and calm.

I always feel that you are a sect-style person, and I never have the desire to continue watching.

Is this the only effect of golden fingers?

Dear readers, if you have any ideas or suggestions about this book, you can mention them here.

It's okay, but the golden elixir has been rebuilt, and the upgrade is a bit slow. I feel like the word count is a bit low.

It's quite satisfactory, and it's considered good food.

Stopped updating? Are you ready to be a eunuch?

Come on, the writing is actually pretty good, but it's just bland, and there is only one protagonist with characteristics and mission arcs. Think more about character creation, such as Ruha, a talented and tenacious junior in the late sect, a Taoist friend who admires each other and becomes a confidant, an enemy who hates but understands and appreciates, an elder who is paranoid but loves, a young man whose heart is clouded by a sudden change... More advanced and powerful techniques and opponents should be introduced, and more suspenseful storylines, etc. I don't have much rice left, so I only have two for you.

The protagonist's combat power fluctuates. He can be killed in the late stage of foundation building, but it is also very difficult to kill in the early stage of foundation building. And seeing Fangshi being slaughtered here makes me very, very speechless. During the Fangshi auction, there were at least twenty or thirty foundation building stages in Fangshi. However, these twenty or thirty foundation stages were defeated by a dozen demon cultivators. These righteous monks were like a group of pigs. He would just watch the show from the side, and then he would be massacred, and he would be in a state of disarray.

The writing is okay, but the plot has quite a few quirks.

There are only two plug-ins in the introduction, and there are no plug-ins.

The update is too slow, it's suitable to read it every half a year

It's very well written and very close to my heart. It's the best one I've seen in recent times.

Why don't we see the protagonist using his natal magic weapon?

Brother, the update is too slow. It's awesome. I'll update it diligently. God rewards those who work hard.

The cultivating forces in the book recruit monks from the territory to fight, but there is no system such as contribution points to exchange for treasures, and no benefits are paid. Then will these recruited people contribute?