
Mortal: Do You Have the Sky Bottle? I Have a Dust Song Pot
凡人:你有掌天瓶?我有尘歌壶
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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The author is a eunuch, the author is actually a eunuch
Recently, there has been an evil trend in the fandom. As long as the girl is not accepted, then she is a gift. As long as she has made a small deal with Han Li, she is a nanny. If she does not steal his opportunity with Han Li, she is an old slave. I hope the author will not be affected by comments like this when he sees them. I think your book is well written. I saw it from another mortal fan, and I think what he said is very good. You can refer to it. New authors can easily be led astray by readers, so writing at your own pace is fine.
How could a Dr. Mo waste so much pen and ink? I can't find any reason to continue reading. Reading the table of contents gives me a headache.
Not satisfactory!
The anime plot of this book is mixed with the plot of the original book! Both sides are unhappy! Anyway, I, a fan of the original novel, can't stand it anymore! The only advantage is that the golden finger is opened very much, and the combat power is not reduced!
I would like to reply very seriously to someone who said that the protagonist's cheats are too powerful.
First of all, let me tell readers who don't know the source of the plug-in that the golden finger of Chensong Pot is not my own creation, but comes from the home system in a domestic game called "Genshin Impact" - Chensong Pot. As for the question of whether the setting of the Dust Song Pot in this book is too powerful... I can only say that everyone who has played the game should know that so far I have only changed the setting so that the seeds can continue to grow after they mature. In the game, no matter what seeds or crops are planted in the spiritual field in the Chensong Pot, it takes three days to mature. To be precise, it is 2 days and 22 hours, which is faster than the 3 days I set. If you don't pick them after they're ripe, they'll just leave them there. My only original idea is that if you don't pick them after they're ripe, there will be another vintage every three days. As for things like cave treasure money and mysterious merchants, they all come with the Chensong Pot itself. The things sold there are all things in the game. I can't still sell Genshin Impact things in the mortal world, right? So the only change was to localize the products. And I have restricted the items in the store, indicating that the items sold in it can be purchased in any store on the market. Just like the system mall that comes with many RPG games, the items that can be purchased directly are basically garbage. Because of this, even the raw materials for elixirs such as the Foundation Establishment Pill, which are used during the Qi training period, are not available. After all, the raw materials for refining the Foundation Establishment Pill are not available on the market. And speaking of being too strong! I haven't even written about the blacksmith shop and synthesis table in the Chensong Kettle. That one is truly abnormal. It has 100% refining efficiency and is fully automatic. You don't need to know how to forge or refine. As long as you prepare the blueprints and materials, it will automatically forge the best magical weapons for you and automatically refine various potions (elixirs) for you. You always say that the plug-in is too powerful, so I don't even dare to put the blacksmith shop and the synthesis table. Also, the time in the Chensong Pot can be adjusted at will. If the hour hand is turned in one circle, the time in the Chensong Pot will indicate that one day has passed, but in reality it has only passed a few seconds. To be honest, this can be developed. For example, one day in the outside world and one year in the Chenge Pot, I haven't implemented this function yet, just because I am afraid that you will say that the plug-in is too big. Even in order to balance the plug-in, I also forcibly set the level of the Chensong Pot to be incompatible. You can only open the next cave after upgrading the current cave, and the level of the next cave must be upgraded again, otherwise you can switch at will in the game. Of course many people will say that these are not all settings in the game. The game will definitely design various mechanisms for the convenience of players. Yes! Then take a look at what the title of my book is? His name is Chengehu! Is he the Dust Song Pot in the game? It's not a deck, it's Dustsong Pot, so is there any problem with inheriting the mechanics from the game? Even Adu and Ayuan, these two characters are not my own characters, but the ones that come with Chensong Kettle. In the game Genshin Impact, immortals are basically transformed from animals. In addition to having the ability to move mountains and reclaim seas, each of them has lived for at least four thousand years (Liyue Port has a history of 3,600 years, and immortals existed before Liyue Port was established.) For "immortals" who are transformed from animals and have lived for at least 4,000 years and have the ability to move mountains and reclaim seas, I have set the Yuanhou very conservatively, after all, Yuanying can only live for more than a thousand years. Finally, to summarize, whether Gold Finger is strong or not does not depend on Gold Finger itself, but on the protagonist or the author's development of Gold Finger. Just like the realization of the cave treasure money, and the borrowing of the power of Adu and Ayuan, if these authors don't write about it, doesn't it mean there is nothing? Since there are two bosses from the Queen of Yuan in the Chensong Pot, although they cannot leave the Chensong Pot, that doesn't mean they can't be used, right? The things in Dongtianbaoqian Mall are garbage to the protagonist, but these garbage can also be used for cash, right?
What's the purpose of going to all this trouble to recruit Dr. Mo? Don't understand.
Where is the mysterious businessman? Have you forgotten this setting? Let me tell you a little bit about what I bought.
Shennong is here
The author of the last chapter was just writing randomly. As soon as the bloody forbidden area is reached, the elixir must be handed over to the Danjie elder who leads the team. Return to the sect and distribute the Foundation Establishment Pill. As a result, Master Qi Xuan was able to bring the elixir back to the sect, but was robbed by people within the sect; And after he robbed it, he practiced the foundation building pill and successfully built the foundation very quickly. Furthermore, Master Qi Xuan, a casual cultivator who has reached the 13th level of Qi Refining, does not even have the skill to earn cultivation resources, so he expects the few resources given by the sect. Moreover, after Master Qi Xuan's enemy successfully established the foundation, he has been suppressing Master Qi Xuan and depriving him of sect resources and mission rewards. After Master Qi Xuan resigned from the sect, he did not pursue and kill Master Qi Xuan.
I don't really like to engage in this kind of force, and you can't guarantee your loyalty. Those two guys can't get out of the pot. I don't know where the confidence comes from. The rhythm was good. In a few years, when the pot is full, you can start troubles. Now that you expose yourself in front of everyone, the key is to pretend. It's not like there are really two Yuan queen thugs. They are really floating. I don't know if they are already high.
What the hell is the author writing about? Have you ever read novels about mortals cultivating immortality? No one among the weapon-refining monks can beat the foundation-building monks, let alone kill them. The mana gap between two different realms cannot be bridged by some talismans. Moreover, the Black Evil Sect does not have a Foundation-Building Pill. If the Black Evil Religion has a Foundation-Building Pill, why bother to catch many monks for blood sacrifices. You won't read a fan novel in which the protagonist scribbles like this.
In fact, I don't understand why some people like to see girls in their fanfics. If the fanfic can write good female characters and also write ghost fanfics, it won't make much money to just write original works.
I only read Chapter 30, and I couldn't stand it anymore. I'm too lazy to read it. Let me tell you my feelings. As for whether it's too big or not, the way the author writes it, it doesn't matter whether it's big or not. Because the protagonist gives me the feeling of a nanny with a camera attached. The main character is also a bit too naive (or innocent?), And I feel the author is the same. At Qixuanmen, he directly told Han Li the common sense of cultivating immortals. As an old slave, Lao Mo said that he would give his third daughter to the protagonist. Later, the protagonist actually thought that if he agreed, he might call Lao Mo his father-in-law. He also sent his mother a message to Lao Mo, who was an old slave, and then went there to play house666. There are still some details left unsaid in these paragraphs. On these few points, I think there is no need to say more about everything in the article. I can watch it and find it interesting. I think you are this 👍
What are you writing about? It's all water after Dr. Mo wrote it for so long.
The subject matter is good, the beginning is thoughtful, and the writing is poor.
What I'm watching is cultivating immortals, not the life of a mortal. Can you please stop writing that plot about Mr. Mo? Grinding and chirping.
I always feel that too many people think too much of Han Li. If people know about such a valuable treasure in the bottle, or others give it to Han Li, it is okay at first, but as time goes by, their thoughts will change. How can I repay such a great favor to the bottle?
Accept it, or I will look down upon you if you don't accept it. Anyway, doesn't the Hidden Moon Sect advocate dual cultivation? Then let her and the protagonist practice dual cultivation, which will be beneficial to both parties. And you can also write that the ancestor of the Hidden Moon Sect allows Nangong Wan to marry the protagonist. Anyway, it's not impossible for the Hidden Moon Sect to do it. Moreover, Nangong Wan herself has the spiritual root of heaven, and her cultivation qualifications are incredible. She will not be a drag on the protagonist, but can be a help. Why not accept the benefits? Just because some readers said that he does not like Nangong Wan? So are you the author or is he the author? If he doesn't like it, just let him write it himself. As for Samsara Han Li? That's even more nonsense. Gan Rushuang and Nangong Wan are not the same person. Otherwise, Samsara Han Li would let Han Li in this world sleep with Nangong Wan? Just like you would let yourself in the parallel world sleep with your wife? In the final analysis, Nangong Wan is Nangong Wan, and Gan Rushuang is Gan Rushuang. Although I have only read the Immortal World chapter once, in my memory it is Nangong Wan. Even though she has gained Gan Rushuang's memory, she still only recognizes herself as Nangong Wan. In the final analysis, two people are not the same person. Talking about reincarnation is nonsense. They are not from the same world line. Where can reincarnation come from? So there is no need to worry about reincarnation Han Li. If he really loved his wife so much, then it would be impossible for Han Li in this world to have a relationship with Nangong Wan. And you believe me, the marriage route can really be written. After all, this is what the Hidden Moon Sect did in the original work. In order to hold Wei Wuya's thigh tightly, he forced Nangong Wan to marry his nephew. So why can't Nangong Wan be forced to marry the protagonist this time? In this way, there is no need for emotional cultivation. Both sides get what they need. If you really want to write about feelings, won't it work to keep them in love for a long time? Don't write about the Bloody Forbidden Land again. To be honest, I feel that the plot of this mystery is really a bit poisonous.
The golden finger is too exaggerated. It is too extraordinary to expose your golden finger in front of so many people just after cultivating immortality.
Isn't the effect of this golden finger too exaggerated? It has become a causal artifact.
Water master
Wow wow wow! Chapter 155 just arrived at the Bloody Forbidden Land! Slipping away
Really spare me. I came here to read the novel, not the Xinhua Dictionary. To write a small plot requires a large amount of explanation. It doesn't read coherently at all.
Just scribbling, you don't understand the basic structure of mortals at all. Each major realm is the evolution of life levels. Spiritual consciousness, body, and magic power are all the differences between heaven and earth. Divine consciousness represents the attack distance. A high realm can defeat a low realm, but a low realm cannot even fight back. Flesh represents defense and attack power, just like the difference between wood and iron. Mana is transformed from gaseous, liquid, and solid states.
Goldfinger is just Goldfinger. It has to have some inexplicable settings and put some personal things in it. It's not necessary. Who cares about those messy settings? Not everyone knows what you are talking about. Goldfinger is inexplicable and the plot is too cheesy.
More than 150 chapters have passed before the Bloody Forbidden Land dungeon begins 👍
One day outside the Dust Song Pot and one year inside. How to calculate the lifespan of the protagonist?
Bye-Bye
To be honest, I started reading this book with less than 100 chapters. I really wanted to read it. It wasn't until more than 200 chapters that I started to read it. But when I read the comment section, it said that it took more than 150 chapters to reach the bloody forbidden land. What's more, in the world of cultivating immortals, it said that destiny cannot be violated (in the end, even Nangong Wan didn't take it). I can only say that it's rubbish.
One of the best novels, very enjoyable, no need for eunuchs!
It's really poisonous to find girls for your external avatars.