Primordial World: Senior Brother, Oh Senior Brother, I'm Steadier Than You!

Under the aura of Gou Sheng, no matter how Gou you do it, you won't be as outstanding as others. You need to write the opposite, with the protagonist having full cultivation talents, being more domineering, and moving forward indomitably. If you have nothing to do, cheat Gou Shou to get something to watch.

A little suggestion, brother, this book is already at its peak. No matter how you write about stability, it is just copying a cat. It is better to write about contrast. If you are long-lived and stable, you will be reckless. You can do whatever you want. It complements longevity. You go to the front for him to resist the thunder, and he will make plans behind you to wipe his ass. It is mutually beneficial. Don't accept the original female protagonist (key minefield, but you can accept Chang'e and others) (Xi He, etc.). The plot can be slightly changed during this period. For example, Qi Yuan is not dead, Jiang Ziya can be replaced, Lingshan can be more miserable, the male protagonist Changshou joins the harem group and the Chanjiao Jiejiao Renjiao to attack the Western Sect, which leads to the fall of the Western Sages. In the end, the original book is completed with the discussion of Dao Hongjun, and you can write that the protagonist and Li Changshou guide Senior Lang to take the lead.

In the first chapter, you were advised to quit. Is this because you were afraid that Hongjun wouldn't know that you were a time traveler?

It's the first time I've seen my senior brother, a fanfic, let me have a taste 😏

I checked back and the comment was deleted. I still have to say it. The author has definitely not read the original work carefully. If you have seen it, you will know that this prehistoric world is actually a newborn world that was polluted by the first time traveler. Gou Shengcheng was like this and barely managed to avoid being killed. Do you know who the story traveler is? Believe it or not, he was wiped out as soon as he passed through it? That world was polluted by memes.

In Gou Dao's writing, you have to highlight a contrast to make it interesting, instead of adding a dispensable you to the original plot. Not many people will read your way of writing. If you want people to pay to read the book, you have to be innovative.

I have been practicing the "Shen Nong Jing" for more than three years. I thought I was invulnerable to all poisons, but I didn't expect that I couldn't survive the eighth chapter under this book! There are really countless heroes in this world!

It's better to open Wushuang and there is a contrast. If you continue to gou, do you think people haven't seen enough?

How can I put it, it's just pure garbage.

Oops, I don't know how you want to write it. Originally, senior brother, his animations are very contrasting, and Li Changshou is also a time traveler. Equivalent to. Many fanfics about senior brothers make Li Changshou look like a native. He doesn't understand anything, and he is the only one who wakes up. In fact, he has replaced Li Changshou's ecological niche. Then according to Li Changshou's original routine, he just touched it all the way and copied the book.