A Million Ways to Die in Tales of Herding Gods

Small village, strongman, orphan, grand background – these have all become the signature tropes of Zhaizhu. Although formulaic, the early and middle parts of Shepherd's Tale were quite enjoyable, but the later parts became purely boring. Especially after becoming Shepherd Heavenly Venerable, the plot turned into a palace intrigue.

Bad review. The protagonist actually let the founder of the Heavenly Demon Sect succeed. Did they really think this forced plot would be satisfying?

Dude, your original book had a better art style and was quite well written, why was it deleted?

Dude, you make so many typos. In the previous chapters, you kept writing "Mu'er" as "Mu'er". Could you please fix it?

I really don't understand why the protagonist has to become the leader of the Heavenly Demon Cult. And the way it's written is absolutely disgusting. If the protagonist wanted to be the leader himself, then the writing would be fine. But you write that he doesn't want to be the leader, and then you arrange this kind of plot—isn't that hypocritical? It would be better to just let Qin Mu become the leader himself, like in the original novel.

I suggest the protagonist be more serious and earnest to create a sense of immersion. I haven't seen many stories with over 10,000 subscribers featuring a petty thug, and there are very few high-quality ones. There are plenty of comedic stories, where the humor comes naturally from the dialogue.

The best way to write fanfiction is to add an extra variable to the existing story framework, not to marginalize the original protagonist and put yourself in their shoes like you have done. Writing like this is like watching "The Legend of the Shepherd God" again; what's the point? You might as well just read the original story—at least the original writer's style is better than yours.

While the battles are undeniably exhilarating, constant fighting gets a bit monotonous. It wouldn't be a problem if there weren't many attractive female characters in the world, but there are just too many, especially the female character models in anime – they're truly beautiful. It would be a shame not to add a few.

What happened to the last book by Big Cat whose art style was better than yours?

The rest of the text is so boring, it's just filler.