Honghuang: Senior Brother, Senior Brother, I Am More Stable Than You

Under the aura of Gou Sheng, no matter how Gou you do it, you won't be as outstanding as others. You need to write the opposite, with the protagonist having full cultivation talents, being more domineering, and moving forward indomitably. If you have nothing to do, cheat Gou Shou to get something to watch.

A little suggestion, brother, this book is already at its peak. No matter how you write about stability, it is just copying a cat. It is better to write about contrast. If you are long-lived and stable, you will be reckless. You can do whatever you want. It complements longevity. You go to the front for him to resist the thunder, and he will make plans behind you to wipe his ass. It is mutually beneficial. Don't accept the original female protagonist (key minefield, but you can accept Chang'e and others) (Xi He, etc.). The plot can be slightly changed during this period. For example, Qi Yuan is not dead, Jiang Ziya can be replaced, Lingshan can be more miserable, the male protagonist Changshou joins the harem group and the Chanjiao Jiejiao Renjiao to attack the Western Sect, which leads to the fall of the Western Sages. In the end, the original book is completed with the discussion of Dao Hongjun, and you can write that the protagonist and Li Changshou guide Senior Lang to take the lead.

In the first chapter, you were advised to quit. Is this because you were afraid that Hongjun wouldn't know that you were a time traveler?

It's the first time I've seen my senior brother, a fanfic, let me have a taste 😏

I checked back and the comment was deleted. I still have to say it. The author has definitely not read the original work carefully. If you have seen it, you will know that this prehistoric world is actually a newborn world that was polluted by the first time traveler. Gou Shengcheng was like this and barely managed to avoid being killed. Do you know who the story traveler is? Believe it or not, he was wiped out as soon as he passed through it? That world was polluted by memes.

In Gou Dao's writing, you have to highlight a contrast to make it interesting, instead of adding a dispensable you to the original plot. Not many people will read your way of writing. If you want people to pay to read the book, you have to be innovative.

It's better to open Wushuang and there is a contrast. If you continue to gou, do you think people haven't seen enough?

I have been practicing the "Shen Nong Jing" for more than three years. I thought I was invulnerable to all poisons, but I didn't expect that I couldn't survive the eighth chapter under this book! There are really countless heroes in this world!

How can I put it, it's just pure garbage.

The protagonist is written as a dispensable character, with no desire or desire, and the interactions with the master and others also feel stiff.

There's nothing particularly outstanding about it. If it doesn't cost money, I can just watch it out of boredom, but if it charges a fee, I'll give it up decisively. This is probably the case in this novel.

Oops, I don't know how you want to write it. Originally, senior brother, his animations are very contrasting, and Li Changshou is also a time traveler. Equivalent to. Many fanfics about senior brothers make Li Changshou look like a native. He doesn't understand anything, and he is the only one who wakes up. In fact, he has replaced Li Changshou's ecological niche. Then according to Li Changshou's original routine, he just touched it all the way and copied the book.

666 Pig's feet replaced Changshou's apprenticeship with Renjiao, and also used their little master Xuandu

This kind of fan fiction should be completely opposite to the protagonist's personality to be attractive. Through language, the protagonist's behavior is completely opposite, such as a word "mang", highlighting a word "mang", or a character in a sentence.

You write a replica of me, brother, and the comments are that I don't even want to read them.

The comment section is a bit picky. To be honest, the author writes very well. Keep up the good work and don't be pigeonholed.

The title of the book is wrong, it should be "You are already cultivating immortality, but you still have to be forced to go on a blind date"

This is my first time reading a fanfic of Senior Brother, is there anything I need to pay attention to?

The ending was pretty bad, but it was finally over. The mid-term was boring and boring, and I jumped straight to the end when I saw the mid-term. . . The ending is so rubbish😐

You look ugly, you will be charged for 25 chapters

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Senior brother, can people see it? Still the same person!

What's the use of reaching the Hunyuan Wuji Luo Jinxian? Isn't it better to just go to the Chaos Wuji Luo Jinxian?

I don't see how stable it is, but I know I'm in trouble, but I still keep leaning on it. Is this what is called stable?

Is the original Hongjun good or bad? Are the three Qings on good terms or are they separated?