Immortal Cultivation, I Have a Small World

I feel that the setting of this small world is a little low. The division into divisions and the giving of elixirs seem very deliberate. It is clearly the will of the world. It could have been written in a more advanced and elegant way.

Immortality and immortality start from selling condoms

The article about cultivating immortals also integrates the whole armor. The author himself writes it to the point of intracranial climax, and readers will only feel that it is a drama

The author is a self-deprecating type. There is no logic at all. Set fights before and after. The golden finger is opened quite wide, and the protagonist is mentally retarded and cannot use it.

Spiritual power, extract one layer from the small world. Where does the spiritual power of the creatures in the small world come from? It does not come from the small world. Turning from left hand to right hand is unnecessary.

Finally, we are no longer cultivating immortals in the slums. I don't know why so many authors write that a cultivator's life is worse than that of rich mortals.

After reading it on QQ, some of the things I said made me uncomfortable. Author, if you write dark novels, please mark it and don't waste my subscription. Also, the protagonist has a world that is stuck. Farming well is the way to invincibility. Is it necessary to use magic methods? People with poor qualifications will be forced to exchange their lifespan for cultivation, and they will have to sell their bodies to you after they are no longer useful. Just because the protagonist saved their ancestors? If the protagonist traveled to this world, would the protagonist be willing to do so? If other people in the small world see or notice it, will they still be grateful to the protagonist? Let me say here that I don't like to watch Madonna-type protagonists, but I like to watch the protagonists who are decisive in killing or independent, such as Han Li in Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. But I don't like watching this kind of dark protagonist who maliciously harms people. Here is a suggestion for the author: the principle of voluntariness. People with poor qualifications in the small world can voluntarily decide whether to exchange their lifespan for cultivation. When they are old or have exhausted their potential, they can voluntarily decide whether to sell their bodies. After the sale, they must compensate their descendants. If they set rules and clearly mark the price, many problems can be solved.

It's so outrageous. The protagonist receives protection fees for cooperating with others. He usually only charges half of his fellow disciples, just to do some things for them. He usually does small things that ordinary people can do. But at critical moments, he even asks for money (when the war is approaching, when the sect purchases materials, it is actually a benefit to the disciples, and the price will be half higher. . For the 3,000 pieces of spiritual stone, the sect gave them 4,500, but in the end it was only 3,800. This 3,800 still counts the protagonist's original money.) The key is why they should share the money with the protagonist. The protagonist also revealed the inside information to them, and they can make extra money by stocking up on this information. It's not a decent sect to listen to the nouns. If you do this, the author likes to use poison and disgust people.

The rest looks more and more like it was written by Ai

I feel that the number of combat power is a bit loose. The sect has one hundred thousand Qi training period, 200 foundation building, 8 golden elixirs, and one Nascent Soul. Is there such a lack of high-end combat power? A Nascent Soul-level force should have a lot of geniuses, not to mention that it has been developed for at least hundreds of thousands of years.

I'm looking for a book every day, and this one is okay for me. The plot is reasonable and cruel enough. People are like this. They can only blend in if they can't change themselves, instead of pretending to be aliens. The world of cultivating immortals is similar to caste in India. Each realm is a caste, and there are layers of exploitation. Each layer has every level of fun. In reality, India can't resist, let alone the world of cultivating immortals. This is a reasonable world.

Goldfinger has a small world, and the creatures reproduced in the small world will return 1% of their spiritual energy when released. The most rubbish return function in the early stage is talked about endlessly every day, and it costs a lot of money to do small things. Use resources to improve yourself, and when you grow up, you can take off the progress of the small world. The means of protecting the road are not based on hard power, but we engage in research and development every day. Do you think you are just playing games?

When the protagonist hears the conversation of passers-by and becomes confused, you will know what kind of character this protagonist is, a stinky loser with no temperament or character to cultivate immortality at all.

Haven't watched it yet. But I read the introduction. The small world will take away 1% of the spiritual power of the monks born in its own world to use it to increase the origin. But the source of a monk's spiritual power is the world itself. The world eats itself and loses 99% of it. How can it increase its source?

It's another book that says there's no way to break through foundation building without boiled eggs. After eating so many natural materials and treasures, it's just a bunch of numbers, useless, and such a good setting is wasted.

1. The pace has been too slow recently 2. I still feel that the protagonist of the small world has been set up. In order to maintain the B-level in the small world, he is too kind to mortals. I feel that the investment is not proportional to the gains. There are only rewards and no punishments? People are complex and inert. 3. The last dozen or so chapters have always been described in a chariot-like manner, which feels very watery. . .

This kind of writing is the most cruel.

There is no poison at the moment. The writing is very good and I have a high desire to read it. It has been added to the bookshelf. I have been chasing poison for a long time. I will give you a few tickets to support you.

The subject matter is good, but overall it's just sensationalism... And there's no plot.

Why does the fish at the beginning have to be sold? Find a place with water and throw some in every few days... As long as you don't lose money... It will explode exponentially in minutes.

The ideas are good, but the writing is not good and there are too many problems.

The latest and very good book

The upgrade of Xiu Xianwen is so slow now! It takes 800,000 words to form an elixir!

Come on, work hard, I'm optimistic about you, your writing is really good

Well written, not sloppy, the ideas are very clear, voted

Come on, the writing is still good, but I hope to write as much as possible about space farming.

Well, it looks like this book is no longer available.

Did the author cut it? Why didn't it update yesterday

There is no need to finish the introduction, even in today's fast-paced era

But there are many things that have not been explained