Qingwu Immortal Clan

This kind of author who only has one book and writes well really scares me. I always feel like some eunuch is trying to trick me again.

As shown in the picture (the contents of the first three chapters are intercepted). Since I often use AI to write and read water theory, I think I have a deeper understanding of AI's expression paradigm and language logic. Therefore, when I read the content of the first three chapters, I couldn't help but question the use of AI for many of the expressions in your article. First, like the use of "not", AI is often used to elicit what the author wants to express. For example, if you write "Theory comes from social practice", AI will generate "Theory is not a product of pure rationality, but a concentrated expression of social practice." Although this expression is very common, compared to others, your article has a strong sense of AI. Second, in terms of wording, description, and rhetoric, words such as "instinctive perception", "rooting and sprouting", "shooting stars" and "mirror", etc., Seem to fit the language, but when actually put into the text, they give people an abrupt feeling, as if you are looking at the Yangtze River, but you are saying that the water of the Yellow River comes from the sky. Third, the logic is too smooth. We often say that logic should be spoken, but in fact, even in paper writing, in a logical expression, there are often unsound logical expressions. In other words, the logic in the article is simply a model of linear logic. When we write articles, most of them are curved, with some explanations or side notes in the middle, because this is a necessary process for human thinking, but AI pays more attention to expressing this logic in the most direct and linear way. Finally, I don't know whether you are using it or not. Maybe the author's language is just like this. I am just expressing my views here. On the one hand, I hope to respond. Because I like to have no heroines, I saw someone recommending your book in the Wu Bar and came here because of its reputation. Do you really not feel that way? Or say you don't care or keep silent?

No, author, what do you think? If you kill a dozen mortals while mining, you will use your own foundation-building family to attack. Yes, the original intention of your writing was to attack the foundation-building family, but do you think this reason is reasonable? They can be beaten because of embezzlement of spiritual materials and spiritual stones that should be handed over, but it cannot be because of the death of a few mortals. What kind of bullshit reason is this? Are you going to beat them again if a few random people die in the future?

There won't be anyone who orders this book. The book's request for money is filled with AI texts.

I don't know why so many people like to compare this book with Xuanjian. I've also read Xuanjian, but I couldn't stand it after reading half of it. I don't deny that Xuanjian is a pretty good book, but it's too depressing. You might be plotted when you go out, you might be plotted when you practice a skill, you might be plotted when you get a chance. The whole article is to create a feeling that even if you drink water, you may be plotted. Once or twice is okay, but it is very annoying every time. However, the Qingwu Immortal Clan has just the right control. Whether it is rhythm, timing or text simplicity, they are no worse than ordinary people. It can only be said that radish and green vegetables have their own preferences.

After reading the free chapter, it is far from Xuanjian. I want to imitate it, but I don't copy it seriously.

It was said earlier that the calamity of redeeming gold was worn out after 200+ years (this also led to explanations from outsiders), and the latest chapter also said that the calamity of redeeming gold needs to be dealt with. It is a major change in the basic settings and cannot be written randomly.

Zifu, Zifu, if you like Zifu's broken realm so much, why don't you use Zifu's tricks? You have to use mortals' tricks. It's really off-putting.

After reading more than sixty chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The author's writing skills are good, but his writing skills are too showy. It looks like a bunch of names and adjectives stacked on top of each other. I forget the people and things in the main line as I read them, and I don't even know what they are about.

Let me tell you something, the first real king corner at the starting point appears 😃

You can quit after reading the sermon. The author no longer knows what to say.

Emmm, after reading more than 50 chapters, I felt so bored. The protagonist himself gave me the same feeling. Maybe it's because the geniuses are everywhere. The protagonist looks very average. The main alchemy and deputy assistant's improvement in strength is a bit hard to see. The group portrait is like this. I can't eat the fine chaff and ran away 😳

Updated to Chapter 70

It's all because Xuanjian is too slow, too watery and too draggy, but the rhythm of your writing is fast, refreshing and beautiful. Why is it starting to slow down now? Just when I'm about to feel good

After reading ten pictures, I feel that the author has not grasped the strength of the writing. Personally, I feel that the author used too much force. It's a good thing to use tools to polish articles, but you can't just leave it all to others... May I ask how this situation can be improved?

The dialogue throughout the whole story has basically no plot advancement. The most important thing is that everyone looks too indifferent and expressionless to feel the joy, anger, sorrow and joy at all. It is like watching a group of emotionless machines carrying out planned things in an orderly manner and then talking to each other. I am seriously tired of reading and skipping dozens of chapters without affecting the reading. After reading the sermon, the author has no content at all, so it is better to end it as soon as possible.

I saw this article on the shelf and it is really well written, but I have a few suggestions. A real family should not only include the unity and friendship between family members, but also the intrigues between family members. Especially how can there be no such things as big, second and third bedrooms? A small family has these, let alone a big family. It seems too rigid to only write about the warmth and affection between families.

It's a pure AI text, with various prefaces and postscripts, as well as a lot of talking about the wheel, and the important settings can be changed back and forth, which is very flexible.

What are these two chapters about? . .

What do you think is the plot function of writing so many juniors? If you want to express the power of the Golden Pill Immortal Clan from a lower cultivation perspective, you haven't written much about it? He also wrote that he was brought down by his inferior cultivator behind his back. . Shouldn't the main plot be about the protagonist resolving the intention of defeating the Aoki with gold, and planning the power/intention/Yu Run position of "Ming Yang"/"Qing Qi"/"Jiamu" or other fruit positions, increasing the Aoki path/training the Aoki fruit position/holding both fruits, etc. To gain "merit" to advance to the Taoist body? You can write about the immortal forces/plans of other golden elixirs to create conflicts, interspersed with the sect/the descendants of the Lin family/the true king manifesting his holiness in front of the lower cultivators/the golden elixir immortal clan sitting firmly on the Diaoyutai... And other plots that reflect the real style. There is a lot to learn from. Next door, Jin Yi's plan/Luoxia Mu Mingyang/beating the monk and fighting the law, etc., Etc., Can all be described from the perspective of a golden elixir immortal clan. Wasn't Zhengjin written very well before? I don't know why I wrote so many details in the plot, and the author seems to be very shy about writing his own Taoism. He is not very famous. I have borrowed it from the previous ones. Is it necessary? Let's learn from the latest chapter. Taiyuan takes action. Are you unhappy with the description of the real king's fighting skills and his cultivation being forgotten? The introduction said that Xuan Jianliu had been in jail for too many times. Zheng Jinwan thought that he could start to enjoy himself, but it turned out that he was at the beginning of jail. He enjoyed half of it and then stopped. When can you, Jindan Zhenjun, come out to have fun?

When I read this type of novel for the first time, I was a bit confused about the underlying logic of the story about a family cultivating immortality. It turns out that most of the articles about the protagonist's solo career describe the hopelessness of building a family's power, or that he is tired of the life of cultivating immortals and goes back to establish his power and enjoy his old age. However, this situation does not happen at all for the protagonist who hangs on the wall. From the perspective of the wealthy couple, 1. Wealth: Which realm uses resources in which realm? The protagonist cannot expect a group of monks who practice Qi and build foundations to help him collect resources. 2. Companion: The protagonist is a cheater. Usually, the protagonist chases old monsters. If the protagonist is caught up by a descendant of the family in a short time and becomes a companion of the protagonist, then the protagonist does not need to practice. He can't even hold a cheat, and there is no need to practice. 3. Dharma and earth: These two have the same nature as wealth. The protagonist cannot ask a family member with a lower level of cultivation than him to help him complete it. To sum up, I don't understand how establishing a family will be of any necessary help to the protagonist's cultivation path, unless the protagonist's plug-in is related to the family.

I just said that since the family is cultivating immortality, the Golden Elixir Queen should change her perspective and just write the next generation of protagonists. I really want to see how the Golden Elixir Queen develops under the Xuanjian system.

I would like to make a suggestion. I think you should either generously use AI to update another chapter, or you should stop rubbing your hands perfunctorily. It is too human-machine and really ruins the impression

Why does After Jin Dan feel like it was written by AI?

Seeking money is getting more and more confusing 😅, there is no main line at all, most of them are boring dialogues

It's New Year's Eve soon, let's celebrate with a reward of 5,000 points

Lin's generation (from the fifth generation onwards): Inheriting Zheng Qingxiu, Yunyue Wuchen, Mingxu Shouyi, holding the title of Ling Taizhen

This book is really worth reading. Many people think what happened after asking for money. I think it is well written. The family does not walk alone. There was too little description of the other younger members of the family in the early stage. After asking for money, it started to focus on describing the other members of the family. There is no problem with this writing, but it is quite exciting.

Have you guys drank too much Coke? Hold Caowei, have you read family novels? They are all online family novels. I have read them almost once. This one is definitely a masterpiece.

After reading a hundred chapters, the world view has not yet been expanded, and the orthodoxy has not been mentioned. The vision of the legitimate son of the Foundation Establishment Immortal Clan is not so narrow.