God Rewards Those Who Work Hard: Immortality Starts from Cutting Down Trees

Those with experience panels just practice chopping trees every day, and they also have to go up the mountain to practice, which is such a silly setting.

The length of the book is really too long. I only started practicing in Chapter 20. There are too many life narratives in the past that really don't need to be laid out for so long. There is no passionate part so far, which makes it a bit boring.

Damn it, you want to imitate the way mortals write? But I see you don't have Wangyu's writing style either. I read Mortal before it was released, and the results at that time were really not that good.

The beginning is pretty good, average. But as I write, I got a little off track. I was chased by the patrol inspector, and the two sides fought endlessly, but there was no rush to improve the protagonist's strength. In fact, in the early stage, the main thing is to quickly improve your realm. Writing about those miscellaneous things takes up a lot of space. I really want to discourage you!

Don't listen to the bully upstairs. What you write can be fine. Come on, will they like it or not?

Ten taels are one catty, and one hundred taels is also one catty? Author, do you want to go back and revise it?

Encouragement

This book is so bold, it actually satirizes torture to extract confessions

Insufficient ability! Many writers are like this. If you tell them to use less water, they will say that if I had the ability, I would have become a great master. Playing the piano to an ox The pace should be faster and less water. Is it so difficult? Really following someone else's outline? Who is the author you plagiarized from? Who are you? I don't know if the writing is good or not, but Shui has really learned everything. I haven't achieved any results at all and I'm already dreaming about earning money by counting words😃