Mountain Fox Immortality

After reading a few chapters, I thought it was some crappy product from some studio? I took a look at the comment section and saw that it's a new author, so go for it! A few small suggestions. If you want to watch it, just watch it. If you don't want to watch it, just pretend you haven't seen it. The plot is indeed a bit sloppy. After the first few chapters and you haven't started to get started in hundreds of chapters, you should be more solid first If you are willing to dedicate yourself to this awesome mother, you will be recognized by others. Even going to a flower house is better than this. You have nothing to say about getting a sister to be a concubine. It is a bit of a cuckold plot People are divided into races. , Let alone beasts. Monsters are written in the same way as humans, and humans are written in the same way. Nowadays, most of the writings about demons love and care for humans more than humans. The war before Syria was about to eat humans, and no one cared about it. It didn't matter whether they were alive or dead From the perspective of an audience, I can't relate to it, and it's even a little annoying and not fluent. At this point, I can't help but curse if I continue writing it hahaha 😏😏

Cut it! This book is already useless by chapter 12! In the early stage, you were indecisive, but you still acted according to human thinking. By Chapter 12, you took on the human form. You are already going against the title of the book. You are just a human race cultivating immortals with the name of monsters! It's too perverted You see Xuanjian, Human Soul Banner, Wild Boar, and some apocalyptic beasts. The well-written ones transform into human form as soon as they are written. If you transform into human form, you will lose the core value of your book. How does the mountain fox cultivate and human fighting spirit?

The beginning was quite interesting, but I started to get sick when I read the sixth chapter. Li Daniu was fucked by a rich man, I dropped an ntr immortal, and then the protagonist was discovered at the speed of light, started to run for his life, and then jumped 20 years and became a human. In short, there is no value in seeing it.

Everything else is acceptable, but in a novel about a fox demon who cultivates immortality, a female vixen takes on a life of his own, and he transforms into a female vixen and sees her naked body. Is it impossible to live without a female vixen? . .

The biggest poisonous point in writing about demons is that you are already a demon, but your butt is on the human side. The first chapter violated a taboo, no wonder so many people criticized it in the comment area

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The worst thing to avoid when writing online articles is swinging one's stance and being against Japanese invaders. This is determined by the history of our land. If you want to write about people, write about people. If you want to write about devils, write about devils. If you want to discuss human nature, go to Serious Literature next door.

A clichéd heroine, you can read the article at a glance

The first part of this book is pretty good, but the second part is a little confusing. I feel like it's very picky about readers. To use an inappropriate metaphor, this book is a masterpiece in the literary world. For pure lovers, the more I read it, the more uncomfortable I feel. The cautiousness of the main character in the first part is suddenly revealed inexplicably. Children who have been raised since childhood thought that the main character will become like a grandfather, so he will What is it about getting ahead, but the result is that the mother is humiliated, the father has to send his wife there, and the child is gone in the blink of an eye after the protagonist falls asleep. There is no story in the past 20 years (I have only seen this so far). This... How to put it, I prefer to watch the story of the protagonist suffering in the early stage and then moving forward, but this part is too frustrating, what's the point? How to write a story where the protagonist transforms into a humanoid and brings along a female fox who is ignorant of the world? Isn't this a worldview with monsters, immortals, and Buddhas? Which protagonist would take a beautiful girl who knows nothing about everything in a precarious situation... I wrote the protagonist as a cautious person, but ended up writing so many inexplicable things. In the end, it felt like the protagonist was beaten, and then the protagonist smiled evilly, and then nothing happened. Two days later, he was beaten again. I felt so uncomfortable writing SM.

Haha, this author is so miserable, there are so many scolds in the comment area,, Then I took a look and saw the latest chapter in one breath I think it's not that bad, it's pretty good, I can only say that you can spend time to change the differences, for example, you can be more ruthless in dealing with Zhao Zhuang, otherwise, the subsequent plot is quite good, and wouldn't it be a pity that readers would run away?

For leisure and retirement, write about characters, plots, and dig holes. The author who cultivates immortality does not have this ability, his writing style is not round enough, and his spirit cannot be contained. I'll read it if you write about retirement care.

Demon is actually a scornful term used by human beings for animals and plants that have become spirits. If you want to write about this kind of natural spirit that achieves immortality, you must write about your own position, rather than a fairy tale that is actually a human being in the skin of a demon. Look at how many of the statues of gods in ancient times look like humans, but the more they are modified by later generations, the more they look like humans. Did Nuwa say she was a human? Did Donghuang Taiyi say he was a human being? There are so many immortals who are not human beings, so how did they achieve immortality?

When you see a wealthy landlord marrying a peasant woman who has been working for many years, you really have no common sense. Rural labor is very destructive.

When I look at the little fox, I want to see it curled up into a ball, playing tricks, cheating, kidnapping, etc. There is no point in practicing it seriously. It is just a routine for upgrading and fighting monsters in a fantasy world. I will get tired of watching it too much.

You can still see it at the beginning, when Daniel is exposed and becomes poisonous, and then Lao Liu dies and the female fox turns into a human and dies of poison. I don't understand what the author wants to write about. I thought it was a strange beast at first, and then I thought it was raised by an old man. After becoming a human, I thought it was walking around the world to practice, but it is not as fun as practicing. There are a lot of characters and things that appear out of nowhere. I don't know what they mean. The author should think about it carefully and find the right type first.

What a pity. I thought they were similar to Lan Ke. What a pity.

If you want to see strange beasts, go find them, and go to the Xianxia to point them out.

Among the new authors, they are already very qualified! Anyway, I watched it with gusto, and the shortcomings did not hide the good points. Can those trolls in the comment area please get out of here? You are so awesome. Why don't you write a book and read it?

After reading Chapter 19, all I can say is, what the hell?

The front is well written, but the back is difficult to stretch. There are too few lines, and no holes have been dug. The contrast is too great. Writing a high-level explanation is also useless. It seems that you are very stubborn, you know? Half of the heart energy was lost again. Fortunately, there is no big poisonous point, but it is relatively spiritual, much better than some AIs whose book titles are longer than essays. Little white text, immature. The writing style is ancient and steady. The characters are not distinct enough. Having said so many things, please give it a try, the new author.

It's very beautiful, I think 😳

I don't understand there are so many trolls in the comment section. After reading it, I felt that this book was a breath of fresh air among the many conventional and entertaining articles. I guessed that the author was going to take the route of a road novel. It's just that I don't kill people randomly. Some people call me a virgin, but there is no need~

The setting is very good, a novel little fox, but it collapsed in the later stage.