Cultivation of Immortality: Start by Configuring Strategies for Cultivating Immortality

As for the protagonist's rotten spiritual roots, he should find a way to practice the practice of reincarnation, and then maintain a state of shielding the secrets of heaven, leaving himself a way out.

Success is also novel, failure is also novel. The author has no advantage in writing and plot. I can keep reading because the writing is relatively novel. But precisely because of the novelty, the author's world view is very immature and contains many contradictions. In other words, the author cannot deduce a magical and fantasy world from a novel system, thus making the world appear to be nondescript. The disadvantage of saying this is that although there is a very novel ability system (you can travel through space by practicing Qi), it still follows the template of traditional immortality. The author should be a complete novice, with an average to upper-level veteran level, so he won't take any risks.

There is no distinction between priority and priority. I was attracted by your creativity in the early stage. If you don't explain the cheats quickly, the ordinary plot will continue. These plots are similar everywhere, they look boring.

Why is there always a lot of trouble before it's over? Why are you working as a dog for the sect after they have all been dismissed?

It's hard to tense up when you see the thirteenth level of Qi training being completed. Qi training also requires additional realms, so why slow down the pace? Now everyone can only write about the Qi training period? It takes one to two hundred chapters to practice Qi.

The monk in the Nascent Soul stage in the previous life was so easy to talk to. If it were really reincarnation, you wouldn't be able to get any favors at all. In his eyes, he was just like an ant. How can you write this feeling?

After reading ten chapters, the biggest problem with this book is the cultivation system. I don't understand why, there are too many loopholes, and it can't be perfected.

Even if the protagonist goes to Jubao Pavilion to sell some ordinary talismans, the steward will be alarmed. . . How low is this? Does it deserve to be called Jubao? . .

Is there such a thing as a hedonistic cultivator? I'm tired of seeing this type of hard-working cultivator

Chapter 2 eliminates the two most useful talents first

So many reincarnations are re-cultivations, I can't stand it. For others, the reincarnation is just a plug-in. For the author, this is a basic operation. Yuanying has two chances, nb

What the hell is the system? Talent, magical power, moisturizing things silently, that one is no better than the system, it has more readers and audiences.

Why. This golden finger can do it. This is a new track.

Alas, apart from the lack of system innovation, this system also has a very low attendance rate and is all kinds of unreasonable. I won't watch it anymore.

How about it? Those who were attracted by the setting can look at the results. . What's wrong?

The idea is okay, it feels a bit like playing Guigu Bahuang, but the number of words is too small, so I can't say what will happen next, but your writing idea is really good

Purely newbie. So few comments. Hey hey hey.

What about my system? Why doesn't it appear after breaking through the sixth floor? I always write about some weird Qi-level space abilities, reincarnation, and encounters in dangerous situations in the market, pretending to be someone else's.

One Qi training period is the thread that binds a thousand-mile marriage. If it is said to be an imitation, it should be a high-end imitation. Two people can teleport dozens of miles to each other. This book is awesome, other books are still accelerating themselves during the Qi refining period, such as the Divine Walking Talisman

Well, it's also very stable. Well, it's about dealing with conflicts on those issues. Those conflicts are handled in a more diplomatic way. Some are too blunt.

I don't seem to be able to use the gold finger very well.