Mortals: Wonderful Objects from the Heavens, Enjoy Eternal Life

I cut off the fairyland chapter from the previous one. I guess the old mortals and demons have become more popular recently, so I opened another one.

The golden finger is not very good, so I have to wait and see the situation before putting it on the shelves.

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It's just that the updates are too slow and not enough to watch.

Wouldn't it advance the plot if I didn't attract hatred? Now that we know that the Foundation Establishment Pill will be missed, as a time traveler, we can't take the initiative and just gamble on luck. If we don't succeed, we will reach the 12th floor and take the initiative to plan the bloody forbidden land. Wouldn't this be better?

It takes 10 months to get 50 ammunition for the late stage of Qi training. It is impossible to practice from the seventh level to the ninth level of Qi training, and it is still under the condition of failure. Treat you readers as fools

What the hell are you writing? Normally no one dares to touch the boiled eggs of the Ascension Society, but Han Li has a special 4th spiritual root. Also, can't you use the items in the second lottery for yourself? You have to cultivate the elixir.

Originally, my elixir could last forever, but in order to convince myself not to get the Immortal Ascension Order, I said the elixir was more important and it could be solved with a simple trip, so I gave up the opportunity. Then prepare for the ninth level of Qi training and go to the arena to get the Foundation Establishment Pill.

One who went to the Immortal Ascension Conference to compete in the arena at the ninth level of Qi training was speechless, and another who upgraded his three spiritual roots a little faster than Han Li, and also had the help of elixirs and branches that purify mana. I don't know how to write it, and the poison points are one after another.

In fact, if you win the Foundation Establishment Pill at the Immortal Ascension Conference, you can either use it immediately to gain luck, or take the initiative to exchange interests with the sect family. The third way is actually a dead end! I just can't figure it out. Even a smart kid can hear the tricks. How come reborn people have a sense of luck?

There are 9 out of 10 mortal fanfics about sleeping with Han Li's woman, and then just copy them along the lines of the original novel. There's nothing of my own. It's funny.

It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended collection: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiaomei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her master Jiang Yun, Nishang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Wang Menzhu, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Yuan Yao, Yanli, Wen Madam, Ling Yuling and her mother Wen Qing, Yinyue, Bingfeng, Han Zhixian, Mei Ning, Wen Siyue, Liu Yu, Gongsun Xing, Shidie Fairy, Xiao Cui'er, Nie Ying, Yan Ruyan, Bingpo Fairy, Song Yu, Tianlan Saint Lin Yin Ping, Mulan Prairie Saint Music Master, Feng Bing, Mu Peiling, Bai Yaoyi, Saint Ancestor Yuancha, Saint Ancestor Baohua, Dai'er, Fairy Black Phoenix, Jin Yue, Xianxian, Liu Leer, Bai Suyuan, Mo Caihuan, Mo Yuzhu, Mo Fengwu, The four wives of the Mohist family (Yan, Li, Liu, Wang)

Shouldn't fighting be a matter of life and death if a person is ruthless and doesn't talk too much? Or run away with a bucket. How can we go back and forth for dozens or hundreds of rounds? This is not playing house. This is a battle of wits. You have written several mortal books. He is already a mature author. We can no longer use fighting skills to count words. After beating him, I did it immediately. If something gets difficult, run away immediately. This is only reasonable

There's something wrong, what age are we in, and I wrote such a clichéd plot earlier, it's hard to swallow.

Fifty chapters are about foundation building and a hundred chapters are about elixir formation, nothing new. I've seen a lot of other people, and I've gained some insights. Most of the brainless girls highlight the "coolness", but they don't know where the pleasure is! It looks like a graduation thesis, and the plagiarism check rate remains high. I didn't see it covering all aspects, but it was just domineering and arrogant, and just framed the same author. In my mind, the authors are as follows.

How could there be such a mindless plot in such a world of underworld cultivators? Shouldn't they all do it secretly? The little villain is written so brainlessly. He should pretend to be angry and leave. Then secretly find an opportunity to kill the protagonist. For example, find connections to arrange for the protagonist to be stationed at a spiritual stone mine. Outbound missions such as garrisoning in the city. It is only reasonable to then secretly ask a clan member or elder to be the protagonist. This kind of mindless making of enemies. The slap-in-the-face plot is so brainless. And a fountain of spiritual eyes. He was actually discovered at the same time as this little villain. Forcibly create conflict. Has the author exhausted his talent? Write this kind of mindless plot. The writing is worse than the previous two books. Shouldn't the more you write, the better?

The protagonist of the God Man has a top-level offensive magic weapon, and its consumption is only equivalent to that of a mid-level magic weapon. He still needs to buy another offensive magic weapon, but not a defensive magic weapon. During battle, no matter whether the enemy is making a sneak attack or the enemy is at a higher level than the protagonist, the protagonist can always be one step ahead. Are you playing a game? The protagonist must attack first?

Generally speaking, it is good, but one drawback is that the method of attracting hatred is too low-level. There is no life-or-death benefit, and there is no dispute between the Dao. Don't fight to the death at all times, especially for people in the same sect. This kind of feeling that you have been slighted, you have to deal with someone who is stronger than you, and you will lose your life if you lose.

Rubbish. It's Mo Jiaolong again, Lan Gongwan.

Formula bloody forbidden land, formula ink dragon. Why, you can't write without Nangong Wan? 😅😅😅

1. I didn't pick up Master Jinguang's storage bag, saying that I didn't have time. I think it can be easily completed in three months. Aren't you afraid that you won't be able to enter the sect, and it will be difficult to get the foundation-building pill in this life? 2. Easily sell the elixir that is over 500 years old. Regardless of the value of the elixir itself and whether there is any adventure behind the elixir, it is worth arresting and interrogating. Han Li was the protagonist at that time, and no one has been chasing him for two thousand years.

After reading Chapter 29, I was quite disappointed. To be honest, I thought the protagonist, Golden Finger, would be more powerful. But in the end, he was just picking up rags. Picking up rags was nothing more than picking up rags. After practicing Qi for the twelfth level, I could only pick up a bit of Gold Finger twice. The scenes didn't feel like anything, so it was just ordinary.

Another piece of garbage from Golden Finger

Can you really make money by writing this way? Pressure is put on the readers, right?

There is no doubt that it is a masterpiece in the fanfiction. As of the last chapter of the current update, I personally think that the biggest poisonous point is the inclusion of Nangong Wan. However, the main reason for this poisonous point lies in Nangong Wan's background. The Han Li chapter in the Forgotten World of Immortal chapter is destined to have Nangong Wan with the attribute of broken shoes. This is really a big thorn in the side. The key is that cyber chastity cannot make up for it. Secondly, the emotional scenes are generally slightly toxic and oily, and the female character is very broken. However, compared to the original work, this kind of breakdown is less personal and more wasteful, and it does not affect the protagonist's ability to upgrade and fight monsters. Secondly, what should be praised is that as a mortal fan, this book does not waste words on Han Li, and the protagonist does not forcefully follow Han Li's old path, but walks out on Lin Feng's own path within the framework of a mortal fan. The plot of the dungeon will not be bloated, and the treasures obtained from each dungeon have a very important role for the protagonist, instead of falling into the strange circle of fandom and going through all dungeons. The result is not even as good as the protagonist sitting around and practicing. It shows that the author's development of the protagonist is very clear. Therefore, even if the author adds sects that are not in the original work, and the timeline is changed to remove all the purple spirits, it does not affect the protagonist's combat power and overall rhythm. Instead, it gets rid of the useless and troublesome hindrance of the Miaoyin Sect. Finally, the author has done a great job in terms of combat power. It is not bloated so that everyone can be evenly matched with the protagonist, nor is it so simple that one can instantly kill or compete with the protagonist in cross-level battles. Summary: Worth a look

Judging from the comments, it's not that good, it's cool!

The description of the fighting method is very good. I support writing it down.

When reading Mortal Fans, first turn to the end of the first chapter to see the number of rewards (the number of words cannot be too small, at least 40,000 or 500,000). For example, this book has 5 rewards, which means it is not very good. The Reincarnation Daozu is also good with 149 rewards, and the Immortal Immortal Dao is a fine product with 870 rewards. It is quite in line with the objective law: the better the quality, the more rewards.

I'm just curious about Nangong Wan's reincarnation, and you come up to me as soon as you come.

The line between Nangong and Han Li and Mo Jiao can only be a coincidence. Otherwise, what else would Han Li in the Immortal Realm fight for? Would Han Li in the Immortal Realm have made arrangements if he had known about it?