Mortal: Fight Monsters and Upgrade, I Will Enjoy Immortality!

Come on, write a little bit coquettishly!

There is a saying that this book is really good. You are calling it reckless for Killing Decisively. You can sleep in Nangong for free and she will ascend to the fairy world on her own. There is a high probability that the character will help the male protagonist and you say it is unreliable. Please recommend some good mortal books. , Mortal: The First Body Cultivation in Tiannan, Mortal starts from immortality, I can enter the spirit world at the beginning of Mortal, Mortal starts from Huang Maple Valley as a calamity cultivator, starts from mortal to achieve immortality, and this book, Mortal: Fight monsters and upgrade, I enjoy immortality! I'm following all of these, and they are all very good. I just want to say that there are too many people nitpicking about this book. I can't stand it, so I'll just say what's on my mind. Come on, author, you write well!

On the twelfth and third levels of Qi training, I came out of the forbidden area and brought back ten beads of elixir. Is that a lot? Are you being targeted? Let's force a plot

The protagonist's IQ is not good. He opened a cave before buying the formation. It's not like he didn't know the value of the spiritual eye spring. Sure enough, the cave was discovered and occupied by Senior Brother Wang. Although he killed him in the end, the protagonist in this writing is really stupid and brainless.

Is this temperament worthy of competing with Han Li for a woman? If you want to enjoy yourself, create your own creation.

I hope the author has his own view of mortals, instead of Wang Yu's view of mortals. Mortals themselves have many bugs, and fans will add more bugs. 1. Yu Zitong, a master of Qi training. His Qi training soul is so powerful that it is comparable to the God of Dayan. Fans should give up the scenes between Mo Juren and Yu Zitong. How to treat the so-called conflict with the plot after giving up the body in Qi training? 2. Low realms can clearly see the cultivation level of high realms. The digitization is the same as in games. It feels like an NPC has a level health bar on its head. A low realm cannot analyze the level of a high realm at all, let alone what level it is... In addition to the author's inertia, readers can see this problem awkwardly. 3. Low-level alchemy, weapon training and talisman monks cannot produce what high-level monks need. Why? My own cultivation and magic power cannot support it, let alone high-level materials. More importantly, the knowledge is not enough. Just like the Formation Master, how can a monk who cannot build a foundation know the combat power of a Golden Core cultivator, and how can he know the strength of a Golden Core cultivator's spiritual consciousness? Four. Waste material matching system, all starting in hell mode. Why didn't you consider seizing the body when you knew it was useless? It all relied on system enhancement. So why didn't the system choose a Tianling root instead of a useless material to increase the difficulty? Knowing that cultivating immortals depends on their background and strength, they want the protagonist to suffer the most miserable fate and take the worst path. In the later stage, you have to suppress your combat power and cultivation... Why? It's all driven by the system. The focus is on the system, so is the system cultivating immortality or the protagonist is cultivating immortality? Is it because the system has snatched away the protagonist~ 5 The desire to collect is basically the same in fan fiction. I have whatever the original work has, and I do whatever Han Li does. Regardless of whether it is reasonable or not, the protagonist must cut off the character. Would anyone say that if you don't snatch it, you are still a fan? So it's all about fanfic. Whether it's a good original or a good fanfic, they will have their own ideas and plots, rather than copying or plagiarizing. 6 The combat power and skills are not clear. The biggest problem in distinguishing between original works and fan fiction is that the skills are not clear, because the fans basically refer to the original work. The original work can make detours, but the fan fiction cannot, especially in the early stage. Readers all know what the original work's combat power is in the later stage, and the stuff in the early stage is simply not enough. There is no need to review the past with others to learn the new. Choose one that is intuitive and can be progressively enhanced, with a clear style that will naturally attract resonant readers, rather than complicated and colorful ones. Seven old ladies, should you cultivate immortality or a century-old marriage~ The best choice for a heroine is her qualifications and combat power, not her difficulty in settling down. On the long road to immortality, loneliness is the only thing that accompanies the protagonist. Regardless of whether men and women are immortal, the relationship between Taoist couples is basically just passers-by on the road. It depends on who has the best qualifications and who can survive to the end. Therefore, there are no cute girls in cultivating immortals, and there is no love brain in cultivating immortals. Therefore, when authors do not clarify the relationship between primary and secondary, the further they go, the harder it becomes to write, especially those who cannot write emotional dramas. They knew that they could benefit from each other, but they had to tie her up for life and put shackles on her. He couldn't bear to see her become a pink skeleton. In the end, I still don't understand why. In fact, what readers want is the process rather than the result... (If I were to time travel, I would not consider Yellow Maple Valley at all, but go to the Hehuan Sect of the Hidden Moon Sect. Each realm has a girl, a set of skills and a love. If I want to live my whole life, it depends on whether the girl can reach the end on her own).

The protagonist is pretending to be cautious

You don't have to worry about snatching the opportunity from Han Laomo, but the old demon from the fairy world who robs someone else's double cultivator will definitely take action and collapse.

No, the plot is okay, the protagonist is very strange. The first time the reader saw Chen Qiaoqian and Nangong Wan's "hey hey hey eroticism", the reader's first feeling was that it was vulgar. There is also a protagonist who laughs and laughs when he meets a senior who can crush him to death. He is startled and talks to himself about nothing. My 12-year-old brother, who is in the sixth grade, does not change his expression even if the mountain collapses in front of him. At least he is relatively stable and behaves appropriately. This is the mortal world. If you are not careful, you will die. The protagonist is really getting more and more uncomfortable as I watch it. After all, he is in his 30s at the beginning, but his temperament is not as good as that of a junior high school student in our country. How do you survive in this world?

It's understandable that you have the opportunity to snatch the protagonist, but you also snatch the protagonist's woman. This pattern is really difficult to evaluate. There are too many women in mortals, so you have to do this. Nausea

Let me tell you a joke, the speed of a strong Nascent Soul master can be measured by a few feet or tens of meters 😥😥😥

After reading the introduction of the book, I found that it was just like the experience of Han Lao Mo. The author could do nothing but seize the opportunity of the original work. Don't you think the woman who sleeps with the original work has a green head? Or maybe you just like green. Shameless. The mortal world is so big. As long as the opportunity is reasonable, I can write whatever I want. It's disgusting to read.

Killing innocent people indiscriminately and not rejecting women is inexplicable. It's not a monk story or a one-woman story, and it's not a harem story, so it feels awkward.

Fellow Taoists, I usually have questions when I see magic weapons in Xianxia novels. The magic weapon of the Immortal family is controlled by spiritual thoughts, and can even be used to channel spirits on its own. Why do you need a handle? Do you miss the feeling of being a mortal? Especially for a flying sword, it should have sword points at both ends, and the hilt will only limit its performance. The fairy mirror should not have a handle, it should be a ball, because only if the mirror surface is spherical, it will have a 360-degree attack range with three latitudes and no dead ends. The most fairy-like magic weapon I have seen is the "Broken Moon Wheel" in the 2001 movie "The Legend of Shushan". That thing has no handle and is controlled purely by the mind. That looks like an immortal magic weapon. What do fellow Taoists think?

After reading dozens of chapters, I always feel that this system plug-in is useless. Kill the monks of the same level and give them ten pills. However, the value of these ten pills is far less than the net worth of the same level of monks. Just like at the black market auction, ten foundation-building elixirs were bought for five hundred spirit stones. The protagonist auctioned them for much higher than the market price. It stands to reason that a normal store would only cost three to four hundred, but the net worth in the foundation-building period would be one or two thousand if it was less, three to five thousand would be normal if it was more, and some people with great backgrounds and great opportunities would have tens of thousands. The skills practiced by the protagonist, from the early stage to the middle stage of foundation building, actually require thousands of such elixirs, which means that hundreds of monks of the same realm must be killed. The total net worth of these foundation building is at least hundreds of thousands. It is estimated that it is enough for ten people to practice golden elixir from foundation building. It's okay to say that your realm is low. If you are in the human world, what will you do when you reach the Nascent Soul stage? Killing all the Nascent Souls in the entire human world may not be enough for you to reach the perfection of the Nascent Soul. So what if you become a god? There are only a few people in the whole world. What should you do next? If you read the book at the end, can you tell me how the protagonist operates?

I have read more than a hundred chapters. You are a powerful figure in the late stage of foundation building. Yuan Yao is a small Qi refiner, and the two of them are still laughing and joking about the hammer. , You give her skills and resources, and she still dares to kiss you and run away, she has no consciousness at all, your protagonist must act like a domineering protagonist, sit there without being angry, talking about hammer love, I promoted you, a little Qi Qian, and you are still laughing there, just sit down, Yuan Yao comes over to massage in a sensible way, and then looks at you and serves you, can't you write this?

The protagonist is becoming more and more contemptuous of all living beings, killing more and more indiscriminately, and is becoming more and more unscrupulous in order to practice. I hope the three views should be more positive. The villain in the book is a villain, but the protagonist is the first perspective brought in by the readers. Is it really appropriate to do whatever it takes to achieve the goal? What is the difference between such a cultivator and a demon? In the end, he becomes an immortal, and even loses his humanity.

Most of this book is a little watery, and the protagonist doesn't think about his own IQ.

It's just an opportunity to beat the original owner all the way. I didn't miss it at all. What's there to see?

After watching it for a long time, I felt lonely and slipped away.

This article does not act like a eunuch, does not lick the old devil, grabs what should be grabbed, all based on one's own heart, and everything you do is a possible choice for a normal person.

The author's writing is quite good. Come on, don't listen to those people's nonsense. Mortal fellows can rely on this book. There is also a book called Mortal First Body Cultivation. The author stabilizes his Taoist mind. This book is still acceptable!

I've already read Chapter 149, but it's still so unimaginable that I've already become an alchemy monk. The character of the protagonist is so unbearable. The author's original plot is quite acceptable, but the character of the protagonist is not worthy of such a level of cultivation.

The writing is good, but I read the pirated version 😅 and voted for you all my monthly votes.

The author must be poisonous. Either accept it or don't accept it. The writing is nondescript. Chen Qiaoqian and Senior Brother Lu hugged each other in front of the male protagonist. Only Senior Brother Lu loved him to death. As a result, the male protagonist raped him once and then accepted it. There was also Yanli, who either didn't accept it and ended up being treated like a cauldron and died and then accepted it. Isn't it disrespectful? The author likes secondhand so much, why not write Nangong Wan as sleeping with Han Li and then accept it later?

Suddenly I discovered that there is no need to read this mortal fanfic, as long as the male protagonist's golden elixir period magic weapon is a sword. The author of the golden elixir period sword magic weapon must have followed the textbook, looking at the tiger and drawing the cat, without any ink of his own. Jin Danqi is not the author of sword magic weapons. Not to mention too much, he has put a lot of thought into small parts and has his own ink and imagination.

Nishang grass, if you plant it for a hundred years, you won't be able to transplant it. The conditions are too many, otherwise the people in Luan Xinghai would have planted it on a large scale by themselves.

Hahaha! It's all Senior Brother Ye's fault! Being carried on Xiao Hanzi's back🤭🤭🤭Not bad! Qidian is the only one who writes about the fairy world! Support it! The book next door talks about the Law of Chaos in the later stages of Daluo's achievement. I wonder what law the protagonist in this book will major in by then.

After reading the following chapters, it seems that 11 girls have been accepted (Nangong Wan, Chen Qiaoqian, Yan Ruyan, Zi Ling, Yuan Yao, Yanli, Ling Yuling, Lin Yinping, Yinyue, Ye Ying, Ye Lingyun), and the remaining Xin Ruyin, Baohua, Bingpo Fairy, and a few more in the spirit world whose names I can't remember seem to have been confiscated!

After reading it, it was pretty good, with some minor quirks but overall it was innocuous. It is rare for a mortal person to write a book that ends with the spirit world and ascends to the fairy world. But it is indeed a big pity that there is no fairyland chapter.