American Comics: Spider-Man Begins as a Street Hero

Not bad writing! But just like the other half of the book, why should the identity of a time traveler be set up, but the person behaves more like a native who only understands some settings? Of course, as mentioned at the beginning, the writing is not bad! 👀

Don't make something as abstract as Spider-Man V6, and don't turn MJ into a mere watch.

The classic American comic plot develops. An inconspicuous villain's sabotage activities lead to the emergence of high-tech weapons that are inconsistent with the villain. After inspection, it is found that the weapons are made of unknown metals and technologies. This triggers the plot of a villain organization behind the scenes who wants to destroy the world and rule the world.

How come this Spider-Man never wins against anyone?

Author, how do you plan to strengthen Spider-Man?

Do the heroines have Wanda the Scarlet Witch and Emma the White Queen?

Spider Senses, coupled with more than 20 tons of punching power, is a super-agile assassin-type warrior. As long as he gives up and does not kill, ordinary second-rate villains will not be his opponent. Spider Senses: Danger perception, short-term prediction of the future, super intuition. With spider senses, you can win every battle in the casino. All of the things I mentioned above have appeared or been explained in comics. Growth does not mean being defeated, and being beaten until you open your mouth and close your eyes. Why, he can still advance triumphantly, win every battle, and become stronger when he encounters the strong. Isn't this also growth? Why can the bad guy escape unscathed? Why should the hero be beaten until his mouth is open and his eyes are closed. When facing friends, he should be as warm as the spring breeze. When facing the enemy, he should be cold and cold in winter. Good deeds should be rewarded with good deeds. , Evil must be punished, must be repaid, must make them pay the price, instead of being sent to prison, he should be tortured like hell on earth First-class villains are the opponents of first-class superheroes, such as Thor, Captain Marvel, etc., They belong to their villains, they belong to first-class villains

The protagonist should be strengthened, it feels like he hasn't defeated many enemies yet.

No, buddy, why did you cut it after writing so well?

When will we strengthen Spider-Man? It's too weak.

A novel with Spider-Man characteristics, good luck to the author✊

Can I add pictures of people?

If the pp in this book were mutants, JJJ would have another topic to talk about, although JJJ would basically blame Spider-Man for everything 🤭

I just watched a little bit and it feels like Spider Silk just replaced Gwen.

The indigenous Spider-Man, Ben is still dead and can't defeat the Vulture. As mentioned earlier, the spider was supposed to land on another person, but accidentally landed on himself. This shows that the protagonist may not have wanted to become Spider-Man. Believe that power brings responsibility, this is what Ben said. So what role does your setting as a time traveler play? A person who doesn't want to be Spider-Man can't save regrets. He doesn't even have the influence of his three views in his previous life. He can't even beat a vulture. It's more superficial than the time traveler setting in another book.

Is the protagonist a time traveler? ! If so, why do you still like to go around doing good deeds at night even if you wear it? !