Weird Story: My Classmate Is Tomie

I have finished reading it in one go (54 chapters in progress, I feel good. This book is not like the kind of peach or upgraded smooth novel that has been criticized for a lot of ghost stories, but a novel with suspense reasoning, weird stories and horror. There are no obvious logical flaws in the reasoning, or some small bugs in the description logic, the emotional line and the daily life) The often playful words harmonize and advance the main plot without seeming too dramatic or taking over the main role. Some of the protagonist's settings or actions make me feel a little bit like Vision Investigator 🙂. This kind of novel usually becomes more difficult to write as it goes on. I hope that the quality can be maintained.

Not bad, good grass level. Fujiang participated in the first case completely in the form of body parts.

🙂 I have finished reading the first volume. The writing is quite interesting. Although the ghost story lurks in the shadows, it does not affect the reasoning itself in the end. Personally, I am quite resistant to the new character. Come on, author.

The latest plot feels like the mystery of the Wolf Village

In particular, there is a setting with a police background in the past life. Now it is like schizophrenia. One moment I am afraid of returning to my country, and the next moment I am close to various incidents.

Overall it's okay, it feels like a high-quality product. But there are also logical flaws. In the early stage, the protagonist wanted to return to the country for a while, but the logic of participating in the case was flawed. There should be more psychological description to change the protagonist's mind

But I still want to wash it. The male protagonist pops up out of nowhere and the police setting cannot be washed. Just think of the fight between the soul of the male protagonist and the physical body of the original male protagonist. The male protagonist's soul has a classic time traveler mentality, looking down on others and always joining in the fun. The physical body of the male protagonist is responsible for counseling, and it is up to him to control the small head and the big head. Some gods are not like modern people and all their speeches are under their control.

Generally speaking, there are some logical flaws, and inexplicably like to meddle in other people's business. If one thing is not solved, he will start another one, and all kinds of clues will be automatically delivered to the door. While writing about the main character being afraid of death, he is also causing trouble everywhere, and some of the preface and follow-up are inconsistent.

After reading the whole article, I had a general impression, as if it had no beginning or end. There was no main line. It was said that I was going back to China, but nothing happened for a long time. He keeps playing decryption games and is very verbose.

The protagonist in the previous chapters doesn't seem very smart and always wants to go to China. Let's not talk about whether Jun can stop the weird talk in the past. The problem is that the protagonist's identity in this world is a Japanese. Why does he feel that in his perception, it is quite simple for Japanese to migrate to China?

He is running around in a world that he knows is full of ghosts and has no way to fight back, and his mother's heart is bursting.

If I hadn't clicked on the expansion button this time and saw that the remarks were not 🍑, I would have skipped this book.

The title says Fu Jiang, but in the end there is nothing about Fu Jiang in the two volumes, and he participates in the whole process in the form of a corpse.

Such a good book, I immediately gave up my name as soon as I read it. The author's description of "He Guang Tong Chen" is all about doing as the Romans do. It's awesome.

Surprisingly, the logic problem of returning to China is also a small problem. I have never seen anyone write it well. The author also made up for it. His own sense of justice, Kayako, was afraid of bringing Fujiang here. My only puzzlement is how the male protagonist can live with Tomie and even eat warship sushi for Tomie and eat plum rice for himself. Was he charmed by Fu Jiang or is there another explanation?

It's very uncomfortable to see the difference between what the protagonist is thinking and what he actually does. I don't understand what the author has in doing with this arrangement.

😁The protagonist's home should be turned into a shelter, show mercy, you kid

I don't understand why he suddenly said he was an undercover detective, it feels like it's obvious from all aspects. However, I feel that the biggest problem is the conflict between the characters and the beginning of the story that is a bit abrupt. Other than that it was pretty good.

It seems that I am planning to go into the genre of Japanese horror mystery. I like it very much. I voted for it monthly. If I can refer to the game, it seems that it is not impossible to write the Seven Mysteries of the House, Ishi Mermaid Monogatari, Ao Oni, Tomorrow and so on.

This book has its own content and the writing is not bad. It is generally well written. I recommend everyone to read it.

To be honest, the protagonist's past life identity setting is not as good as being a detective enthusiast. This kind of character setting is more suitable, right?

A classic domestic Japanese light ghost story trio.

I had a sense of déjà vu when I saw some kind of remote village ceremony while riding a motorcycle and crashing into a pit.

I originally thought it would be another boring trash book that puts on a scary skin and then crazily attacks female ghosts. Unexpectedly, the plot design is quite interesting. I have finished reading the first volume. The pace is very good and I can keep reading. However, in this era of fast-paced reading, the beginning is really not gripping enough. Perhaps a large number of readers came to read it with the idea of ​​conquering female ghosts, but after reading several chapters, they found that the protagonist was actually solving crimes, and their expectations were misplaced, which is why the results were so poor. The quality of the book itself should definitely not be this score. It may have something to do with the category chosen. This kind of supernatural, crime-solving, and romance elements is indeed a bit niche, but the quality of the book is really okay. I sincerely hope that the author can continue writing. I don't have many votes. I hope a monthly ticket can give the author some help.

Not the ecological niche of Kirishima Rika in the article now that Tomie has been resurrected as a ghost. Where? Will it appear later? I still like this innocent Fu Jiang.

Come on, the author writes very interestingly

Author, your writing is excellent, your reasoning is reasonable, your wording is accurate, your emotional descriptions are very detailed, and your character creation is also very good. Therefore, the problem is that it is not interesting at all and makes it difficult to read. Many people think that your updates are too slow and urgent. So, you can do this. You can say that your writing is slow because you went on a field trip and were fighting Fujiang, Dragon and Snake, and then tell a little story in each chapter. You are the follow-up investigator for the protagonist. Say a short paragraph that matches the plot, just 3 or 4 sentences. It is probably about what you discovered today, for example, you found a small Fujiang and are taking samples. Try to make it as dangerous as possible, so that if you update it every day, readers will think that you are fighting and investigating. If you cut it, readers will think that you died in a fight with ghosts.

Isn't the male protagonist in a gray commission and is prohibited from escaping? This high price deals with paranormal phenomena.

A poorly rated book. Some elements may make people confused, but they are very comfortable for those who are on the radio. If you want to know about these elements, you can go to ah b and find a blogger named Wan Zi Da Da Dao.

It can be good, and finally let me eat good food again