Reborn as a Ghost, the King of Hell Sent Me to Huaguo Mountain to Seduce the Souls

There is no golden finger in Invincible Liujia. Is this what people can say?

The writing is okay, but what can I say, the direction of the story is a bit confusing. Also, delete the invincible flow tag in your profile... I don't know what it means.

Chapter 6 is pretty mindless. There is a reason for the poor grades.

I originally thought it was 💩, so King Akaishi was going to come over and taste it to see if there were any poisonous spots, but it turned out that it was wood, with no taste at all, and it was dry. I barely got through the first chapter, but I really don't want to read the rest.

I didn't think it appealed to me at first. Too bland.

The golden three chapters are written as a bunch of answers, and around the sixth chapter, the general character and style of the protagonist are made as if they were anthropomorphic, making people want to complain and feel disgusted for no reason. The writing style is not too bad, and it is at a level where readers can keep reading if the plot and various aspects are well developed, but it is just like that. It can be seen that some classics were consulted to enrich the elements of the novel, but the atmosphere is really not created. I patiently read more than 20 chapters, and I can only say that I enjoyed it. . . . There are too many characterization and plot flaws in the first few chapters that determine the impression on readers.

To be honest, after reading 9 chapters, I really don't know what the main plot is (is it the ghost who becomes stronger and survives the great change? Then what is your great change, Journey to the West? The old demon of Yan Chixia Black Mountain is the Song Dynasty, right?) Forget it, my words are a bit confusing, so there are a few big questions! 1. What is your world view? Journey to the West? Liaozhai? Is your world a big, medium or small worldview? What you wrote in the article is very confusing and completely unclear. 2. In connection with the above, normal people will subjectively sort according to normal time. Your Journey to the West monkey has not yet gone to the underworld, how long ago that time was, and your Liaozhai... Forget it, I feel that your writing is okay, and the others are too messy, a lot. 3. Give me some advice, ① new book ② major revision ③ good luck

The monkey hasn't entered the underworld yet, but there is already Zhong Kui?

Isn't it about Journey to the West? Why is the background of the world so messed up?

The writing is okay, not bad. But there is no main line, and all stories are driven by external forces. It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. After reading the latest chapter, you can summarize it: In a certain year, when you encounter an enemy, you either kill or escape, and finally you gain magical power. It takes so many chapters to tell nothing new, and it has nothing to do with the title of the book. Take the title of Journey to the West, talk about your own worldview, and add some characters from the movie. In fact, the story you told has nothing to do with the monkey. The conspiratorial immortal Buddha can be used in any world view. I really don't know what the meaning of this book title is.

It's well written. It's one of the few novels in the new book list with a classic fairy tale style. I'll collect it first.

There is a saying that whether it is the original work of Journey to the West or the legends of Buddhism and Taoism, human beings, demons, immortals and Buddhas can transform into each other. Deliberately emphasizing this difference to create contradictions is made up by popular novels, that is, the protagonist's confusion itself has a standard answer.

It's very well written, why isn't it popular?

First of all, you have to think about what era we are in now. AI is already very developed. Why don't you seek help from deepseek. . . Although AI writing also has many flaws, the flaws are not outweighed by the flaws, and I think deepseek is far better than your current writing power and ideas. People need to grow and need nutrients. As a novice author, you can learn from deepseek. AI writing has too many elements and intentions, and lacks high-level reasoning and understanding abilities, which can easily lead to a lack of depth. That's all, I hope the author can listen to my suggestions.

The protagonist is a brat and has to fight the demon king at the beginning. Do you think what you wrote is very attractive? In the first three chapters, instead of writing a good plot to keep people here, they wrote about fighting monsters desperately. Of course I only read a chapter and a half.

Visited with the work "The Elder Scrolls: The Witch's Strategy Guide" and used the treasure to promote it. The author's writing is very good, it has been added to favorites and likes 👍.

Forget about the Journey to the West conspiracy theory, why is Ksitigarbha written like this?