A Mortal's Story of Immortality: I Am Traveling Through the Heavens as a Mortal

I feel like the protagonist was a bit short-sighted. Feng Yun doesn't learn the exercises. Don't you know what analogy means? Why can stones from other mountains attack jade? Sword 23 can leave the body and freeze time and space, not to mention the alluring love that exceeds the speed of light. It is equivalent to others still practicing Qi and building foundation, while you are comprehending the laws. The Novice Village will let you learn a weakened version of the awakening skill that can only be learned in the later stage, and you still can't stand it! And there is also a demon heart crossing, which is also somewhat useful for the protagonist's inner demon calamity Don't just hold the Changchun Kung Fu as a treasure.

After reading dozens of chapters, it is indeed one of the three heads and six arms.

You actually want 30 spirit stones for a basic spell, Changchun Gong for the entire exercise only costs 3 yuan, and you want 80 for a lousy ant spirit beast? You ant, just one fireball will kill you.

Go ahead and drive the screws. This is not immortality, this is fantasy. I just pick up magic weapons and do it. Is this right? What about spells, talismans, Liuyun Sword Jue, Liuyun Slash? Hehehehe, stop making trouble, good boy, go and drive the screws.

The Zhuxian Sword in Zhuxian World is not that powerful. He looks so powerful only because of the Zhuxian Sword Formation.

Chapter 3 is about the poison. The protagonist dies together. Where are the enemy's corpses? Won't you pick up the corpse? There is also the starting point of the seventh level of Qi training for the protagonist. Why don't you know the Qi training period magic weapon? Everyone knows that mortals have cultivated immortality stories. They are also native to the main body. At least there are some in the store! Forcibly suppress the protagonist

The following are the poisonous points that I personally think: 1. You have to shout out when casting spells, or even when using sword skills. 2. I watched the Qi training period of "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation" too much. I went to the world of "Fengyun" and directly followed Di Shitian and others to grab the Dragon Yuan. I remember that even in Fengyun, the most popular TV series, they sailed for several days. 3. I won't say anything about having a girl, as long as it's not a single girl, I can accept it, but is it right for the protagonist to take a level 2 spirit beast to the Bloody Forbidden Land? The protagonist's plug-in can copy other things to another, and travel across the world. So far, the protagonist has copied the Sky Palm Bottle, which means that the protagonist's plug-in cannot help with this. If level 2 spirit beasts really could enter, the Spirit Beast Sect would have cleared out the Bloody Forbidden Land long ago. I don't know anymore, I just saw this.

An elixir seed or seedling is more expensive than a prepared elixir. The author knows how to write it. There are also many other poisonous points, which are basically included in the paragraph comments.

The first is the price, and the second is that he is not meticulous enough. He is always ambushed and killed, and he exposes a lot of money at every turn. Learn from Han Li and see that he has a large number of readers.

I don't understand why I wrote a copy of Kendo Suzun when the book was written that year. Most of the people who have read this book are married and have children. How can I have so much time to read it? There is no fan base.

The protagonist is said to have traveled through time. The author writes it like a native, and the original work makes it clear, but he insists on writing it as if he has never read the original work. I remember you didn't buy the copper piece, so why did it end up in your hands? Also, there are eighth-level monsters pretending to be monster grass. If you have to go to the ninth-level monster cave to find them, it's Feng Dashanren. Isn't there something wrong with your brain? How do you know the location of Feng Dashan's cave? In the original novel, Wen Siyue told Han Li. The most uncomfortable thing is that I copied it completely from the original work and animation without any of my own ideas. It is equivalent to walking the same path that Han Li took all over again.

Alas, there are too many poisonous points and the number of water characters is too obvious. Go read the next one

This kind of equipment, this kind of configuration, can't actually kill the late Nascent Soul. Was it written by AI?

Xiaobaiwen, I guess I jumped to read the original work.

I gave up after reading the first chapter of the introduction. It was too big. Burning the rules of the sky bottle. Traveling through the world. Burning all magical powers. Traveling through the world is useful. You can burn the rules of time and magical powers. Entering a big sect and trying to copy the magical powers. It's not all a waste of time. What else should I write?

It was written like a running account, and the effect of Long Yuan was not reflected. At least I should describe a few pictures, it's nothing.

The Qi Master's method is like a turn-based game, and the names of moves are shouted out. The total method is more like a martial arts than a fairy, and the prices are very unreasonable.

Also, does the natal magic weapon have to be offensive? Isn't the defense and functional performance good? He used swords, guns, swords and halberds at every turn. It can't be towers, beads, flags, oh, you can't see this, this, this, this

It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended collection: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiaomei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her master Jiang Yun, Nishang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Wang Menzhu, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting , Yuan Yao, Yan Li, Mrs. Wen, Ling Yuling and her mother Wen Qing, Yinyue, Bingfeng, Han Zhixian, Mei Ning, Wen Siyue, Liu Yu, Gongsun Xing, Shidie Fairy, Xiao Cui'er, Nie Ying, Yan Ru Yan, Bingpo Fairy, Song Yu, Tianlan Saint Lin Yinping, Mulan Prairie Saint Music Master, Feng Bing, Mu Peiling, Bai Yaoyi, Saint Ancestor Yuancha, Saint Ancestor Baohua, Dai'er, Fairy Heifeng, Jin Yue, Xianxian, Liu Leer, Bai Suyuan

There are too many plug-ins, and the combat power is a bit stretched. Compared with Han Li, Han Li can kill him in an instant, while others at the same level will die inexplicably.

Because of the lack of books, I endured the nausea and read this book again. It was really disgusting! I just have a question! What is the name of the technique that the protagonist practices?

It doesn't look good at all, it's uncomfortable to look at

Han Li established the foundation at the age of 25. The protagonist had practiced Qi for the thirteenth level before Han Li entered the Yellow Wind Valley. He took a foundation building pill when he entered the Yellow Maple Valley. I don't believe that the protagonist intercepted Hu Han Li to grab the two foundation building pills from Brother Chen Qiaoqian and Lu. He couldn't build the foundation yet. There was Qingyuan Sword Technique in the Yellow Maple Valley but he didn't learn the first few levels first and wasted more than two years refining the weapon every day? You had to wait for Han Li to go to the Blood Forbidden Trial, but in the end, you still didn't get the opportunity to grab Han Li's chance. Wait until Han Li has established the foundation to exchange for the Qingyuan Sword Art. If you don't tell me, Han Laomo's character will probably not change with yours. Even if he does, can he give you the full book? If you were given the opportunity to reach the early stage of Nascent Soul, would you dare to kill Han Li? After wasting nearly five more years, Han Li was already in the middle stage of foundation building after taking medicine for four years. Do you know that one step is faster and the next step is faster? 😰😰😰

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The dragon in the storm must at least be in the elixir-forming stage. The martial arts in Fengyun are so powerful that they can cause different phases in the world. The martial arts in mortals have never been developed. Martial arts is not Tao?

How can there be a storage bag in the mortal world? It's not the spiritual world.

Another person who goes his own way and lacks common sense in life! In the world of cultivating immortals, there is a lack of common sense for survival👍👍👍

The author knows nothing about the legend of mortals cultivating immortals, and does not know the basic settings. He just looked at the mortals and felt lonely. Where do you get the courage to write fan fiction? Liang Jingru?

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