Tokyo: from Comic Assistant to ACGN Master

In Chapter 117, I personally think that the portrayal of the heroine here is a complete mess. According to the author's setting and the real situation, Miss Sakai Izumi should be a gentle or even meek on the surface, but a person with a firm heart. Her gentle character determines that she will not "ask" for the male protagonist's care in this way, and her strong heart determines that she will not change her mind because of other people's teasing, especially when she thinks "we have not confirmed the relationship yet." This kind of joke can be made casually between brothers, but it is close to flirting between men and women. She can naturally report the good news to the male protagonist, tell her recent situation that "she has joined the agency and stabilized", and express her longing shyly. This is behavior that is more in line with her personal personality. Or the plot could be modified to Yamamoto Kotomi, after learning about the situation, wanting to help her little sister advance their relationship. "The training in the office is so tiring, and the male protagonist doesn't even come to see her." She becomes the villain herself, threatening "I have your best friend/girlfriend, hurry up and bring food to redeem her." The result is that the heroine herself was seduced and made a phone call, but the hero did not admit it when he arrived. He was timid, gentle and controlled by others, and was firm and did not dare to take responsibility. Even if the hero arrived and said that the kidnapper was me, because I missed you, it would be nice to have some contrast and express my love firmly. Then why does the male protagonist fall in love with such a person? I also gave away comics and songs. Because she will be a big star in the future? Because of her character? Because of her long-term companionship? Because it was chosen by the author. I am not familiar with the star; the character is rarely described, and he often uses too much force; the companionship; I stayed with him in a convenience store for three or four months (based on the time when the comic in this article was published, maybe?). At the same time, the description in the previous article is almost non-existent. I really don't understand why the male protagonist, a rich young man with so many beauties around him, is so eager to fall in love with such a woman. You said that the Akiyama sisters are cousins ​​in name, but they are legally allowed but not psychologically allowed. Does that have anything to do with the fact that I have to fall in love with a woman now? Do I have to talk about one at this time? We can't get along slowly as a friend first. Her appearance is more like a tool, and she is there because the author needs it. I hope the author's subsequent description will be refreshing to everyone and make people think that there is nothing wrong with the heroine and that the protagonist should fall in love with her. Apart from that, it's pretty good. The writing is well-written and the little jokes from time to time also make people smile. If the follow-up performance is stable, it is worth subscribing ————Chapter 125 was read when this review was published

It's so pleasant, author, I think I will never forget you

Daily writing, multiple heroines, tags, etc. Will be added after cooling down. Daily career accounts for about 7/3 The whole book is based on daily life, supplemented by career lines. It is relaxed and funny. Because of the funny and funny style, the sense of age will look a little worse, so I did not deliberately write "Bubble Tokyo" in the introduction and title of the book. , But things that do not belong to this era are not written, and I will check the information before writing Comics, novels are for the general public, the time is relatively close to modern times, there are real books, mainly for non-literate youth The first ten chapters of the content are comics, 10-20 is mostly daily life, there are a few transitional chapters in the middle, and then the introduction Enter the plot of the novel, and then a plot of dumpling vinegar (this section was not well written due to poor early storage results. For details, please see the author's comments in Chapter 68) 35-38 Transition chapters related to comics 46-51 Daily-novel-daily-comics-novel Finally, daily life - comics - novels - daily life - games - daily life - performance After that, there are longer daily routines, but compared to the pure daily routine at the beginning, these daily routines have career-related foreshadowing added, and the proportion of career in the latter part is a bit higher Animation (animation), Comic (Comics), Game (Game), and Novel (Novel), I am writing in four fields, so the length of comics is a bit short, but it is indeed because I have not controlled the pace of my career well, and I am slowly improving in the future Because I want to write something light-hearted and happy, Bo Jun Yixiao Rather than simply drawing comics one by one, I want to write Click on the interesting daily routines of cartoonists, producers, etc. That everyone is familiar with In general, I am still a newcomer. I will continue to work hard in the future to control the plot rhythm and career daily life better Thank you for your support, and please bear with me

Is the protagonist's family too rich? If I go by what is said in the introduction, the protagonist at the top of his game may be able to catch up with the father of the male protagonist in the first chapter.

It feels like there are multiple female protagonists, so I recommend a single female protagonist. The extra female protagonist can be given to the male counterpart. Because Qidian readers like single female protagonists, writing with multiple female protagonists is too old (there are references

I came here to draw comics, but there doesn't seem to be much about the plot of creating comics. Most of them are daily life, which is a little disappointing and a little different from what I expected

I have been tortured by AI recently, but the words written by real people are still alive and the atmosphere is super harmonious.

Is it now standard for light novel protagonists to have a handsome face, and their family background is getting better and better...

I came here to draw comics for the title of the book, but it turned out that it was just a lot of daily work mixed with a small amount of comics. Although the author wrote well and it was very comfortable to read on a daily basis, it is too different from the title and introduction of your book. I can't say 70-30 about daily life and career. 😓

To sum up, this book is very interesting. I've watched two-thirds of it so far, and overall it's quite funny and relaxing, and I haven't found any major flaws. It just feels a bit strange. I can't understand the heroine aspect. The Akiyama sisters feel a bit like the Yukinoshita sisters but with changes, and their personalities are quite distinct. On the other hand, the heroine Sachiko the author has chosen now is not only ordinary in all aspects, but the most important thing is that you don't have much description. The image is so pale. Although I don't hate it, I can't find anything I like about it. So this book is more or less single.

Do you feel that the previous routine is a bit too much? I came here based on the title, but I didn't see much of what I imagined. 😰😰😰😰

The author doesn't put it on the shelves not because no one is reading it, but because the results are pretty good. Last week, Sanjiang's PK was a bit poor. There is still a chance to PK this week, so it hasn't been put on the shelves yet.

It can be considered a meme-type daily article. The writing is okay, but the career line is a bit lacking. I hope the author can control the pace.

The writing style is very good, there are many jokes but it doesn't make people feel bored. It looks very relaxed. There are many things that you can't understand but it doesn't affect the viewing. The male protagonist's words and deeds when getting along with others are really very comfortable to watch.

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Oda, the most powerful person at the moment, has a net worth at the prefectural level. When he reaches the city level, let alone being a kid, it's a problem to even be able to sit on the table.

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Being too popular is not a good thing. You are followed by authors every day.

It's impossible to be the strongest, second or third is a bit difficult, four, five, six, seven or eight... Anyway, you will definitely be among the top fifty! Come on, you are a great Japanese writer who writes very well!

The presence of the Haki sisters is too strong. In comparison, the author's official partner has no distinctive character and lacks personal charm. He is too ordinary. There is also a huge gap in identity and there is no match at all. Continue reading, the only advantage is that it is approved by the author.

Where did you come up with so many slanderous words? What the hell is meat, egg and milk Xiao Nan Nong?

I think the book written by Shark is very good and the ideas it conveys are also very good. However, Shark, when you take the title of author, you will no longer be a mortal, and the holidays in the world will have nothing to do with you. What should accompany you is writing and infinite updates! How could you sleep! Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this!

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In Japan at the end of the 20th century, would it happen that the protagonist just wrote an anime song or something, and then it was stolen and turned into a Cantonese song? 🤭

I'm going to beat the author hard with my big monthly ticket.

The author talks too much🙂

It's very good-looking, funny and sexy. It's so funny.

I just finished reading Chapter 160. There is no reason not to accept this foreshadowing. If you throw it out, the marriage will be destroyed

In fact, I feel that it is best to change the text appropriately and change the plot that was recognized as a shortcoming in the previous life. It is best to complete and patch up the logic that is only emotional without rationality. And the foundation must be laid well, otherwise the strange phenomenon of "clearly writing Nobel Prize-level results, but not even knowing the format of an undergraduate thesis" will easily occur when communicating with colleagues.

I've been basically stuck in the lab this month, and I haven't been chasing any new books, so I don't have many tickets. Six pictures are not many, and they should be difficult to use, but I still give them all to show support for this book.