The King of Wudang Wanders Around the Heavens as a Demon

The plot is natural, the writing is fluent, and the Taoist theory is similar. Overall, it is okay. However, I have two suggestions: 1. The image of the decent villains is too thin and not complex enough. For example, the favorite Wanwan is too kind, and the hated concubine Xuan is too stupid. 2 In order to show off, the settings are forcibly modified. For example, the Warlock's Qimen Bureau can be seen by everyone. It was later changed so that only innate masters can see it. However, the extremely clear formation diagram of the Nine Palaces and Bagua still does not conform to the original setting. For example, the software will only display the operation results (spells) to ordinary people. Those who understand computers Those with knowledge can see the code (the flow of Qi), but not everyone can understand the code. Programmers of different levels have different understandings of the code (Tai Chi diagram, innate Bagua diagram, acquired Bagua diagram, Jiugong diagram, Five Elements Shengke diagram, Big Dipper diagram, Zhoutian star diagram).

There are too many outstanding female protagonists and supporting actors in all the worlds. If we write about one person alone, two or three female protagonists will be fine. But Zhu Tianwen has the best harem. There are more than four of them including the ruthless empress, Liu Shen, Fang Qingxue and Tang Zichen.

There is basically nothing among the pig's trotters in the snow who is not a newborn.

Looking at Zhou Sheng's face in old age and comparing it with that of his youth, it turns out that the original appearance of a free and easy Sanren has turned into the face of a mean and cunning villain. It can be guessed that Fenghou Qimen will seriously affect the character of the cultivator. If you fail to practice, you will be trapped in the inner scene. Even if you succeed, you will often be tested by inner demons. And it's just a technique, a technique, not a Tao

The Tang Dynasty has exceeded the standard by a lot. It is hard to say whether you can beat the Heavenly Master or not.

A Taoist priest calls himself a demon?

If this Qianhu is the strongest Zuo Qianhu, then you haven't written it well. Zuo Qianhu won't throw the knife to the ground when facing a strong enemy. He is still shaking and sweating. Go and watch A Chinese Ghost Story again. The characters are all ruined by you.

The writing is very similar to Wang Ye, but unlike the time traveler, there is no idea of ​​the time traveler at all. He is so lazy that everything the protagonist does must be driven by the environment.

Just keep the directory simple, you can't read it.

The plot is a bit too draggy, and it feels like the main character doesn't have much to do.

The writing style of this book is quite shocking, but if you strip away the words and sentences, the story itself is just average. For example, in the copy of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, those villains always give me a sense of immediacy as a brainless villain. The original work is all useless and has no human spirit. How to describe it, it just doesn't feel like a human being, it's like it's been bewitched, it just wants to be reckless and go against the protagonist. Many characters inexplicably look down on the protagonist, with a sense of man and machine, and do not want to think about whether they will have any back-ups since they are so confident. In terms of the character of the protagonist, the reason why he is so carefree is not because of any obstacles. There are basically no bottlenecks in his breakthrough. Crossing levels is like eating and drinking. However, people have developed a world of tens of thousands or even hundreds of thousands of immortals. Why can't they compare with the technology (alchemy formations, talismans, etc.) Born from thousands of years of civilization on earth? Are everyone stupid? Immortals definitely exist in other people's world of immortality, but in the modern world of one person, there are even no immortals. Some technologies cannot be studied in detail at all. For example, are the stars in the sky in another world the same as those on the earth? How can you be so sure that Earth's gods can be used in other worlds?

The protagonist, or rather the author, becomes more and more disgusting the more I read about it. All kinds of darkening of the original characters, Li Chungang and his ilk are completely written as little villains who can't tell the difference between right and wrong. Especially the protagonist himself, who is stupidly kind and harms others and himself. It's okay to offend the powerful in order to save a few common people. It's irrelevant. The key is that when people don't believe that you stand up for the people, you kill people but still publicize it everywhere that you are doing it for the people. As a result, you are caught and coerced by a bunch of people to set up an ambush and kill you. You seem to be kind, but you are really poisoning the people. Your low awareness is disgusting.

Recently, I feel that novels are not interesting anymore. I have switched to reading the comment sections of various books. They are all talented people. I am so happy.

I could have continued reading, but I didn't want to read some parts and skipped reading. As a result, I opened the table of contents and immediately made people abandon the book.

Regarding the plot of this book, after entering the snow world, I felt like all of them were suddenly evil. I was guided by the author at the beginning and had the same feeling. But if you think about it deeply, isn't it like this in the classical martial arts world? In martial arts vendettas, people are killed, or witnesses are killed in order to prevent the news from leaking, and few go to the government to take care of it. Even if you think about it carefully, when the government takes your case, you first have to go to the government to report the case and go through the process alive. In ancient times, this was very difficult even in the world of martial arts. Even in the Double Dragon world, social common sense is close to this. At this stage, I feel that the world in Snow is just a simulation of a martial arts environment in an era earlier in the historical timeline, when "untouchables" were not considered human beings at all. Snow is just a way of letting people around the original protagonist have some extreme evil deeds. The specific description in the book makes me feel that the author is targeting Xuezhong. Later, I looked back at my previous thoughts, and I felt that the middle part was not quite right. After all, according to the current situation, the protagonist's practice is focused on cultivating immortality. Basically, he does not want to revolutionize the times, but simply "pursue great freedom." From this point of view, it seems that the protagonist has not changed, but the plot just needs the protagonist to "eliminate his karma" at this time, so the world just arranges things in front of the protagonist. When he sees it, he wants to do it, so he does it. Thinking this way, it seems that there is nothing wrong. After all, there must be a world for the protagonist to kill and eliminate his own karma, why can't it be a world in the snow. However, I no longer have any doubts about the plot arrangement of this book, but I still have some thoughts to complain about. That is, fundamentally speaking, the classical martial arts world is disgusting no matter which world you think about deeply. Humans are inferior to dogs.

It's obviously Zhu Tianwen, but it's almost 100 chapters long and yet it's still spinning in the world of "The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty". The pace is too slow.

How should I put it? The title of each chapter of the article is awkward. The content is okay. But every time I see the title, it is not so good. I read it at the beginning, but then skipped and quit.

By the way, is there a female protagonist in this book?

Licking Xu, do you understand? Brothers, if you don't run away, how long will it take?

Mixed martial arts hasn't looked good recently

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I have never read The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, so I am posting here to ask, is there Tibetan Buddhism among the Buddhist forces in the original novel? At the end of the Tang Dynasty and the beginning of the Tang Dynasty, Tibetan belief was still Bon. It would be several decades before Buddhism was introduced to Tibet, and the introduction of Tantra would have to wait until a hundred years later, when Buddhism was introduced to India. Although I think it is quite reasonable for Tibetan Buddhism to be regarded as the villain, because it is really evil, but the confusion of time and space makes it easy to play. If the original work has it, it can be used as a background setting, but if it is added by the author... Then it can only be regarded as a background setting.

In the age of fast food, it's all about having fun. The subject matter is good, come on

Please end this mixed martial arts show quickly. Not many people will like to watch it.

Li Chungang wishes that all sincere swordsmen in the world will be able to open the gates of heaven with swords. Deng Tai'a may help Xu Fengnian because of Xu Fengnian's relationship, but Zhang Fuyao will only contribute to severing the separation between heaven and man, including the chicken soup monk who taught the people in the Western Regions for more than 20 years. It was written directly. I don't deny that Xu Fengnian deserves to be killed, but he can't kill them all with one shot.

Author, can't you see the decline in your grades?

The first part is okay, but the later chapters are a bit messy. I suggest you not read the chapters after they are released, as they become more abstract as you go further.

Why is this chapter so shorter?

The super-saved female ghost delivers food to the old demon from Montenegro