Just Be a Monster in History

Personal feeling: No matter what important setting you have in the subsequent plot, as soon as this sister appears and she still needs to be taken care of for a while, as a reader (again, I only speak for myself), I will let it go in one breath.

The plot is okay, but this sister is really annoying

The character design has become a bit fast, the character in the front and the character in the back are completely two people. His brows furrowed for a moment, and he suddenly lost the desire to read any more. The plot development of this sister is too deliberate, as if it is a plot, for the development of this sister rather than the development of this sister for the plot. Writing this sister specifically for this sister has no relevance.

There are less than 100 chapters in total. When I look at the characters, there are four characters. One is a male protagonist and the other three are all female protagonists. A stallion story?

Well, how should I put it? I feel that the subject matter is quite novel, but it also feels a bit bland. Although the protagonist is fighting life and death in the history of evil, it feels like a "supernatural video game" that has nothing to do with reality.

Write well and keep it updated. There will be a day when someone's head falls to the ground.

Wild history must be wild enough, right?🤫

Why don't you cut it? 😅 It's been fourteen hours. I only saw 10 people. How can I make money from this?

It has good potential, but I don't know why so few people watch it.

There are so few people🙂

It's similar to infinite space, but it makes me feel confused. Curing my sister counts as motivation, but I feel like it's not enough motivation. It's not as good as a life-and-death curse 🙂

The writing was okay, but this sister appeared out of nowhere, which was a pity.

Author, have you ever been a big kiln? You just scribble some things and you want to burn them.

I have read Chapter 42 so far, and the content is quite interesting Is there any plot missing from Chapter 37 to Chapter 42? The protagonist discovers that the captain is a female monster through the golden finger in Chapter 37. At the end of Chapter 41, it is written that Zhao Yun asked the protagonist to go to the army to find his senior brother At the beginning of Chapter 42, it is written that the protagonist went to find the captain and called his senior sister from the first chapter I just want to ask, First, has the protagonist revealed the true identity of the captain? Second, is this captain also Zhao Yun's apprentice? (In Chapter 37, it was written that the captain did not continue to ask who he wanted to be his teacher)

There are a lot of discrepancies in details, and many of them appear suddenly without mentioning them at all. For example, the task of the apprenticeship post is not mentioned at all in the previous article, but it suddenly appears later. There are also some paragraphs that are together before and after modification. The same meaning is repeated twice, with different tone. The story is not bad, but the character description is a bit poor. The protagonist is a stupid young man, the sister is a psycho, and there is a girl who is used to introduce humanity but the writing is very unpleasant, not to mention various supporting roles 🙂

The setting is very good, but the plot is not connected well. I often start writing something else abruptly after reading the previous paragraph. I want to learn how to follow the plot of others, but I have never learned it, so it looks terrible. You don't need to do this in just a few chapters to turn people away.

Except for a while of development in the early stage, the protagonist is equivalent to practicing Qi to defeat Daluo in various bosses later on. He is too frustrated and can't beat him at all. No wonder no one is watching. The protagonist's aura is what keeps him alive until he dies! The main character is in the back and everyone has it.

Is this... Repairing the singularity?

The writing is quite good, but there are frequent cases of pretentiousness. Several characters suddenly start to test and guess, and then it ends in a far-fetched way, which is a bit without a beginning or end. After that, the protagonist will confidently do the next thing. As I watched it, I felt as if I couldn't understand. I didn't miss anything. No matter how I said it, I didn't know anything, and I didn't do anything that was foreshadowed.