Cyberpunk: Starting in 2071

This book has a good setting, good writing, and fairly well-rounded characters, but the protagonist can shut up his stupid mouth and stop seeing everyone acting like they want to reveal their ancestors to eighteen generations. I thought that this style of wanting others to know that he is a prophet has been out of date for a while Also, can the protagonist not be so jumpy? When he first arrived in Night City, he behaved like the boss of the world, and I know you are really bad, but there is no need to go around like this to gain a sense of presence, right? Finally, when speaking a sentence, you can insert some actions appropriately. Don't let the sentence be too long. This will make it easier to read and improve the word count. A little humble opinion, but deep love and deep responsibility.

A blank roll is not necessarily confusing. Make a mess that will definitely make people avoid it

In the early stage, open high and go low. As the old saying goes, if you are poor, you can only benefit yourself; if you are strong, you can help the world! He started running even before he learned to walk, and he wasn't afraid of breaking his eggs. What do you mean by the protagonist who saves the world? You provoke so many companies without any power? To be honest, the twist is too harsh. How cool was it to escape with your friends and establish yourself in Night City at the beginning? How good would it be to slowly collect characters and build up your power? Do you have to be as anxious as a mad dog? What are you talking about preparing for the fifth corporate war? Brother, you are only in 2071. There is still a long time before 2077. Can't you develop step by step? That can also extend the length of the article. I don't know what to think, but there is no outline at all. I just write wherever I think, and the more I write, the more rubbish I get! What a disappointment.

Out of 30,000 words a day, I can only extract 4,000 words that are somewhat useful. It may be a bit exaggerated to say that, but I don't know why I wrote more than 10,000 words in one Christmas, and another 10,000 words in a failed entrustment inquiry process. I didn't read it, but it sounded good because it was written in great detail. After reading it, I thought it was all water. The number of words in the update is too much. When I look at the progress, there is still no progress. This is the first big commission. I am sorry for the high expectations I had for this book before it was put on the shelf. Let's see if there can be improvement in the future. Let's wait and see.

Serious mode for next book? Is there another copy of this bad book? Forget it you

Okay, it's been two days since your plot was fucking flying into the sky again. Let me ask, who the hell cares about the moon? Even if you kill everyone on the moon, will it have any impact on Night City? You've already taken down Miles and if you don't write about the interaction process, you'll go to the moon and I'll ask who wants to see it? Sure enough, this IP gives your book a level of popularity that it shouldn't have.

It's a pity that with such a good beginning and subject matter, I can't figure out why it has to be so messed up if it is well written. It can be written as killing Adam Hammer but having his nest stolen. Earlier you created an AI and blew up the virus for dozens of chapters without killing the Night Market Company's AI or causing any big losses. It was already very abstract. I was bragging about it with Lai Xuan, but when I saw it, it was just a piece of cake on the side of the road, and it looked just like the real thing.

If you still want another copy, I'll kill you

Don't take Lucy out and give it to David. Why don't you give it as a daughter?

The protagonist of this book is exactly the same as Yuan Benchu. He cherishes his life when doing big things, but forgets his life when he sees small profits. It can be seen that the author's layout is like this, giving the protagonist such a big hook, a hacker, and full of scientific research capabilities. In the last step, we have a decisive battle with Huangban Xiao. As long as we win, the world will be brighter, and we still worry about how to defeat the three melons and two dates in Gouzhen. When asked why Hansen was not killed first to ensure stability in the rear, the author replied that he did not know the smuggling routes in Dog Town yet and could not fully control the ghost dogs. I laughed too.