Lu Mingfei, Become the King of Elden!

As title

So far, it's quite restored, but I'm curious if there will be another Lani line, and whether it will be Roger or Brother Wolf.

8.5/10 The writing is okay. Among all the Dharma Ring fan fiction, at least I can understand it. The plot is very small and there are no bad points at the moment. Melina is not OOC (many fan fiction portrays women as free women and they are very speechless). I don't know if it is a harem. Summary: Among the fans of the Magic Ring of Ox Demon and Snake God, it is considered a good grass. Lu Mingfei is also considered qualified among the fans. You can wait and see. First throw in eight cards to test the water.

I have been promoted to a deacon, please improve it, and when you update it, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you are at the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are 20 years old, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling mark. Updates may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

Have you ever thought of Lu Mingfei? Some things are written randomly and taken for granted

The advantage is that it has enough dragon clan and enough magic ring. The bad taste is quite good, and it can also remind people of the online scene in the gameplay loop and make people smile knowingly. The disadvantage is exactly the same. Both parts basically do not clarify the antecedents, which is equivalent to assuming that the readers have seen Dragon Clan and have played Ring of Magic. Where can I find someone who can play the game, watch Dragons, and watch fandoms!

No, bro, give me the blue-skinned four-handed monster I'm missing😡😡😡

The prison road was very comfortable to watch when I was in the magic circle. Once the dragon clan felt that it was so fragmented, it was a bit indescribable.

Do you know that I am going to read this book, and when I read the latest chapter, the chapter title ends with the last word, which is very scary?

What kind of crappy book has it started charging for after it's put on the shelf? An author with a bad attitude like you doesn't care about reading the book he wrote, just throw it out of the bookshelf and never see it again! 😡😡😡

There was no entanglement with Chen Wenwen or Su Xiaoqiang (many books put her as the heroine, which is really unnecessary), and even abandoned Nono, which was well received.

Reminds me of the return of the dark soul from the cat side

So far it's very interesting, the character growth is very interesting, I don't know why the results are not very good.

Personally, I feel that Huan's writing is much more interesting than Dragon's. The main reason is that the interaction with other people, the exploration of the world and the growth of mentality are basically completed on Huan's side. On the contrary, it seems that the nondescript feeling effect of Dragon's side is basically gone. The dragon part can be taken alone, but when combined together, it highlights the excellence of the ring side and makes the dragon side boring. However, it is not easy to find a readable Dharma ring fanfic that does not turn the characters into pure stupidity and sweetness. The overall story is relatively good and is a good idea. Four chapters of monthly tickets are presented

Emmm, a familiar mix of soul and acg, a familiar old knight, you are an extraterrestrial demon! ! ! ! ! !

This book reminds me of the black soul journey of the losers on 🐱. I don't know if it's the same person.

One last thing, when the prison road comes out of the shadow land, I don't want there to be any sane horned people in the shadow land.

I feel like this is an area that can be improved. No matter how I fight any monster, it's always 55. I've defeated the Ring Pearl Hunter, Flying Dragon and Dragon King, but it takes 2.3 Chapters to fight the Bad Omen Hunter.

So far, I have come across the best Dharma Ring novel, bar none. Shuangshu's Sword Master has too many original plots with a unique style. Although the fighting is good, the pure player perspective is not brought into it (the same is true for his Sekiro book). Last year's main story of King of Salvation was almost finished, and I don't know what it was written. It has a beginning and an end. This book, with Lu Mingfei as the protagonist, describes the feeling of growing up step by step from a declining boy. Coupled with some reasonable settings by the author, it presents the texture of a Western fantasy novel, not a game novel. The book is not popular, mainly because of the title and the focus of the content. This book cannot be read as a pure dragon clan fan, nor as a pure magic ring fan, because the length is similar, there is no focus, and the pace is very slow. The magic ring part is only in the Lake District now, and the progress of the dragon clan is very little compared to other fans. Looking at the old name on the cover, which is "The Ring and the Traveler", and the guest protagonists from other works in it, we can feel that the author has begun to have the idea of ​​​​writing the protagonist to travel through fate and other worlds from zero. To be honest, before I changed the title of the book, I didn't know what I was going to write about it. Now that I have changed it, it is only readable if it matches the radio wave.

Wait, there seems to be something strange mixed into the heroine's character card.

Did you take Lu Mingfei for granted? I wrote some things randomly, taking it for granted😡😡😡

Is Xiami the heroine? I seemed to see it in the heroine before, but now it seems to be missing 😅

The plot of the dragon world is really boring 😐

The dragon part doesn't look very good, but the plot of the Ring of Law is really good, and Lu Mingfei's growth curve is obvious to all. The more I play the game, the more lonely I get. After burning the small wood, I can't play anymore. But this book makes up for this very well. There are zero confessions of feelings to each other so far. I hope the author sprinkles more sugar 😁😁

By the way, when will a book club be opened and how will the heroine arrange it?

This book is really well written, why are there so few monthly tickets?

It's a great book. I'm halfway through it and I don't find too many poisonous points. Food and grass.

I feel like there are too many magic rings, and the dragon part is not even half of the magic rings.

Brother Emiya went there to make a fortune and didn't appear in more than 200 chapters.

I resonated with it from the very beginning (referring to the genre). I played a complete cosplay of the dual-sword Knight of the Homeless Knight, with exactly the same power points, dual rock swords and gray blood-like swords, carrying the Hook Talisman, Blood Joy, Corrupted Wing Sword, and Millicent's prosthetic hand. In battle, it's pure biting. Bleeding, cutting, and toughing with 3 punches are the reason to be king 🤓🤓🤓