Immortality: My Monster Hunting Ship Has Unlimited Upgrades

It feels like it's still the old routine of constant conflict and fight for interests to the death. It doesn't have the vastness of the ocean at all. It is constantly shaping conflicts and interactions, and it makes people unable to breathe.

When there is already a golden finger on a treasure ship, why do we need to arrange for an old man to give away golden fingers on exercises? Give me the skills and then go wandering around? ? 😅 Find a Lao Deng explosion technique for the orphan protagonist, and then make Lao Deng disappear if he can't write anymore. Why is this plot so confusing? 😅 Qidian Orphanage, do you understand that this male protagonist has no old master behind him? Can't he stand up even if he has a golden finger? I can't say it's poisonous, but it makes people feel uncomfortable if they don't vomit!

The increase in the collection of this book is pretty good, but the number of readers is not high. Are there many people who keep the book? Or is it simply ugly? 😢 It is my first time writing a book and I don't know if it is good or bad, but I still ask for readers to let me put it on the shelf as soon as possible. I will definitely update it by then.

There really are crocodiles in the sea. I remember saltwater crocodiles are from the sea.

There used to be a high-quality fairy tale novel, which also started with upgrading the fish boat. Later, the author turned his butt and ran to the Western Fantasy Shinto. As a result, the readers did not buy it and subscribed. It was too cruel to eunuch.

Occasionally update the AI ​​pictures of Siren in other books

This is my first time writing a book. The writing may be a little immature and the plot control is also lacking. I hope you can bear with me.

The island is full of people with spiritual roots, metal, wood, water, fire and earth. Everyone is born with spiritual roots, and different spiritual roots practice different techniques. The golden spiritual root cultivates attack, the wood spiritual root cultivates spiritual planting, the water spiritual root cultivates water control, the fire spiritual root cultivates alchemy, and the earth spiritual root cultivates earth and stone. The sea is full of infinite unknowns, and there are also many magical creatures. The lantern fish has tentacles on its head, and there are strange beads on the top of the tentacles, also called night pearls. As long as spiritual power is input, it can shine brightly and be used as a light at night. The Spirit Gathering Fish can absorb violent spiritual power to produce spiritual stones in its body. However, because its flesh contains spiritual power, it is often preyed upon by other big fish. It is a common fish because of its strong reproductive capacity. The longer it lives, the better the quality of the spiritual stones it will form. What kind of spiritual grain fish will grow spiritual grains in the soil, what kind of wooden fish will grow trees, black iron fish whose bones are iron, red copper fish whose bones are copper, and rune fish's natural fish skin is a talisman, but what talisman it becomes after being made into talisman paper is random. Even the skills you practice are obtained from the memory of the demon elixir that killed the big monster in the sea. For example, the memory of the demon elixir of the fire-breathing fish demon may contain spells such as spitting fire or controlling fire. The largest sect on the island is the Five Elements Sect, in which the descendants of the elders form various families, but the rise and fall of the family often depends on the backers in the Five Elements Sect. In addition to the islands of the Five Elements Sect, there are also the floating islands of the Sword Sect, the round islands of the Beast Control Sect, the coral islands of the Blood Sect, and so on. In addition to the battles between the island sects, there are also legends about the destruction of the world. There is a tsunami caused by the ocean of destruction, and the land will disappear at that time. The reason why Sword Island can float is because the sword of the previous Sword Sect master turned into an island. However, no one has been able to control it for hundreds of years. They can only continuously transfer spiritual power to maintain its operation. Once the world is destroyed, Sword Island is afraid that it will also fall, so it has been looking for the reincarnation of the previous Sword Sect master. Now that the structure of the story is established and the goals are established, the story can be told.

Didn't they all buy the same outline? Too similar

Encouragement

I read part of it and discovered several problems that novices often encounter. First, they like to apply the same techniques, and if they apply too much, they become stitched monsters. Second, they have no writing experience and just rely on reading some online novels to write. Third, they don't know what kind of story they want to tell. If you want to tell a story to others, you have to tell everyone clearly what your story is about. Naruto in Naruto is quite the Hokage, Luffy in One Piece wants to be the Pirate King, and Detective Conan wants to find the Men in Black organization to solve the problem of shrinking. All famous works tell you what story they are telling. So most novels become more deviated and more difficult the further they are written. So now that I have traveled through time and got a golden finger, I don't know where I will go? Speaking of application, the author has applied a total of fishing harvest settings, immortal cultivation settings, upgrade system settings, deduction settings, etc., Resulting in a large number of settings forming the stitching phenomenon, which is a proper borrowing doctrine. In fact, if you are cultivating immortals, is the upgrade of the fishing boat to harvest or to fight against cultivating immortals? If it is to assist cultivating immortals, then the core story is actually cultivating immortals. Then the question arises. The Immortal Cultivation System cannot upgrade fishing boats. Which system will the two systems ultimately rely on to confront each other? In other words, in the end, it relies on the power of cultivating immortals. This is an article on cultivating immortals. In the end, it is all about cultivating immortals. Those who want to see the harvest of upgrading fishing boats are lonely after reading it. Those who want to see cultivating immortals don't even click in to read your title. The last thing is writing experience. There are many techniques and techniques in writing. You can't learn anything by reading online articles. You should read more famous books to see how those literary giants write stories. How to write in a way that is engaging and empathetic.

I've read a book similar to yours before, in terms of writing style and imagination. I don't know how it was written. There was a book called Star Cruises a long time ago, written by Gu Jianfeng. That book was also of the same type, but that book is still very famous even now. It's a good book. It's full of imagination and various plots. Although it's a bit matryoshka in the back, it's still a good book. I personally like this type of book. I hope the author can write better and better. I'll keep it for now and wait until one day when I exceed 300,000 words, I'll read it again.

Now I don't have the sense of anticipation that I had before waiting for updates, and I don't have the anxiety of waiting now. It's because after reading too much, the plot will flow to the public and become tacky, but keep it up, there aren't many of this type.

The writing is very good, but the elixir recipe is a bit too generic and cheap. High-end information is always the most precious. The control of spiritual root cultivation time is too vague. The heroine has a spiritual root of twenty-five and reaches the eighth level of Qi refining. How can a family only have one foundation without the sixty-year limit to build a foundation? The author has such blurred boundaries that even casual cultivators can build a foundation by relying on tricks. Only by highlighting the difficulty of foundation building can we compare the value of the environment and the protagonist's golden finger.

How to say it? Use words like chase, hunt, etc. As soon as you see them, you will know that you have to skip a chapter.

Pig's feet are really sad: after you succeed, the fairy world will collapse!