The Road to Rivers and Lakes Begins with the Legend of Fire Cloud

The cool goddess!

Bonus points for the female protagonist. When I first watched Huo Yun, I felt that Ye Quan was really stunning, and her temperament and appearance were very suitable for martial arts.

Damn, even though I haven't seen it, I really like this movie. Although the plot is bad, it's a good fight. And Ye Quanzhen, the heroine

The battle between good and evil in the latest chapter is too outrageous. The protagonist and the narration have to explain every fight of the supporting characters by the OB. It has been six chapters and they haven't taken action yet. As the force responsible for the demon sect, the planners acted like they were on vacation, and finally approached the disciples of Huashan. Ning Zhongze is indeed very popular, but is it worthy of being frequently described by the author? It doesn't matter if you open a harem, but it's pure water if you don't open a harem. The introduction says that he wants to take the position of the leader of the Demon Cult. How can such a protagonist convince the elders of this battle between good and evil? The internal fighting caused the three elders to vomit blood. The external fighting told the elders to find their own opponents. There would be no rescue. They fished in the water and found the disciples of Huashan. Where is the responsibility? Where is the charisma? Where are the superb martial arts? In this battle between good and evil, spies created false news to gain the upper hand. If Sanyue is defeated in one go, the protagonist will have a perfect reputation and start in the world, and it will also establish his position in the Sun and Moon God Sect. Writing like this is quite refreshing. If you keep grinding and making twists and turns, I can only say that there are more and more flaws in the plot, logic and characters, and it becomes more and more unbearable.

Your heroine, Yingxue, is well written and has a good character design. In the end, Ren Yingying was accepted again, and she was forced to be reasonable. It was too smart.

It can only be said to be true love👍👍👍

Is the author planning to train the protagonist to be a swordsman? In addition, the main character can be handsome, but he doesn't have to be all dressed in white or be like a young man. It feels like someone who came out of an assembly line and is almost tired of the eyes.

The advantage is that the writing is good and more detailed. The disadvantage is that I have to fight with everyone for a long time. After a few chapters, it is all about fighting, and the B level is not enough.

It's enough to write Yinxue, add Ren Yingying, Xiaoao has been writing for almost more than a month, but I can't finish it, and I'm drunk.

The writing is very good, and it feels very interesting when you read it. However, it is not very friendly to people who have not read the original work.

This martial arts masterpiece is sure to be a hit. Come on, come on.

The author is really brave. I can't see the protagonist's name in the second and third chapters. Many great masters dare not write like this 🙂

Originally, it was interesting to write about Legend of Fire Cloud, but I didn't bother to read the next copy about Xiao Ao. The key point is that Xiao Ao is too long and stinky to write. This book has been thrown on the bookshelf to gather dust. I thought about it today and took a look at it. I found out that it was the eunuch.

From the time after killing the general at the beginning to now, the protagonist is either injured or on the way to being injured. If you can't write about the protagonist's aura of bloodlessness with one sword, then write to highlight the protagonist's injured state>Wang Douzhi's injured state. The protagonist is injured + shoots a cold arrow to Yingxue> Hui'an Ever since the prince and Hui'an played chess, the perception has been declining. The rhythm is obviously to plan a layout and gather strength to attack the Sixth Prince. We have to fight Hui An in overtime, and after the fight we have to practice new martial arts? Didn't the main character have Wolverine's immortality? It was as if all the previous injuries were instantly recovered and no longer existed. ps: (The way he writes it, Hui An is just a tool to introduce new martial arts. The key is, you have no foreshadowing at all? If you want to highlight that Hui An is a martial arts tool, you can write that a man wearing monk shoes walked past the protagonist, but the protagonist did not hear the sound. Because the prince asked the protagonist to step back, he failed to understand this person in the first meeting. Instead of the first time, Hui An did not write anything except that he was the prince's staff. Tell me, he has martial arts?

Seeing that Tong Baixiong couldn't stand it, this book can be divided into two parts, 1. Martial arts, fighting part 2. Strategy part The martial arts fighting is good to watch, but the strategy is very abstract. Fighting always happens in advance. Through fighting, you constantly improve the protagonist's character. At this time, the protagonist's image in your heart It is "wisdom and courage". The protagonist predicts in advance what will happen after Tong Baixiong arrives. It is also said in advance that the protagonist analyzes various reasons, knows various reasons, and makes advance preparations such as self-destruction, etc., And then abstracts it. 1. Tong Baixiong is here, and he is just an elder. He has defeated the four elders before, and the high-spirited protagonist and his wife are here. Shivering, aren't you a bit funny 2. The protagonist knew that Tong Baixiong was coming, knew that he would take the Three Corpses Brain Pill, and stigmatized himself in advance. Isn't your stigmatization just for others to see? Tong Baixiong really saw it, and you still felt stressed. He said that he would give you the Three Corpses Brain Pill, and you were still afraid. Wasn't this all part of the plan? What are you afraid of? The writing almost made me wet my pants 3. With the foreshadowing of force and resourcefulness, the problem of stigmatization and the Three Corpse Brain Pills was not solved by the protagonist himself, but by coincidence, luck, and the factional struggle within the sect... What do you mean by the foreshadowing? It was useless at all, and it was so contrasting that it made me think the protagonist was a clown.

It's 100 chapters, and it's still suppressing the protagonist's combat power, and he can't live or die by himself.

To be honest, the beginning of this book is amazing, and the heroine is also very good. However, the writing is now too fussy with details and seems too procrastinating. I don't know if it's for the sake of ordering money after it is released. I really hope that I can write this good book well and don't worry about ordering money.

Siao Ao is indeed a bit ugly. In a siege, the key to killing ten chapters is to stop for a while and brag a few words. Others are fighting and the protagonist is shopping slowly. Isn't he afraid that the Demon Cult has never been beaten and Yingxue is besieged and killed? (You yourself wrote that she was besieged by three people) It seems that the Demon Cult made a sneak attack. In fact, if there is no help from the protagonist, the Demon Cult will be frustrated at every turn. Anyway, this is what it shows. Each battlefield describes how the elders of the Demon Cult were injured. The protagonist is still slow and leisurely, giving the impression that if the protagonist is slower, the demon sect may be counterattacked, and a little poison will be useless. Looking at it now, if he hadn't been poisoned, he would have been defeated in just a few meetings.

Don't be a eunuch, the writing ✍🏻 is pretty good. Stick to it😡

It can be seen that the author likes Yue Buqun's wife, she is a middle-aged woman 🙂 But Ye Quan is really pretty

The writing style is really great, and it's comfortable to read. I don't know why it's not ranked high.

The writing is okay, but it doesn't seem to have anything new.

Aren't you ready to cut it off? It's good to write ✍🏻