Online Game: The Pokemon Era

It's a bit like "My Pokémon Player". I don't know if you have the same author, but he is trying to kill himself. I don't really want you to be like him later. One chapter update is all dialogue and the plot does not advance at all.

It can be said that it is a high-quality food for Pokémon types, but the first three chapters are a bit messy and it is indeed a bit uncomfortable.

It's really pretty. I have actually long wanted to read novels that combine Pokémon with group portraits, games, farming and development, etc. It's just that this kind of novel is rarely seen. This novel is very good so far. Come on

I feel like there is a lack of a main thread that carries the whole text through, and it's a bit scattered.

It's still quite interesting, but there are a lot of problems with the first three chapters. The main reason is that it's completely unclear who the protagonist is. Would it be better to revise it?

I have written more than ten chapters to set up the world view, but there is no plot at all, and the game experience is also very bad. I entered the game and got a pet. I spent the next few hours reading the plot settings, remembering this and that. The only operation was to select the pet.

There are too many character names at the beginning, and the reading experience is not good when switching back and forth from the main perspective. It is a little better after the main point of view is included. The story is good, no poisonous points, gentle, and good for food The name is not attractive, maybe it can be changed to "This Pokémon Game is Too Real" to take advantage of the popularity of Morning Star.

It's not bad, it has a bit of flavour, and you can also see some shadows of its predecessors. Overall, it's worth looking forward to. But the title, introduction and cover really deduct points, making people have no desire to click in. It can really be optimized.

Really good😆

It just takes time to get the flavor.