In Tokyo, I Discover Amateur Female Celebrities

Personal evaluation (more than ten chapters so far): 6.5-7.5 Points Why does it fluctuate? If we can keep writing steadily according to this rhythm, while maintaining a refreshing career line and a shaping of the emotional line, then I think it can achieve a 7-point rating. If there are novel and unique highlights during this period, then it can reach 7.5 Points. However, I think it is difficult when the initial framework of the character and plot has been determined. It is more about following the routine and formula in the later period, and it stops at 6.5 Points like most similar works. The setting of a beautiful girl full of emotions at the beginning naturally has its high and low limits, but it also completely lowers its upper limit. This kind of writing is no longer new, but the reason why this kind of writing can spread is that it has a level above the passing line. Room for improvement: If the level can be maintained and there is significant improvement in the follow-up, it may reach 8 points (I think it is difficult, this needs to be "reborn"), and "Love You" will be 10 points (if you think Love Game is very toxic in the early stage, "Love Game" should be 8.5 Points, if you think the character is broken in the later stage, "Love Game" should be 9 points). Overall writing style: Smooth, relaxed, interesting, occasionally thoughtful, occasionally clever, but it is too low-key to be considered beautiful Character design: Male protagonist: Compared with most male protagonists, there are some differences, but not many. Heroine: Disadvantages are a bit cliche (core character): tsundere, social fear, admiration The advantage is that the image is concrete (that is, in portraying the character). The character has details in behavior, language, hobbies, and past, which is good (currently only seen in the first heroine, the second heroine knows the follow-up at a glance). Supporting roles: Funny tool roles. Plot: Classic opening pressure, younger sister, green plum, Wen Chao Gong's golden finger solution, relatively mediocre. The advantage is that it is relatively smooth and the rhythm is not draggy (but it also seems rough and formulaic). There is no obvious poisonous spot yet, so it should be maintained. Summary: "Not satisfactory", I think is the best overall review. If you are bored and need a work to pass the time, I think this book is qualified. If you're hoping for something new and fresh, you may be disappointed. Finally: The above is just my personal opinion. Also: The author wants a chapter of 4,000 words. It is best to write a chapter of 2,000 words before it is put on the shelves. In the latest chapter, I saw that the author was anxious. In fact, there is no need. You should have just put the new book into the library. Just keep maintaining the standard. Now that the upper limit has been locked, let's maintain the lower limit and focus on the male and female protagonists.

If possible, please don't keep books! Especially the new book issue! If you think this book is good, please try to read the latest chapter! This is really important to me! Please! Ernie should! As long as everyone keeps reading, I will do anything! 😭😭😭😭

I would like to ask the author if this book has multiple female protagonists? The ending won't be like the last book 😭

The writing is quite fluent. It seems that the author has researched the Japanese awards, industry rules, and industry structure. However, the characters' thinking logic and dialogue are very Chinese. In addition, the author obviously likes to add some details to the dialogue or actions, which makes it look a bit fragmented.

Cut it? There is still something temporary

Very nice! Let's collect and read each other's books! Come on together! Mutual encouragement!