1946: I Picked Up a Beautiful Tokyo Girl in Paris

Wasn't 1946 the year of the Civil War? Are you marrying a female devil?

Never think of the protagonist as a male. If you can accept writing about a female character and insisting on being a male, it will be regarded as food.

The protagonist's lover is probably not a woman, and even if she isn't, she's still a weirdo. Also, the main character is a smoker, which is a poisonous point for me.

It's been quite strange to read recently On the one hand, there are too many characters, and secondly, Haruka has no direct contact with the protagonist and rarely meets. This If you use rescuing Haruka to promote the plot, it seems very strange. The reader's reaction is more like trying to save a stranger. Don't mention it, even saving Dorothy or Lavinia who is particularly good to the protagonist seems very reasonable.

The introduction is very good, but the number of words is too small. I will keep it on the bookshelf for now, and then slaughter it in pieces when it is fattened up😋

The ideas and writing are both great. If we talk about the shortcomings, it is that sometimes it is too literary and artistic, so that it has an embarrassing feeling like "forced sensationalism".

The author has only written traditional literature before, but now he is trying online literature. If you think it's okay, please support me. As long as there is a little feedback, I will stick to it. I'm afraid of writing alone. This story is designed to be very grand. It will slowly unfold the world view of the Witch Era, and connect the Franco-Vietnam War, the US-Vietnam War, the NATO Warsaw Pact conflict, etc... This is a glorious era, I think so, and I also want to write about this era. The author has read many books on the humanities and social sciences, especially the French-Vietnam War, and will try his best to restore that era. Due to the empty setting, not only will there be disputes on the real map, but also different characters will appear in the empty dungeon in the early and mid-term. Because of the setting of The Witch, after 1848, most celebrities are still alive. For example, Belinsky, Dostoevsky, Flaubert, Chernyshevsky, Napoleon III... Everyone has different purposes in this era and works in different directions.

And there are too many new characters, and I can't even recognize them.

How to say... It can be regarded as food and grass for the time being. The world of witches is quite interesting when I think about it. But now that you have accepted witches, then don't think about rationality and logic. What kind of logic do you want in a witch world? Even if it's just a love development game, it's still okay.