Multi-Week Bottom Adventurer

The writing is okay, but there are some details that make me nervous. For example, the part about the dog-headed barbarian god who knew there was a soul attack but didn't take precautions left me speechless. Especially when there was a teammate who claimed to be a soul practitioner, he didn't even dare to use a shield. There is the usual big brother and little girl. Here the author obviously wants to use the calmness of the protagonist to highlight the sadness and anger, but it is obviously unsatisfactory. It is too calm and makes it difficult to see how sad it is. It is like suppressing before expressing, but the writing is good, but the expression is not meaningful.

🍎I also came to Qidian. I can only say that Qidian is still the leader even though I have pulled my hips, and it always attracts people to come to enlightenment.

I may have quantum reading, but what kind of logic is this plot! ! The poison points are endless! ! ! Unacceptable poisonous plot! ! In terms of plot, because Kira Yoshikage is a villain, he enters the protagonist's temporary residence to find the female partner to kill him (the location is a mage tower without a mage, and only relies on the so-called intermediate invisibility. The female partner is an adventurer who is a princess on the edge of the royal family). Then the fight with the protagonist goes to the street, the guards arrive to stop the fight, and then the villain takes the opportunity to get injured and escape. 😅😅 (The villain's crime was already being traced by the guards before, so the protagonist provided clues to the guards to know the general appearance of the villain. ! Poisonous point!) Then the protagonist was temporarily detained, and the guards contacted the high combat power to hunt him down. After the villain was injured, he experienced a mysterious NPC surge in combat power, and the high combat power pursuit failed. The villain uses his golden cicada clone to escape from his shell and seek revenge on the imprisoned protagonist. The villain wants to torture the protagonist to play a game, and if he loses, he shoots himself. The villain has spells to shoot without breaking the defense. The protagonist plays the game and uses up his health bar until the villain has no mana. When the guards and high combat power arrive, he chants a spell and casts a spell to kill the villain to stop him. Then the protagonist agreed to take the opportunity to go to jail for the task of investigating criminals for 30 gold coins? ! 🙂🙂Then the criminal is a descendant of an executive who was bewitched by the evil god. Then the protagonist fights the evil god, and the evil god abandons the criminal. The criminal dies due to the backlash and is badly characterized. There will be no follow-up investigation and no one knows exactly what the protagonist did. Then the protagonist has to do a difficult adventure mission in order to escape from prison! ! ! ! Ah? ? ? ? 😰😰 Killing a serial killer in a detention center in self-defense, and going to jail for being undercover for 30 gold? Then when you get out of prison, you choose to do difficult tasks! ! ! ! ! Then a temporary team of four or five people was formed for the difficult task. The rangers were also from prison. Then they turned against the enemy during the trip, grabbed supplies and ran away! ! ! The official adventure organization has no backup plan or countermeasures! ! ! Then the remaining teammates have to give up the mission, Only one bard teammate has to persist for the sake of "reputation points"! ! If a member of the adventure organization makes a mistake and fails to complete the task, points will be deducted😓? ? ! ! The protagonist must persevere even though there are insufficient personnel, insufficient supplies, and unclear mission information! ! ! The reason is that you can get out of prison because of the mission. If you don't do this, do you have to do other high-risk missions? ? ? ! ! ! ! ! 🤔🤔 Ah? ? Is this an adventurer? ? This logic is too rigid! !

Is he really the author of Curling Blade Long Sword?

My day has arrived. In fact, the round table hall is not Lao Touhuan's round table hall, but BS's memory room.

It's just a matter of description. The previous sentence and the next sentence seem incoherent, which makes it tiring to read. The setting of the work is good, I hope 🍎 can pay attention to the writing 🥺 I haven't finished reading Curling Blade Long Sword. Can any book friend summarize the ending of Bray?

At chapter 60, we see the male protagonist chasing a serial murderer with a foot fetish, and he is imprisoned for chopping the pervert. The pervert is strengthened by a magician to kill the male protagonist, but the pervert wants to torture the male protagonist but they start playing cards together? ? When you lose, you shoot yourself, and you end up losing several games in a row. Then you use magic to block the damage until you run out of mana? And then he was killed by the male protagonist? A bit confusing. . . .

No matter who you are, just take this sword and struggle a little bit.

Is this considered a failure in enlightenment? The entry limit is waived

Then settle down, brother, if you like playing bad chess with a pineapple bun, just play it. 803,000 Monthly votes. Most of the achievements are achieved through the previous fan base. Without fan base, I guess you only need 1,000 monthly votes.

This book is too sick. It writes about the Middle Ages based on realistic logic. In a city of mages, all mages are invisible and everyone is a waste. . . . Does the Archmage specifically award snacks to trash?

1 Pretending to be mysterious, I personally don't like it It's still the kind of memory problem, a group of people sigh around and wait for you to remember 2 The information density is super low Dozens of meaningless environmental descriptions account for half of the dozens of chapters, including descriptions of drinking, eating and drinking with passers-by, and it's not that you are not allowed to mess with the environment. The problem with character description is that you have to synchronize the advancement of the story. After reading dozens of chapters, I still don't know what the protagonist is going to do, what abilities he has, and how to save the world I hate hydrology very much. With this kind of information density, I really don't have confidence that he can write well after VIP.

Author, can you figure out that you are writing a book and not a joke? All kinds of vulgar Internet memes and all kinds of outdated Internet vocabulary make me scratch the floor with my feet. Many words that were embarrassing to watch in short videos five or six years ago or even more than ten years ago are all over your article. It's really embarrassing. The subject matter is really good but the author's writing skills are so discouraging

Why is the protagonist still confused after the big brother incident, not pursuing power, and the little girl died in the end? This makes the protagonist not likable at all. If the protagonist is rescued, he is qualified to continue to be blind, but he is not rescued and does not like such a hard knife.

I'm almost beaten to pieces and I haven't started fighting yet. The clown boss has taken up a lot of chapters. Can I start fighting in the next chapter? Kill, kill, kill.

Why do we have to rush through the ruins? Normal people should think that this is a certain death situation. Why is the protagonist so confident in charging forward 😥

It's hard to read the last few chapters. It's useless for people I know to read them.

It should be changed into a light novel, not a fantasy style

I was dumbfounded by the long curling sword. I cried so much at night, especially the part where Naruko died.

The writing of the novel is good, but the plot is too blunt. It's really better to have a system issue a task so that the protagonist can't escape. Otherwise, like when the protagonist returns to his hometown to investigate the mission, the five-person group turns into a duo as soon as they arrive. I really can't figure out why the protagonist would continue.

"Light a bonfire at the fork in the road of destiny, choose your own sword, and go on a fateful adventure with the broken soul. The protagonist struggles between the pragmatic dream of saving money for retirement and the grand mission of saving the world. When the power of the primal god and the transcendent awakens in the blood, the bond with the souls is tempered into poetry in the choice of life and death.

Another book called The Vigilant by this author is also quite good.

The writing is quite touching. I can only say that it is a pity that the ending of the prison part was too bad, otherwise the score would have been mentioned.

Rt, why does the protagonist still have to bear the crime after being released from prison? I feel so frustrated and can't accept it.

Can apples still be steamed? Don't cut it in half 😭 Just keep it and send it away, it's over

I recommend a book called "I Can Go to the Past and the Future" by a lolita-sounding female author. It is a passionate adventure about the future interspersed with daily love. It has multiple female protagonists and is mainly based on the floating city in the interstellar era. It is a timeline setting story with the magic potion sublimation + sequence as the core. There are no bloody routines or brainless plots. The whole thing is relaxed and interesting. Brothers and sisters who are interested can come and read it.

Yo! Look who I found? Turns out to be an Apple guy

I just picked up this book, can anyone tell me about it?

Apple, did you use AI to polish this book? It has reduced a lot of the taste you had before...

It's a pity that in the early stage, I was constrained by adapting to the writing style and wasted three golden chapters. In the middle stage, the Barbarian God was solved too perfectly to show the sense of oppression. In the emotional line, Renee was pushed hard but I risked not taking her with me. Shona is the main palace. Do you understand?