Gou Dao Cultivation: Start with Ten Times Your Lifespan

The monks use hoes to open up wasteland. Is it because the magic is not useful? It's still a magic that people are stupid and can't relate to. Every time I see this kind of plot, it becomes very abstract.

It's okay, but there are many shortcomings 1. There is another immortal cultivating family 20 miles away, and the protagonist doesn't even know about it 2. In order to limit the protagonist's lifespan to ten times, it is very difficult to cultivate immortality 3. To open up the wilderness, there is another family 20 miles away. The newly discovered spiritual vein is a branch of the Helian family. So the pioneering is within 20 miles, which is a bit funny

For a protagonist whose longevity is the golden finger, a turbulent environment should not be set up in the early stage, and the time span should also be enlarged. Otherwise, the effect of the golden finger will not be reflected at all. Since there is a golden finger setting, but the golden finger is of no use, wouldn't it be lonely if the golden finger is not set?

It's this kind of literature again. Isn't it possible that there are no mortals? Looking at other books, it is impossible for a person to live in a thatched house in a biography of cultivating immortals. Doesn't he lack some space? In the world of immortality, a country is tens of thousands of kilometers away, but it lacks tens of square meters of your land. A person who practices immortality at the first level of a mortal cultivator is stronger than a gang in a city.

It's better to find a hole and bury yourself

Will you become stronger as you live longer? The longer a waste lives, he will only become an old waste. The old bastard will always be the old bastard and cannot become Xuanwu.

The protagonist is repeatedly placed in dangerous situations

The protagonist obviously has ten times the life span, but he is still so anxious to improve his strength. So where is the advantage of the protagonist's ten times life span?

It's been a routine for many years, and something will happen every time you change the map, right?

It stands to reason that with so much lifespan, we should find a way to burn it. As a result, the protagonist is running around and wasting time.

What can we do except increase the water level by 10 times? Waste

I'm going to arrange a fight. It seems that the novels about cultivating immortals will only write about fights.

Ask the author if the protagonist is real or fake. I like Gou Daowen, but the protagonist cannot be a coward.

Can an ordinary person solve mathematical conjectures at the age of 200? Don't you know that you don't have that understanding? Like a cultivator

You can't write Goudao. . . .

Ten times the lifespan, it would be a pity not to die

In fact, I prefer that the protagonist is a hedonistic cultivator. The protagonist has ten times the life span, so he should be very calm.

How can I say that the world of cultivating immortals is more talent-hungry than the world of mathematics, and this place even worships geniuses. In reality, no matter how genius you are, your achievements in only four or five fields will be remembered in the industry, but there are often seven or eight of them in cultivating immortals.

Do you have an outline? Do you write from what comes to mind? You are not writing a story, you are writing a running account. Only a story can attract people to read.

The protagonist Goldfinger has ten times the lifespan. As a result, the protagonist keeps seeking death

Different from the plot of Bad Street, the plot design of this book is innovative but not obtrusive! There are not many poisonous points and the character design is reasonable. As a 30-year-old reader, I highly recommend it! I hope the author stays level!

The son of a rich man cannot sit down in the hall

Is it really gone?

If you compare it with similar books like "Mortal Steady Gou Dao Liufang City"... The writing is really bad... The key is that it plagiarizes a certain book "Mortal City" with almost the same plot!

Long life? ? Has the protagonist practiced a magic skill that burns his lifespan, and then risen up against the odds?

When you still have 500 years to live, will you die if someone cuts off your neck with a knife?