Traveling Through Dong Tianbao, Starting with Rescuing His Nephew Zhang Cuishan

A time traveler who has lived for a hundred years, he makes no preparations and has no arrangements. He does everything by himself and will not do anything until the last moment. He also got stuck in saving Zhang Cuishan, so he surrendered.

He was directly persuaded to quit because of his name. Zhang Cuishan could not be saved. He was sworn to an executioner who was so guilty that he deserved to die. He was going to die just for that. In order to protect his sworn brother, he deserved his death. What could he save? Yin Susu deserved to die, let alone why Zhang Laodao didn't express his anger at the six major sects, because he couldn't explain why, and his disciples had themselves to blame. No matter what the purpose of the six major sects is, they can make sense as they are the masters of suffering. Why do some people think that Jianghu must kill decisively? What is Jianghu? It is not a game pk. You punch me and kick me. I am stronger than you and you just listen to me. Pure fart. Do you have nuclear weapons or what? Childish

How many good things do people in the world have? It's too ink-stained, right?

The lowest-ranking person I have ever seen is the one who has been number one in the world for a hundred years. To keep up with the plot, he has accomplished nothing in a hundred years. He has no organization or power. He insists on assassinating high-ranking officials and generals for a hundred years, but it seems to have no effect on history.

According to my experience of more than 20 years, as long as the title is like this, the content of the book is not very good.

After traveling for such a long time, it's better to follow the plot and travel so early for nothing...

The essence of Jianghu is to kill decisively and respect the strong How many people did Zhang Sanfeng's Jiazi Dangmo kill It relies on strength to shut others up

Dong Tianbao should work hard to climb up, no matter what the means. After becoming a general, he will wear a yellow robe and overthrow Bao Yuan, and he will wear a yellow robe. At this time, I was watching Zhang Junbao. He's just a warrior hiding in the mountains. No matter how high your achievements are, it doesn't matter. If you receive orders from Heaven, you will live a long and prosperous life.

After reading 10 chapters, I decided to quit. The protagonist lives a hundred years in vain, there is nothing much to say

If such a brilliant invincible novel can be written like this, you are also invincible Dong Tianbao, who lives to the heaven, is a proper invincible Liushuang script How can a 100th birthday party be delayed to that extent? The last one failed to save him, and the Nine Sun Magic Skill was taken later, and Zhang Wuji was hit with another palm Can Dong Tianbao still let people run away? If you don't smash his bones and spread his ashes, how can you leave any future troubles if you want to see his body after death? You are just a skinned Dong Tianbao, but you have somehow failed to accomplish anything And you, a time traveler, obviously have invincible force, but you still follow the plot incompetently? You yourself said you want to travel through the heavens, why don't you hurry up and get through the dungeon? Writing this kind of thing, everyone knows some of the plot by default. Why is it so complicated to write? Do you consider yourself a traditional literature writer? If you don't repair in the early stage, there will be no hope. The pace is so slow. You can't come up with anything in more than ten chapters. A time traveler with a normal mind should come over and get the black jade discontinuation ointment. All the Xuan Ming lineage will be wiped out, and everything will be solved. Just scare the major factions at the birthday banquet and tell them to get out Things that can be written in three or five chapters are invincible even if they are dragged to this point

That's so rude, where the hell did you learn this?

In other words, the protagonist is the same age as Zhang Sanfeng, and a hundred-year-old man goes to the rivers and lakes every day to support the rebels. Isn't it funny?

I can only say don't read it, it makes people angry. What are the three views and thoughts? Nothing has been done for a hundred years. The person who wanted to kill his wife is not killed. The explanation is to throw the person off the cliff and live. He also preaches love for his wife. Everything that should happen to his nephew Yu Daiyan and Zhang Cuishan's family happened. The reader asked the author if he didn't save Zhang Wuji earlier. The author said that this was to teach his nephew a lesson. How useless are these nephews? Gu, there is no lesson here for Yang Xiao and Ji Xiaofu who generously brought others together to let others live a happy life and make their nephew sad. From this, it can be seen that the author is extremely flattering to outsiders and extremely oppressive to internal people. He also flatters others and makes them talented because of their closeness. It is estimated that the author is either a young adult and does not read much, or is over 40 years old and is extremely selfish.

No matter whether he is Dong Tianbao or not, he is still a time traveler. He is a hundred years old, and he does not have the temperament of a centenarian. He feels like a child in his twenties. The gestures and gestures described are all childish. I don't pick out weird settings like "Join the Rebels" like the comment section, I can tolerate those. The key point is that your writing about people, things, and behavioral logic is not adequate. This is the problem😥

Finally, there is a book about Tianbao traveling through Jin Yong. To be honest, Tianbao is just like Duan Lang, he is the protagonist in other works. I hope Tianbao can travel through other worlds such as Tianlong. After all, Tianbao's talent is the same as Junbao's.

666, Being bullied, he came to defeat the opponent and gave gifts to the hypocrites on the other side.

Dong Tianbao? This guy is a traitor

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The protagonist is a fierce person, but the writing and rhythm are slow, and it is natural for the author to rush to the street.

I don't even know why I wrote this about pulling my crotch, except that it's disgusting.

. . . I just saw the AI ​​video of Dong Tianbao rescuing Zhang Cuishan on Station B yesterday. I didn't expect that the starting point is also full of talents.

The Oriental Invincible Training Manual is because the protagonist travels through time, so how should we understand the original work? Can we only break away from the original work and treat it as a new book? But you traveled through time based on the original work, so you can't justify it!

Dong Zhenren goes on, why don't you say it anymore? Let's update next.

As title. Just confirmed that it stopped at Chapter 40.

I felt that the following content was not very interesting, so I gave up. It's not fun to wear it from behind