Folk Customs Begin with the Nuo Opera Troupe

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The more I look at it, the more I feel that the story and atmosphere are really good.

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Come on

Why are you such a plagued ox and horse so lazy, why don't you just finish the remaining chapters quickly? Don't you know the methods of Bodhisattvas like us? Is it because the monthly ticket knife that bullied me is not sharp? If you update it carefully and frequently, the Buddhas will be happy. When the Buddhas are happy, it will benefit you.

My heart was moved, and I came here in response to Yongzhen Bodhisattva's appointment.

Not good, I can't stand it! The Tibetan secrets in the previous book are bearable because most readers are not familiar with the mysterious environment, customs and customs of Tibetan areas, and the characters' dialogues are written in a convoluted way that fits the readers' impressions and imaginations. I still can't stand the way it is written about China. The witchcraft and Nuo dramas are not unusual, and the dialogues are not as expected. I just think it's too convoluted and boring.

I feel that the author's book has a problem, the coherence is very poor I have this problem with the previous books. I don't know the details when I need to, and I don't omit the details when I'm reading. When I'm getting excited, it ends suddenly or I change the copy. I wasted a lot of words on some unimportant parts. I read half of the last book and I couldn't follow it. I hope the author can change this problem.

An extremely biased author. All books have the same problem, and it doesn't change at all. The first copies of several books are well written, so the first impression is very good, and many people follow them. Then the more they are written, the more abstract they become, and the more readers they read, the more they fail to achieve results. The two biggest problems are that the wording is obscure and cumbersome, which was fine in the early days. Basically, after one or two hundred chapters, I can no longer control it. Half of the content of one chapter is turned over and over, described in abstract words. Writing is similar to AI. Second, the plot jumps around, is incoherent, and cannot form a smooth story line. There is quite a beauty in playing an open world. You can play the main story today, start the side story tomorrow, and do half of the tasks the day after tomorrow. When you find that the time for the limited time task is up, you will do the time limit task again. It's okay to play games, but the story line of the novel shouldn't jump too much. The author should study and correct his mistakes. Now it's purely self-pleasure, and readers can't stand it.

Yongzhen Bodhisattva has not yet achieved the highest level, and I hope it can be supplemented in the future. It is indeed a bit difficult to defeat the final BOSS and run away 😅

Write a book review Advantages: The author's setting is quite good, and the plot can be developed reasonably. At present, there are more foreshadowings, and the world view in the later period should be more interesting. Disadvantages: The author has certain writing skills but is too clumsy. He is water for the sake of water. He has to speak clearly in one or two sentences. Moreover, he always uses some idioms, poems, and ancient sayings inexplicably to show off his writing style or pretend to be profound, which makes him look very dramatic. I think if you want to be a great writer, you can do it but you can't fool the readers. You should do it naturally, at least it can't affect the plot or the reading experience.

Oh my god, why are there so many double quotation marks? It affects reading so much and is disgusting. It would be fine if some rare or special nouns need to be marked. But the problem is, why do you feel that it is a word and you have to add double quotation marks? Your double quotation marks must be used as frequently as commas and periods.

Have you ever skipped Nuo opera? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Like those platinum masters who release new books, they will place advertisements in old books or readers. Of course, it may be that the word count is not high at the beginning and the extra chapter is not finished yet, so the author feels that it will take some time.

I wasted all my votes last month and didn't vote for you. Do you know what you are writing now? The characters don't stand up at all. What each person is like, except you know it in your heart, the readers can't understand it at all. What do you see here about Yongzhen's great perseverance, great awareness, and great compassion in the previous book? What is the protagonist going to do? The master and several young apprentices were described very well in the beginning, but later they were abandoned because their levels were too high. There are no characters that people can like, and there is no story at all. I originally made a dark blue template with dots, and then either follow your own path, or write the opening scene better. When I first started watching it, I was excited about the abilities the protagonist gained, but now I don't understand the purpose of the abilities the protagonist gains. I feel like it's useless In the final analysis, it's because everyone thinks this world is false. You originally created a historical background, but the people and even high-ranking officials in it are useless. In addition to the fact that this emperor really succeeded in cultivating immortality, you can say that it is a world of personal power, and I have not seen any changes he made. In the final analysis, it feels like the background of this world is dispensable Even if all the attention is focused on the fighting skills of you few awesome characters, it is not impossible to switch to the style of weird fairy tales. But from time to time, there will be plots where the county magistrate wants to act like a monster, and it really goes all the way here and there. I feel like I have been firmly bound by this setting. Don't always think about writing big scenes. The weird and terrifying plot starts from the small details. The constraints on everyone's living conditions and the changes that are different from normal dynasties are the details that make your novel authentic and believable. The character has no charm, and one cannot expect what choices and changes he will make.

The back part is too abstract. I feel like the author has a lot of ideas in his mind, but he can't write them out in pieces. It's too stream-of-consciousness and can't be read clearly.

The author is sick again. It's still the same old problem. First, the story arrangement is really bad. The story has all kinds of extraneous branches, and the relationship between the branches and the main line has not yet been established. It's like a person playing an open world game, doing the main plot today and the branch plot tomorrow. Some don't do it halfway, and some do it in three days. It's okay to play games like this, as long as the novel has a clear story line. Another one, all kinds of abstract, obscure and meaningless descriptions. Take the recent chapters as an example, this father-in-law is fishing for Yintu. The plot that I really want to write is just full of ups and downs. Just set up an altar and directly catch the plot, which is extremely simple. A large chapter of more than 3,000 words, just five or six chapters. After squeezing all the water out, a 2,000-word chapter can last for two chapters of plot. Don't blame someone for saying that your writing looks like AI. After writing so many chapters, there is a reason why the novel is still Level 1. Didn't the author consider learning and correcting his mistakes? You have three books in a row, which is a mistake.

This book is considered useless. The author should stop writing such obscure words. I could barely accept the previous book because it was the first time I encountered it and the content was novel and attractive. However, this one is still aesthetically fatigued. If you write a novel in traditional vernacular, you will definitely get good results. There is no need to use this form. You may want to be unique and unique. My own very unique style, but there is really no need to do this. If you do it this way, your grades will not be good, and it will take a lot of effort to refine this kind of writing yourself. Why choose this thankless way of writing? It is better to return to normal writing. In this way, your grades and reputation will definitely be better than now, and you will make more money. Why not?

It's very awkward to read, all the details written purely to increase the number of words

The ancestor's name is Wu Tianwanggu, the master's name is Wu Jingbao, and the protagonist's name should also be changed. As soon as the inspiration came to him, he was called Wu Bodhisattva Man.

Are you writing a manual? The narrative is bland and emotionless, and all the explanations are tasteless.

This book is indeed not as well written as Butter Bucket Bodhisattva

Ever since I ate the Rain Master, the plot has gone crazy, and the descriptions have become abstract. I feel that the key point is that the protagonist's abilities are not properly introduced. You can see the protagonist's charm flying here and doing something, and then flying there and doing something. The protagonist flies too fast and has too strong combat power, resulting in insufficient scenes and detailed descriptions. The people watching were confused and didn't know what to say.

Well, the author has been resting for more than 20 days. He has rested enough. It's time to publish a new book. I came here with the previous book Yongzhen Bodhisattva. I tried to support this book but it ended up being exhausted. I promise I won't support the next one. I will release a new book quickly.

I'm convinced. No one said that this book has an ending. If you order it all, there will be no ending. Future readers should pay attention.

I didn't follow up on the rest of this book. It's a big book but the author's writing power is limited. It's a bit difficult to complete the story. I'm looking forward to the next one.

Alas, I lost my previous account. My name was Emperor Huangtian. I decided on the author's last book and posted there. If you see it, remember to give me a grave. But this book is too short. It was finished in more than 300 chapters, which is shorter than Yongzhen Bodhisattva.

I find that many novels nowadays are impetuous and eager for success. It's like having a dog behind you. It gives people a very tired feeling.

Damn, I'm already impatient even before I've read this book. It's sad.

From now on, they are all dealing with the small things left by Lin Feng. Lu Feng, Shen Feng and Wu Feng are all dealing with the fallen branches and leaves, and the big ones were done by Lin Feng.