I Awakened the Immortal Cultivation Panel

First of all, I am a reader who has almost fully subscribed to the author's last book, and then naturally this book is also on my bookshelf. I barely made it to chapter 30, and I couldn't stand it anymore. I probably felt like I was going to cut it. First of all, I personally think that modern cultivation of immortality is not particularly suitable for farming literature. Unsuitable points: 1. The protagonist cultivates immortality, friends and family, do you let them live forever or just ignore it. Conclusion: Whether you choose to let your family live forever or die of old age, both are poisonous points. 2. You are cultivating immortality in modern times, but you still dominate. But instead of pretending to be a slap in the face, you still choose to farm. Where does the reader's sense of satisfaction come from. (Also let me tell you, in modern times, the only thing that focuses on cultivating immortals and pretending to be a slap in the face is that the two books I read began to collapse when they reached a million words)

If you can accept that the protagonist is a waste, you can watch it.

I just gave up after reading the first three chapters, repeatedly stressing that I feel sorry for myself. If there is no system, I can understand. With the system, and the upgrade is very simple, I dare not say 100% of people, at least 99% of people will not say that they will work hard, but they will never pretend to be cool and talk about how they can be calm. It is purely to reduce the level of intelligence.

Poisonous Points 1: The protagonist works like a mentally retarded person and gets a spiritual planter and changes his profession directly. He doesn't try to see if there are other professions. If the protagonist can only have one profession, it will be useless 2: After getting the profession, the protagonist keeps emphasizing that the system is useless. It's too difficult to gain experience in one minute. I don't want the system.

Academic integrity

Author, I think you have made a mistake common to other farming novels, which is to say that the things you cultivated are obtained from friends, but other novels can write like this because they can't explain the origin of these things. Originally, these things were given by the system, but you don't It's the same, you cultivated it yourself, it didn't appear out of thin air, you just added some nutrient solution in the middle. You can say this was passed down from your ancestors, or you saw it in a book. It is better than what you said your friend gave you. After all, if you really need to find a friend, where will you find it? This lie is too easy to expose. Wouldn't it be embarrassing then?

There is too much nonsense. In the beginning, parents are offering sacrifices to heaven. If you want to die, just die cleanly. When relatives push it, it is all nonsense.

Putting the cart before the horse, you can cultivate immortality just by jumping on the horse, but if you don't pay close attention to cultivation, you will achieve something but nothing. Are you really not afraid that others will know that you are not normal? In the early stage, it's a matter of whether a weakling should be low-key or low-key. Once you have the strength, you can do whatever you want. But you can't think carefully about some logic in the article. Didn't you represent yourself when you wrote the book? I really want to come out as soon as I come out!

A good article about leisurely cultivation of immortality, written as a street article about selling Viagra in 996

The protagonist is a wasteful and imbecile person. He is unwilling to work harder even if he is dead. He still scolds this and that. It is really outrageous. This shows the author's character. Really, the author cannot make money by writing novels. He should find other ways to survive.

The biggest failure appeared, making alchemy in a stainless steel pot! This is a bit too much. It is so easy to practice and ordinary people can live forever by taking medicine, but it is still useful to practice! So easy! Other immortality novels wouldn't be that difficult! Without aura, we can only rely on the system! Your alchemy skills are so powerful, do you think those powerful people are fools? You can still make money through large-scale sales, and they won't doubt you or investigate you? The power of science and technology is so powerful, but it is not as powerful as the elixir you made! To write like this is to treat the readers as idiots! There is no logic, author! How do you keep up with this?

Do you mean to just grow a lychee at home and basically ignore it, and then the world's number one lychee comes out? Treat the whole family as fools, right? Isn't it reasonable to say that the latest high-end foreign lychees given by friends are more reasonable than yours?

The article about cultivating farmers and cultivating immortals is quite good at the beginning, but the following chapters are like selling medicine, selling Viagra, which is awesome.

At this level, he can reach Sanjiang.

Creativity is very popular, but there are several core issues that have been improperly handled and made it difficult to watch 1. The golden finger is too big and too omnipotent. It doesn't matter if the world background is ancient times. People with poor information and low awareness can cover it up for any reason. In the modern technological background, on the contrary, abnormal or excellent aspects will be very conspicuous. This situation cannot be concealed by having friends, good land, and good quality. 2. The direction of writing is uncertain. Daily life is still a pretense and struggle or even other things. There is no clear goal. The most unpleasant thing is to follow the wind. It is impossible to include all factors, and there must be trade-offs. 3. The business layout is too trivial. I really doubt that the author has ever been to the vegetable market to buy vegetables every day? It feels too strong to be an armchair game or a simulation game, and many plots are obviously driven by intelligence.

Is the author a woman? Feeling a bit girly

I just read the few photos of the interaction with Li Shimin from the beginning. It was awkward beyond words, so I skipped it. I don't know how other book friends feel about it If you don't know how to write this emotional scene, let's not write it. It's too deliberate. Does it take a month to confirm the relationship? Not all books must have a female protagonist Why do I feel so tired in the last few chapters? They are comparable to cows and horses, and there is no sense of leisure at all. Isn't this the story of leisurely cultivating immortals in the countryside? And the last two chapters of buying fish and birds, my sister, just popularized the science in two chapters, and I won't scold you in the free chapters.

How is this different from the farming writing routines of 10 years ago?

It's all personal emotions, and the smell of diaosi is overwhelming. Reading this book will make your day miserable.

Did Sanjiang collect money? This article is too lame. I have seen several new authors on the new book list, and their writing is better than this.

Selling medicine on WeChat? Do you want to leave evidence of your illegal medical practice?

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After waiting for so long, life and death unknown, he is dead.

What a pity!

The author has no outline. This should be an urban supernatural/immortal cultivator rather than a romance novel.

After reading it, except for being a bit bland, everything else is fine. I personally think this kind of slow daily farming is not bad. I can accept it as long as there are no big poisonous spots. I need to use more special plants and raise more spiritual pets. There is no monthly vote this month, please vote for recommendations first, come on!

Come on! If you write the urban life series about cultivating immortals well, it will definitely become popular. Impetuous life needs a breath of fresh air, and plainness is the real thing.

No, buddy, why don't you stop writing? I'm a bitch and I love reading. Please keep writing. Please 😭

What has the author been doing? Why hasn't it been updated? I just found out today. I wanted to read the big chapters in total, but they were gone 😭

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