My Mobile Phone Connects to the Game Warehouse

I saw more than 100 points. To be honest, there is no climax at all. No matter how good your one-page warehouse is, it should have about 50 cells each. You wrote a few things on one page. Furthermore, the author can add some low-level martial arts into it. Otherwise, what is the use of your equipment and so on? Learn more from other people's fighting stories. You have now opened the 7-page warehouse. It doesn't feel like it's of much use. Just sell something? Here's the secret book. Cultivation. No matter what happens, try some magic or something. There are peaches in the warehouse. Do you think you can continue writing like this? ? ? At least there should be something from the cultivation world in the early and middle stages. . .

After reading more than 20 chapters, I can't stand it anymore. First, the plot is too bland. This warehouse has no use except giving you a pot of gold. The second is the character. The protagonist (the author) talks a lot every day, and wants to be in the air every day, but when a girl really gives him a chance, he acts like a loser. He does nothing except make fun of himself in his head. There's also the point of being a bitch, if you see a woman, you're going to be a bitch. Either you just lick her with the purpose of chasing her and having fun with her. But if you lick just for the sake of licking, it's disgusting. It was as if he had never seen a woman in eight lifetimes. In the following library routine, when a girl comes to your door and people take the initiative, why don't you just follow the stick and get out of singles? Still a waste who only knows YY. Third, the main plot of the book cannot be seen. Although the warehouse is unlocked, so many pages of the warehouse are unlocked. Apart from taking two things out to exchange for some money and eating personal ginseng fruits, there is no other use. Do you only put one thing on one page of the warehouse? After the protagonist has a hangup, what is his goal in life? Is it for immortality? Or to dominate the world? Or be a financial emperor? Or will I change the picture and take the path of cultivation in the future? I can't see it at all, there is no main plot, I just mess around with my classmates every day. The final summary is that it has no interesting points and the subject matter was wasted.

Is money more important than life? If I had this kind of ability, the first thing I would think of would be immortality, and then power, but why can't I think of money?

After reading the book review, don't be discouraged by the author. We like this type of novels, and they are not tiring to read.

There is a young woman in urban literature, is it annoying 😥

After reading ten chapters, there is no highlight at all. The main character is also a waste.

I can't walk when I see a woman, especially if she likes second-hand products

The setting drew me in, but the protagonist's strong sex scent put me off.

The relationship between men and women is indeed a failure and only attracts entry-level readers. Old readers all like that kind of storytelling and novel plot. It is really cliché to add a bunch of old-fashioned relationships between men and women. Nowadays, the ambiguous flow of showing off wealth and slapping someone in the face is really embarrassing.

In Longkong, he asked Banzhi to give him a book list, but he couldn't find the book in the book list, but he fell into this trap. 👍

It's a good story. It's very poorly written. The storyline is bland and jumpy. The preface doesn't match the postscript. I'm flirting with many people at the same time. I just don't recommend it. I also privately modify the content of Eight Honors and Eight Disgraces and use various ways to charge for the word count. It's really rubbish. I despise it🖕🏻

This book is so creative. What did you write it in?

I laughed when I saw the protagonist in the first chapter saying that he earns his own tuition and living expenses for his family. City people don't understand how hard he is. A college worth more than ten thousand a year would cost three books. Knowing that his family is not good, he studies hard and gets scholarships and poverty subsidies. He can earn more than ten thousand a year and is working hard to participate in competitions. You can still have extra money to fall in love. This kind of person who blames his bed for not being able to have children and complains about the gap between the rich and the poor because he doesn't study hard is a sincere idiot! !

I can't stand the first chapter. The tuition fee is 10,000 and the gold fee is 2,000 per month. The tuition burden is so heavy! Lowered my IQ

I came across this book by accident and clicked on it to read it, only to realize that I had read a few chapters of this book last year and then threw it away. However, I clicked on it and left a comment. Why is the game warehouse capacity so small? Even a warehouse is not enough for a backpack.

Author, not many people read your book. Most of them are my trumpet. I will call 233 for you to take a look. 😁

After reading 20 or 30 chapters, I felt that it was unremarkable, like giving you a sum of money and leaving the rest to show off your wealth.

If the protagonist hadn't died countless times, a single person could have dealt with him at no cost.

It's too watery and the whole book is not enjoyable at all.

Such a good creative subject makes you write like this, I am speechless.

The writing style is very casual, a bit soliloquy, and self-exciting. You can read it while reading.

I can't stand it anymore, it feels like my intelligence is being pressed to the ground and being rubbed like crazy

There are quite a few chapters missing. Look, there is one missing chapter.

Actually, it's not bad. I finished this book during the book shortage, and read it twice. When the author wrote a book for the first time, he should be considered a novice. Anyway, I think it's actually quite good. Who hasn't come from this stage? Right? The writing gradually improved. After all, there was nothing anyone could do about it. It reached a very high level from the beginning.

I want to know what game the novel is about

The idea is good, nothing else

😄The author will update quickly

The tiger bone wine and daughter's red wine we play are both of the same quality...

Seeing the post is very useful for learning.

😚Come on, here we come