Only Come to the Growth System When You Are Thirty

Introduction: System flow, single heroine, daily novels, life on the flat [Recommendation Index] ★★★☆☆ [Story Concept] ★★☆☆☆ [Character Creation] ★★☆☆☆ [Narrative Techniques] ★★★☆☆ I am posting a book review again, and I feel that this book is a pity. - I don't know whether the author already wanted to take the route of a single female protagonist from the beginning, or whether he decided on it halfway through. Originally, the author created three girls, but the last two disappeared completely. Zhong is the sister of his friend's wife, and Zhou is the heroine's best friend. But they don't appear in the later part of the book, which doesn't make sense. No regrets, just a pity for two passers-by. - The system has disappeared in the middle of the book, only a gift package is given on birthdays. The male protagonist also deviates from the systematic daily schedule later in the book, but this is not explained at all in the book. Overall, this system looks like a girl abandoned by a scumbag. After all, in the early stage, they sang lullabies to you every day. - Perhaps because I am also from Cantonese, I feel very connected to the settings in the book. It is a pity that the characters and original settings are not well used in the whole book. - In the later stage, the male protagonist suddenly became angry and wanted to become stronger, but half of it was because his wife pushed him half way, but unfortunately he just couldn't enjoy it. This is related to the dull life of the protagonist himself. It's the kind of "brother, you don't have this kind of personality, why do you want to compete for Vanity Fair?" If you don't want to be ordinary, you will rush forward early in the morning, otherwise you will continue to live a mediocre life, in the end, your character will collapse a bit. - Overall, this book can be read at a glance. There is nothing particularly toxic in the early and middle stages. But don't expect too much from this book, especially the passerby characters. I hope the author will continue to work hard and improve it when writing this book.

Why do I feel like the quality has started to seriously deteriorate? I'm just trying to make up the word count.

Let me ask, Chapter 202, didn't you say you should bring two pots of bougainvillea back? Did you forget the role? (~_~💧)

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It's absolutely amazing. The audience for system and time travel was me when I came to junior high and high school in the early days. It was still me when I was in college. It's still me when I'm 30 years old.

The protagonist is a stubborn person who pretends to be aloof, and the story line is drawn out and lacks any focus. He is very pretentious, and he can pretend to be noble even when receiving a gift, which is comparable to the moral deities in the courtyard. None of the characters are well created, and they completely reflect the author's childish worldview and ideas. Especially my relatives, how can I have such shameless, irresponsible parents and sisters who leave their children to the protagonist all day long without any words of gratitude or consciousness, as if the little daughter is dead. The younger one is also a shameless person who eats and drinks, and a cousin writes like a holy mother. The heroine is like a junior high school girl who has not grown up, and her emotional description is childish and pitiful.

Let's start with a story about early retirement with 1 million, building a villa with 500,000 (a villa designed and manufactured by a professional team with a swimming pool), and depositing 500,000 in the bank to earn interest. This is simply unbelievable. Is the author a primary school student? What kind of life experience can one write such unworldly words?

It becomes more and more complicated later on. Girls like the male protagonist, but the author insists on writing the male protagonist like a stupid boy. I am confused. I don't say how much you have to go through in your 30s, but I think as long as you are a normal boy, a girl will look for you to hang out every day. You should be able to feel that she is slightly interested in you. It's been more than 200 chapters, and I haven't even held the heroine's hand yet. I'm just continuing to write down the plot. I feel that one plot can fill ten or twenty chapters.

The protagonists in other books acquire skills through the system for the purpose of showing off, picking up girls, and gaining wealth! For a homebody who has no desires and desires, apart from cooking to make life more comfortable, is there any point in learning other skills? The protagonist doesn't even want others to know! I don't understand what kind of image the author wants to create for the protagonist? I even think that the existence of the system is meaningless. If you like to hide it, then hide it!

There is always a twisted feeling in the portrayal of this protagonist. I want the protagonist to pretend to be B, but I'm afraid that the readers will think he is pretending, which gives him a feeling of being both fake and upright, neither good nor bad. I want the seclusion of picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, but I must let people know that he is Tao Yuanming.

Newbies can start reading directly from Chapter 24. The first chapter is full of water, so it won't affect the plot connection if you don't read it. Of course, 90% of the content of each chapter from chapter 24 onwards is just watery. Just read the title. It won't affect your understanding of the plot if you don't read it.

50W earns interest. . . No, buddy, if you deposit 500,000 yuan in the bank, you will only get a few thousand yuan in interest a year, and you will spend a few hundred yuan a month to live on, right? Where did the author come from as a primary school student??

Can this book be ordered at an average of six thousand? Come on, do you know what the concept of an average order of six thousand is? Is this a piece of rubbish books worthy of you?

Shouldn't the first task be to drink your first sip of breast milk? We should find a wet nurse for the protagonist, I get excited just thinking about it

High emotional intelligence: daily writing Low emotional intelligence: running accounts

What a twist. I wanted to do this but didn't do it. I wanted to do that but didn't do it. I just went to show off. And I learned things too quickly, mastering skills one after another every three days. The supporting cast is also unlikable, and none of the female characters are really likeable. He said that daily life is not enough, and he said that he wanted to show off in a systematic way, but the pretense was not smooth. I thought it was: pastoral, self-cultivation, the company of beautiful women, a few friends, simple meals, happy poverty, traveling around mountains and rivers, and enjoying it; but I didn't expect that it was an undecided temperament, tightness, bad guests coming to the door, hard-to-change nature, wanting to make money, not thinking about women, not daring, cowardly, and a coward. Shuangwen is not the same, and daily life is not the same. They are not the same.

It has been fully booked so far, and it is good food in the early stage. However, since the heroine appeared, the author has endlessly pulled the emotional line for the sake of hydrology. Many things that have come naturally have been abruptly interrupted. If you really don't know how to write the emotional line, don't write it. Dangdang Urban Dragon King is good at pretending to be cool. I'll give this one up first, I'm sure it's eunuch. Because the author will dry up sooner or later for the sake of literature, and it is not the plot that drives the book.

A villa built for RMB 500,000 is fully decorated and equipped with household appliances and a garden swimming pool. Please tell the author clearly between the villa and the self-built house, the swimming pool and the puddle. The other 500,000 yuan deposited in the bank on a regular basis for a year is less than 10,000 yuan. Is it enough for you to live a carefree life? The protagonist is 30 years old, not 80!

Love is a grind, but singing can keep writing; who wants to see your singing with such a bad hook? Yarn hat.

The more I write, the more I write, and I start to give pointers 😅 standing on the commanding heights of __, 🙄

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel with such a witty start 😅😅

The second picture is shocking. An adult can only have more than thirty kilograms of strength? ? ?

After talking about stocks and housing prices, there is so much nonsense. If you had said that the chapter you were going to write was this kind of thing, I would not have subscribed to it.

I have read more than ten chapters, and they are all about talking to the system, and there is no plot advancement at all. You can withdraw.

There are scars all over your body, and the reward is all scar removal. Have you been thrown into a mincing machine?

It's very difficult to stretch. The male protagonist's height is set at 173cm and his strength is 30kg... The system reward is either to eliminate acne or to eliminate acne marks. There is no sense of substitution at all! ! Looking at this short, stumpy, and acne-covered male protagonist in his 30s, no one should think it's normal.

Three votes are given, come on. There is no cliche plot about showing the saint in front of so many people. It is very life-like and has a light feeling. However, it also writes the protagonist's light pretentious feeling after having a golden finger. Yes, there are still excellent products in Daily Drug Guide

Is it the eunuch, or is it the typhoon that has affected the author's updates?

There are not many bloody plots. Overall, it is a fresh style that makes people smile. Each character is more three-dimensional. Come on, author. Stay steady.

On the surface it is a baby growth system, but in reality it is an adult system. Various tasks and rewards are all needed by adults or the adult template is very boring.