
Mortal: Starting from Li Feiyu, He Spent Money to Cultivate Immortality
凡人:从厉飞雨开始氪金修仙
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- 198k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 1y ago
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Become the Supreme Being in the Immortal Realm from the Synthesis System of All Things
There is no Nangong Wan in the harem for the protagonist, so based on my experience it is all written as an old slave novel. I have collected many of this genre, but I haven't finished them all yet. I really can't get enough of them. Moreover, the results of harem novels without Nangong Wan are basically not very good, and this genre has been completely wiped out on the bookshelf. If the harem is to be opened, it should be opened as large as possible. There is no point in taking Han Li into account. Without Nangong Wan, most readers of the harem will not read it, and there will be no achievement in writing it. If you want to arrange Taoist companions for Han Li, you should arrange female cultivators who are suitable for life. Cao Mengrong is suitable for Han Li. Nangong Wan does not like Han Li. If Han Li hadn't built the foundation in the first place, he would have been killed by Nangong Wan within a few steps of the camp. If you like Han Li licking Han Li, then you should write about the eunuch training type yourself, because what we are looking at is how your protagonist serves Han Li, how your protagonist sends women and resources to serve as bodyguards, we are not watching your protagonist accept women and show off. If you want both, it will be difficult to get support from readers.
Little brother, your plot is not pleasing to the eye. You have accepted all the beauties from mortals, but you are so awesome that you can take them as concubines. I think you won't accept it like this, Jiang Yun, Zhong Weiniang, Nie Ying and so on. Your protagonist needs resources. You guide Chen Qiaoqian, Nie Ying, and Dong Xuan'er. Huang Maple Valley is your home, and your harem also has a place to live. No matter how hard your protagonist works, the Linghu ancestor will love you. Your system is suitable for operating forces. Don't write the same thing as casual cultivators. When you open a harem, you have to upgrade the system and buy two or three low-end Palm Sky Bottles or the like, otherwise you won't be able to support the harem.
A common problem between mortals and humanities
First, if you are timid, why are you talking about cultivating immortality? Thoughts are not clear. Forget about the closed time loop since the protagonist traveled through time. Does the author think from the bottom of his heart that his protagonist cannot compare to Han Li? Even with the system and cheats, is it still incomparable? Those who don't dare, those who don't dare, all the treasures of heaven and earth will be given to women. Secondly, few fan authors can write clearly about the basic settings, magic weapons, and elixir value settings. Third, there are many protagonists written by fan fiction authors who cannot control the lower body of animals. On one side, he didn't dare to hold the sky bottle, but on the other side, he dared to intercept Hu Nangong Wan. While cutting off Han Li's opportunity, I'm also afraid that without Han Li, it will be very different from the original work, and that things will deviate from the original plot. Furthermore, relying on the golden finger, the protagonist dares to lose Yuanyang without breaking through during the foundation building period, even if he has five spiritual roots and four spiritual roots. This one is the same. I sold one. I can understand that it is to upgrade my cultivation and get two Foundation Establishment Pills from Senior Brother Lu and Chen Qiaoqian. Are you going to sell it? Is this more arrogant than Han Li selling a thousand-year-old elixir? I haven't seen you for a short time and went directly to the thirteenth level of the Qi training period? And then there are two more foundation-building pills? Still want to sell? Is this treating others as fools? A lot of fan fiction is like this. The spiritual root is not bad, but when it's time to build the foundation, I have to enter the bloody forbidden land, Tong Wan'er. With the golden finger and two foundation-building pills, Yuan Yang has not been lost, but still can't build the foundation? Just stop writing it and give the golden finger to Han Li... It's not hard to take it. Is Chen Qiaoqian addicted to aphrodisiac, the main character of the fanfic? Do you have to do it one or two? Relying on the golden finger to be awesome, regardless of some settings of the original work? Don't you know that one step is faster and each step is faster? You build the foundation first, and then help Han Li increase his foundation to come out of the Bloody Forbidden Land. Do you have the elixir? I had to stick to the plot, but it was a complete mess. And there are also some fanfics about the Bloody Forbidden Land that must be visited. I traveled through the early Han Dynasty for many years, entered the Bloody Forbidden Land again and again, and repaired my cultivation again and again. I was really speechless. Furthermore, there is another serious problem in fan fiction, that is, they have to go to Mo Juren's Mo Mansion to become Cao Cao's thief. I want to read "Cao Thief" and "History", can't I read "Three Kingdoms"? Reading fan fiction is to see some things that are different from the original work, or some regrettable changes from the original work. Can Mo Caihuan become an immortal? Will Xin Ruyin survive? Did the parents who occupied Yuan Shi's body take care of it? If you don't want to do it, you have to go. The plot is embarrassing and disgusting.
Suggestions: Nangong Wan, Yuan Yao, Yan Li, Yinyue, Mrs. Wen, Wen Siyue, Mei Ning, Song Yu, Mu Peiling, Xin Ruyin and Xiaomei, Dong Xuan'er, Zi Ling and Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Bing Feng
It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended collection: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiaomei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her master Jiang Yun, Nishang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Wang Menzhu, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Yuan Yao, Yanli, Wen Madam, Ling Yuling and her mother Wen Qing, Yinyue, Bingfeng, Han Zhixian, Mei Ning, Wen Siyue, Liu Yu, Gongsun Xing, Shidie Fairy, Xiao Cui'er, Nie Ying, Yan Ruyan, Bingpo Fairy, Song Yu, Tianlan Saint Lin Yin Ping, Mulan Prairie Saint Music Master, Feng Bing, Mu Peiling, Bai Yaoyi, Saint Ancestor Yuancha, Saint Ancestor Baohua, Dai'er, Fairy Black Phoenix, Jin Yue, Xianxian, Liu Leer, Bai Suyuan, Mo Caihuan, Mo Yuzhu, Mo Fengwu, The four wives of the Mohist family (Yan, Li, Liu, Wang)
Gone is the TV version of the plot
Summary: It's useless for a big head to be dominated by a small head
I found that all those who wrote about Li Feiyu, except for Li Tianzun's book, had a bad problem. They were all cultivating immortals, and they also brought a bunch of oil bottles. There were a lot of beautiful female cultivators in the immortal world, but they insisted on staring at Zhang Xiuer and the women in Mo Mansion. They couldn't walk when they saw women. It really defeats the purpose of popularity and logic.
It's really speechless to have to get involved in the affairs of a few mortals in Mo Mansion.
Summary of Poisonous Points in Internet Articles 1. When encountering an enemy that is too strong, you should run away instead of bursting into a small universe, awakening mysterious power, having epiphanies and breakthroughs in battle. 2. When being chased by the enemy, you should remain anonymous and act in a low-key manner instead of continuing to take high-profile murderous risks. 3. Killing people, seizing treasures, mutilating corpses, and eradicating traces to avoid being approached by enemies or even harming relatives and friends should be the basic IQ of the protagonist. 4. Make good use of your own talents/cheats/plug-ins, which should be based on the protagonist's basic IQ. 5. It should be the protagonist's basic IQ to hide one's cheats/plug-ins, avoid being discovered, kill people and seize treasures. 6. Do not ridicule others in person for no reason, including the protagonist. It should be the basic IQ of the villains, supporting characters and passers-by. 7. If you work for others, including women, you should negotiate the remuneration in advance. 8. Talking in a battle will make both sides look stupid. The more words there are, the more stupid they will be. 9. Taking risks requires a sufficient reason. 10. Realm division is the cornerstone of the combat power system. If you casually cross large realms to kill enemies, the combat power system will soon collapse. 11. Being able to take care of oneself without the protagonist needing to save lives frequently should be the basic IQ of the protagonist's relatives and friends. 12. Monks will not be slaves to mortals. 13. Being free and unrestrained is a fairy. 14. Tell more stories and less reasoning.
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It's so poisonous that it can't walk away when you see the group of people in Mo Mansion, even people like Chen Qiaoqian who can't form elixirs. In short, I saw a woman who couldn't walk and was carrying a bunch of oil bottles to cultivate immortality.
Transferred from another book
The TV series "Mortal Cultivation to Immortality" has just been aired and it's quite popular 😂
The protagonist is like a waste, relying entirely on plug-ins. He does not practice, refine elixirs, draw talismans, or practice spells. Although he meditates every day, the spiritual stones required for each level of plug-ins are not reduced at all. Is meditation useless? The author has absolutely no control over these details. If you don't write this, who will?
Super harem article👍
It's okay to accept a daughter, but what's the point of accepting a mortal?
Notice of opinion modification
Today is the weekend, I will save the manuscript while there is still half a month left. Based on the feedback received these days, as well as the advice and opinions of many fellow Taoists, the settings of several chapters have been modified. I would like to thank you all 🙏 (I will humbly accept your opinions and feedback!)
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First build an archway and then act as a bz When you don't take the green bottle, set up a character and say something like being afraid of being struck by thunder Can't control myself and take advantage of others' danger. Chen Jia Chen Qiaoqing, do you think this might be done to you? You haven't developed yet, so you're a stallion? It's better to just write about profit first
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I wrote a new original fairy tale tonight! It has been published and is expected to be reviewed tomorrow morning! This book Mortal Man was fished out because of his straight hair, so he didn't save the manuscript, so he could only think of the plot while writing. So, there are indeed many problems! Of course, being sprayed and criticized is inevitable! Thank you very much to everyone who has given me advice during this period. Thank you very much🙏 The comment section feels very violent, and there are still some saved manuscripts for this book. Since everyone dislikes it so much, then re-open a new book! It's still the same account, the title of the book is "Becoming the Supreme in the Immortal Realm from the Synthesis System of All Things". I sincerely ask all readers for your support and advice🙏 The development of new books is very important, please help me collect and read them, thank you very much🙏🙏🙏 If you have recommendation votes and monthly votes, please vote for them, thank you!
If you read the novel, you don't need to read it. The plot of the anime is even for a woman.
Looking at the first few chapters, some sentences use AI, and the text generated by AI looks very uncomfortable.
Death by poison😰