Naruto No Longer Alive

In today's era, there is a routine story about thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi. Can you read it? This novel had very good results at the time, and there were several good ones. The completed Naruto novel has also been influenced to some extent by this book. . Achievements are not something you can brush up on. Just like Doupo, it will definitely not be liked by so many people now, but it was really popular back then. Times have changed and opinions have changed, but this book was really a good book back then. It hurts to see so many people complaining. .

​ ​ ​ ​ My favorite among Naruto fans is "Jiu Jian", because it is the most beautiful and kind, and it makes up for every regret in the original work in its own way. Reading this book makes me feel relaxed and happy.

Alas, after reading so much, I can sum it up in one word: disappointed. There is nothing that I want to see and** I can't stand it anymore Is there any protagonist and the world is the same? That's the meaning of writing Nothing has changed For the world The protagonist doesn't have much trace of his existence And in terms of shaping the character, personality and emotions, it is as bland as boiled water

I saw Chapter 7 and can't stand it anymore The protagonist lived in the Warring States Period since he was a child, and now he is 47 years old. He always says what's on his mind, and with the decades in his previous life, he is very old and has no composure at all Forcibly talking and making jokes, it's very embarrassing, so he has withdrawn it.

After reading the correction tape, I came back to read this book. The setting is very novel. I traveled to Japan and became Hashirama's elder, which is equivalent to immortality. These are good, but the character and behavior are a bit too confusing. I can hardly feel the integration of the protagonist. In order to witness the point, he is doing things, but he is like a villain boss behind the scenes. There is a trend of being a thief who is old but not dead.

To be honest, I thought it was quite interesting when I first started watching it, but in the middle of the free chapter, I felt a little stubborn and incompetent. Let me tell you my opinion. I think that if the protagonist has no strength to change, it is reasonable to just be a spectator who relies on his old age and sells his old age. However, the protagonist already has the Uzumaki family, a lot of disciples, and the support of the small family. In the end, he pretends to try to change, but in fact he is completely following the original story, and even makes a great contribution to the split of Konoha and the tragedy of countless people: For example, the death of Kakashi's father is because the ANBU has no humanity and the mission comes first. The protagonist helped to promote the establishment of ANBU. Excluding Hinata and the Uchiha family from the top, whether it is to help the second generation to rise to power, to suppress Hinata, not to let Hinata enter the Anbu, to force Madara away, to alienate Uchiha... And every time he said that the protagonist also wanted to change, the protagonist also felt that the second generation was not suitable to be Hokage, and the protagonist who had to build an archway after becoming a bastard was better to set an inaction mentality. How many people died, how many families were destroyed, and it didn't matter whether Konoha was there or not...

After reading about a hundred chapters, I felt that the author paid too much attention to the development of the plot and had no idea of ​​his own. It made me feel a little tired. In the first hundred chapters, the protagonist played the role of an old man. Did he really not want to change his identity and start over? Is your identity that important? It doesn't make sense to write like this. The writing is just like that, there are no detailed descriptions of fighting, it's almost like the skills are flying all over the place, huh huh. Although I don't know what the rest of the story will be like, I'm not interested in reading any more.

There are also many people who said that the plot was not changed and was written for the plot. Naoki is alive, Jiraiya is alive, Orochimaru is dead, Lin is alive, and Obito becomes Hokage. . . Is this also called not daring to do anything and not daring to change anything? Fan fiction is still about traveling into the past. The tragic change is a big attraction, but there must be a degree. Not everyone who travels through the past has the strength of One Punch Man, right? The previous protagonist was weak and tried to resolve the Valley of the End, but failed. Some people criticize him for five, but even if there is a system, he is just a loser! But at this time, he didn't have much access to the system! They were wall-hangers but didn't grow much. Ban and Hashirama were also cheaters (reincarnations of Asura Indra). They were also weak when they were young, but they developed and became strong. Is this understandable? The protagonist set by the author also grows up slowly, and is not the strongest at the beginning. These are two different routines. . . . I'm not a fan of the author. I've read this one, subscribed to half of the other Naruto book, and haven't read the one about Restarting the World. . I just feel that it's very sad that so many people are criticizing the original good book.

I haven't finished the book yet, but I'm almost at the end of it. I feel it's a bit watery in the later stages and not as good as the first, so I don't plan to read it anymore! In the early and middle stages, I felt that the writing was very emotional, lighthearted and funny! Worth a look

The first time I learned about this book was at Qidian's new book launch event. I was attracted by the immortality setting in this book and fell in love with it on the spot. Hhh This is the first time I have fallen into the trap of a book due to a new book launch event. The subsequent plot development didn't make me particularly fond of it. The writing was probably above average, and the story seemed to describe a person who was similar to other time-travelers. He had a system by his side and used Goldfinger to get around. Of course, there are some differences. For example, the protagonist is a person who took decades to understand the correct use of the system. I have been chasing this book, mostly because of the immortality setting that made me fall into the trap at first, and the increasingly obvious protagonist setting of an immortal and old naughty boy. However, I have never been able to upgrade this book from "I am chasing" to "I am chasing and like it very much", until one time I read a sentence from the protagonist in a new chapter: "I am dreaming. In the dream, I probably still feel like I am watching anime." I was very touched at the time. If the author's writing style hadn't been too out-of-the-box, I might have shed tears at that time... This plain sentence "I am dreaming" expresses the bitterness behind the glamorous appearance of many time travellers, but perhaps not many people care about it. Using myself to save others, if I traveled through time, could I easily leave the past behind, pick up the golden finger (if I were still the protagonist), kill everyone, and embrace all the rich and beautiful women in my arms? No, Lao Tie, that's a beast, just an impulsive instinct. No one who can think about it will just focus on this. A strange place, strange people, a specious sun, moon and sky full of stars. When I first arrived and looked up at the sky, I might not have a place to stay. I might not even be able to explain who I was. Maybe I was a time traveler. Those who work abroad can look forward to the Spring Festival once a year, and those who study abroad even have a summer vacation to return home. People who go out are struggling, but they can rest when they go home, but what about the time travellers? The vast majority of them came to another world involuntarily and returned home without any regrets or portals. Time travelers like Uzumaki Lao Fu not only failed to kill everyone immediately to fill the hole in their hearts, but they also experienced a big ups and downs and a big change in their lives when they were most energetic. At that time, could he still firmly believe that he was still living in the anime, could he still feel that he was superior to others, and could he still say that he was still the same person? When he first came, he seemed to be 100% concentrated. With the necessary interpersonal relationships, the emergence of close friends, and the birth of various emotional bonds, it was like cups of water poured into this 100% concentration, constantly diluting it. In the end, he could only say lightly that it was me who was dreaming. In the dream, I probably felt like I was watching anime. But the him in the dream is the most real and original version of him, the one who just came here and still "watched" anime. I am full of emotions and incoherent, and I would like to offer my personal opinion on why I can still be young and unrestrained after many years, and dance in the whirlpool of little apples in the square. Finally, Siyang, please come on! I will follow up on the subscription of your new book. I'm really sorry that I haven't been able to order all of them_(:з∠)_

I don't want to complain, even though I know I will be criticized, but I still want to say, what is fan fiction? Covered in the guise of fan fiction, and then experience it again as a witness? Obviously I have the strength and my thoughts have changed, but I just don't change and don't want to change. Just for your poor witness point, because you are afraid of ruining the plot? The first volume is well written, but the second volume is a book that forcibly restores the plot, which is really disgusting. Come on, tell me what other people have to say.

Much later... Uzumaki Masahiko has transcended the category of human beings and entered the ranks of time and space creatures, existing in the present, past and future at the same time. "Have we finally reached this point? It's time to go back and meet that bastard." He said to himself and slowly disappeared into the world of Naruto. Real world… In a dark room, a slightly fat man was picking his feet obscenely and eating instant noodles. "This sheep will not open the forest today, today the three sheep →_→" "No, I have to go on a blind date tonight, then... Er Yang⊙⊙" "Oh, by the way, we agreed to go to that newly opened amusement park. Forget it, let's go to Yiyang╭(╯ε╰)╮" "... There is no reason. I don't want to change it today. IOU O(∩_∩)O" "Dang Dang Dang~ Is there anyone there?" A soft and cute voice called from the door. "Oh? Based on my experience of being single for thirty years... It's a Lolita!" Li Siyang's eyes flashed, and he picked up the instant noodles in front of him and rushed to the toilet at a speed of 500 meters per second. He also picked up a pile of clothes that had not been washed for a week. The wind brought by the running carried away the garbage on the floor... Close the kitchen close the bedroom close the bathroom "Oh, lovely loli... No, lovely girl, how can I help you?" Siyang said with a rose in his mouth, wearing a windbreaker, opened the door and touched his head directly. "Please... May I ask you, is this Li Siyang?" The girl said with a look of embarrassment. "That's right, I am Li Siyang." Li Siyang was completely immersed in the softness of the girl's hair, and did not notice that the Loli in front of him had a broken face. "Haha, I admitted it..." "???? Your voice... You are actually a boy?" "That's right, I'm not only a boy, I'm also a boy over a hundred years old." The boy slapped the palm off his head, and in a burst of white smoke, he transformed into a 1.5-Meter red-haired boy. "My name is Masahiko Uzumaki, hello author, we finally meet." "Uzumaki Lao... No, I mean..." "Didn't you let me have no girlfriend for a hundred years →_→" "No, please listen to my explanation O_o" "Don't you let me make a fool of myself on the battlefield all the time →_→" "Listen to my explanation T^T" "I won't listen, I won't listen, I won't listen →_→ You can't escape today. Do you know how to kill the ashes together? Do you know about the Eight Diagrams and the Hundred and Twenty-Eight Palms? Do you know about the powers of Amaterasu and other gods? I will let you taste it one by one." Amid a burst of shrill screams, Zhengyan and Li Siyang lived happily together.

I took a look at the book review section and found that the book was basically not poisonous in 2017 or 2018. In 2019, one year after the book was completed, some negative reviews began to appear. And this year, two years after the book was completed, good guys, almost all of the book reviews were negative (almost all by trainees). Did the author offend someone? Finally, I want to say that it has been two years since the book was finished. You are going to criticize it. Why didn't you criticize it when the book became popular? Also, don't say that the data of this book is fake, (old readers know this is impossible) I grew up reading this book (although I read it as a pirated version at the time), and it was because of this book that I came to the starting point.

The protagonist is stupid and boring. Every time he causes regrets, he just blames himself afterwards. What's the use for you?

Name: Uzumaki Zhouxuan Gender: Virgin Age: Over 100? The most powerful person in the ninja world today. The great elder of the Kingdom of Whirlpool. Weakness: Fighting. There is reason to suspect that there is an IQ defect due to age. Note: If you encounter a whirlpool during the mission, you can bullshit it. Divert his attention. Can be fought and won

This book may not be suitable for book lovers today. I don't know, but it was a very good book back then. I calmed down, thought about it carefully, and saw a friend who reviewed the book. I hope you can pay attention to it. Maybe you will like it if you read an old book from many years ago. . Speaking of which, I saw something interesting recently. Past circle: I don't like it, the upper right corner ❌ is off. Current circle: I don't like it, I want him to die and disappear! Never appear! (xz's nc fan reported the fan website, which angered everyone in the circle. This is the current trend. I hope everyone who sees this book review will be more rational. If they don't like it, just close it. This is the author's first book, and he is now writing the fourth. Times have changed, and the style has indeed been criticized by many people. I hope future book friends can be more rational.)

They are all criticism posts, but the results are good 🤭

Let me remind you that this book is old, and it was really popular at the time, and it also inspired other authors to write fanfics. But after all, it is an old book and cannot keep up with the times. If you feel it is toxic, please leave silently. Since you can't stand it, just go to the upper left corner and give this book a perfect ending, isn't it?

But it's so poisonous, he traveled to the time when Naruto was 5 years old. He has never been on the battlefield. Didn't you go to school at the age of seven or eight at that time? Wait until he is 49 years old. Still very naive every day. Talking confusingly. Where did he live during those decades? Sit and wait for food and drink every day. Nothing to do. No! ! With his kind of wisdom, is he the only one who is smart and everyone else is giving him wisdom? Isn't that too much? He hasn't been assassinated? Bury the body? Then I don't know anything. It's like I just traveled through time. He didn't even know anything about the abilities of various families in the Warring States Period, or even their people. How did he live to be over 40? People die every day in the Naruto War. How did he survive? Couldn't he have traveled directly from the age of five to over 40? So very naive now. , I don't know what I'm asking. It's like he's not from that era.

Huo Jiumen should be the best-performing Naruto fan, right?

I'm so drunk. I finished a two-year-old book and I don't want to compete with you for readers. Now one of them jumps out to cause trouble? Can I say you guys are awesome? 😅

Came here admiringly, left disappointed. After reading this book, I realized that I hate the spectator of history.

Why does this novel have such a good record? There is no comparison with being the richest man and the mastermind behind the scenes in the ninja world! Drama garbage! The protagonist is an old man, what did I write?

After reading part of it, I feel that I am too biased towards Konoha. You are from Uzushio Village.

After watching part of it, there was no expression of peace and warmth, no passion and decisiveness, and the protagonist was decadent, waiting to die, inactive, and lazy. Second, yes, it was like watching a movie live with the anchor. How boring I was⁄(⁄⁄⁄ω⁄⁄⁄)⁄

I just watched the beginning and couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist doesn't look like an old naughty boy, but like a brainless retard.

In fact, I have a lot of questions about the protagonist's golden finger. There will be rewards for witnessing the plot, and there will be a lot of rewards for witnessing the plot and changing the plot. So what if the plot completely collapses? What will happen if Bisha kills Madara? Also, for example, what about a 5-nin village becoming a 6-nin village? Also, changing the initial plot will also change the subsequent plot. So if the initial plot is completely changed and the subsequent plot collapses, when the subsequent plot occurs, will there be rewards if the subsequent plot does not appear? There are also points to add. In fact, adding points in a balanced way personally feels wrong. First of all, the balance of subsequent points cannot be guaranteed. Secondly, it is still a question whether the points can be added to the full level in the follow-up. There is also balanced development. If it does not reach a certain level, it is just soy sauce. Amaterasu is the flame in the sun. In the final analysis, it is fire escape. So how high will the fire escape be when Amaterasu appears? There is also the addition of earth life, and the Yang shield has a fairy body in the later stage of development, so the Yin shield has fairy eyes, but the protagonist's Yin shield does not have fairy eyes, so do the Sharingan and Samsara eyes need to be transplanted? If so, does transplantation count as technology or medical ninjutsu? And what happens if the medical ninjutsu is replenished? Transplantation of blood without sequelae? By the way, there is also space-time ninjutsu. Does learning time-space ninjutsu require space-time attributes? If it is needed, will it be the same as learning immortal magic, and the time and space attributes will appear. If it does, what will happen if it is filled up? Also, are all techniques easier than adding some ninjutsu? If so, what will happen if you learn swordsmanship and become proficient?

What's so good about this book? Even if it is an old book, it is poorly written. Colleagues have written relatively few books, even less about Naruto. There are indeed more old books at the same time that are better than him. However, the reputation has been spread for so long, and the content is indeed very poor. This is indeed the first one. In short, I am tired. What kind of mentality does it say that he is good?

I started shouting about poison without looking at the date. I didn't expect this when this book was very popular a few years ago 😏. Even now, I can still occasionally see some novels suggesting that someone is involved, which is enough to explain a lot of problems.

A reminder for newcomers, this book is a very early one. Generally speaking, the text is relatively smooth and not suffocating. There are worse books than this, and I probably won't be able to finish it even if I want to. If you really can't stand it, there is no need to rely on the novel's popularity to force you to read it, and then come to the comment area to curse. This is not a harem novel or a pure-blood Aotian novel. If you don't like it, just leave. I'll see you in the next one.