Full-Time Hunter: My Little Bully Has Endless Fun

These days, I can't even read the introduction.

When I saw that picking up a cassette can give you the ability of a character, I knew that in the later part of this book, like the previous books, there will definitely be a lot of unmemorable skills. I hope the author can strengthen it with one ability as the core. In the other books, many skills in the early stage will be basically magical later.

I feel like the author has been in a self-circulation since the days of video games and dungeons I used to write comprehensive comics Now I am moved by pure old games. It was okay to read one or two books, but I got a little tired after three books. As a result, the new book also has this theme, and I really don't want to follow it After all, I am not a veteran of old games. Fans, there are only so many old games that I am familiar with, and the author's routines are also a bit repetitive. They are all messy acrobatics in the early stage, and then suddenly pile up the value and become invincible, then play the world of machine combat, and then mix colors to become another game god I hope this book can make a breakthrough, just add a bookshelf and other books.

The telekinesis ability of Little Overlord is very novel. It's good to find the cassette, but I don't understand why Yu Yu Hakusho should be integrated into the basic world view. I don't see any meaning other than making it more difficult to understand and excluding pure hunter enthusiasts.

The setting is too messy. First of all, it's confusing enough to mix Yu Yu Hakusho and the full-time world view. The various settings of the protagonist Goldfinger Kid are even more complicated. I'm tired of looking at them. What are the secret mode and functions, as well as Kid's various modes and cards, etc., I have a big head.

It's really too complicated. I can't understand why Yu Yu Hakusho needs to be stitched together. They are indeed the works of the same author, but there is no need to stitch them together in terms of world view. If you want to stitch them together, you can wait until the Dark Continent. The Dark Continent is basically unknown, and you can see whatever you want. There is another question, is this little bully the protagonist's telekinesis ability or the golden finger? The conceptual ability of the work is set by yourself. Now that you are the protagonist and is being led around, are you going to write that the protagonist keeps recycling the cassettes? Does the protagonist have no telekinesis ability at all?

I couldn't stand it anymore. The author targeted the brigade by saying that they were all scum and killed several of them. At the same time, he made Dracula's family happy and even made the Killua brothers recognize him as their father. Is co-writing Dracula not considered a scumbag just because he loves his wife?

The protagonist's cassette can be used with restrictions by others (it cannot be used to its fullest extent). Book lovers can decide for themselves whether this is a poisonous point.

Alas, this book has reached the time of garbage with high combat effectiveness. It is tasteless and a pity to discard.

After the Pokémon appeared, it was too late to catch up. The author made the mistake of the previous book again. He only added additions to maintain the hot spots of the book. He added whatever came to mind. The balance is all up to you. Then he made it more difficult for the readers to read. The previous book was just an infinite stream. The readers had their own psychological expectations. This book said a good story about Little Overlord and then added settings like crazy. He was completely trapped in the circle of writing novels for himself. I read the last book all the way to the end of the robot battle. I really couldn't stand this one anymore. Goodbye. Don't read it.

When people fall into a manure pit, they either want to come ashore or purify the manure pit and turn it into a swimming pool. You, the protagonist, want to become the biggest maggot after falling into the manure pit. Eat the biggest feces. Swim wildly in the sea of ​​feces. Butterfly freestyle 😅 It is really unnecessary. Your advantage is the normal values ​​developed in a normal environment. You develop distorted values ​​in a normal environment. The world view of the hunter is dark and depressing, especially the comic version. It is not an exaggeration to say that it is a manure pit. There is no need to add some water to it.

1. The part where the protagonist plays the game by himself should be omitted as much as possible, indicating that the focus is on the abilities that the protagonist can obtain. I know that the author writes the book to share the things he likes. As can be seen from the last comic book I didn't finish, the achievement is secondary, the key is to satisfy the desire to share. But sharing also requires skills. Reading instructions will not make readers happy. To convey the fun of the game, you should use the experience of playing the game with people other than the protagonist who have never been exposed to the game, and use their voices to convey the fun and excitement of coming into contact with the game for the first time. That is, cooperation/competition 2. The companion game mode, the competition between the protagonist and others and the companion game use the ability battle model to describe the rules in detail. For this point, you can refer to the writing methods of jojo's stand-in battles, strange rules, intelligence testing, energy output, and how to break through the rules and bring the battle into the scope of your expertise. Some geniuses can even catch game loopholes immediately, and in turn teach the protagonist a lesson in a realistic game... Such intense brainstorming. [Don't write the game as a game, write the game as a copy of a strange rule story] And if you are with friendly friends like Xiaojie Yusuke, you can also write about their observations of the game environment (art performance, soundtrack), the fun of the level design, complain about the maliciousness of the production team in a certain link (such as biochemical unlocking of the whole house), or even the sense of nonsense that deliberately hinders friends. 3. Poison point avoidance warning Cassette parasitism has a probability of parasitizing a capable person, causing the opponent to develop better than the protagonist. This is considered toxic to many people. It is foreseeable that the protagonist will have to fight fires everywhere in order to find the cassette and be involved in various incidents, which will further amplify this poisonous point. (From the readers' point of view, this is cheating on the villain, suppressing the combat power in disguise, and giving strong negative feedback) Secondly, if you want to parachute the heroine, it's best to do it as soon as possible. Not only the heroine, but also the supporting characters. The author's emotional devotion to the stand-alone game characters in the voice of the protagonist is something that readers cannot sympathize with. If you want a game character to appear in the main world of the main text (such as Kirby, the Vampire Hunter in the introduction), it is best to appear early and depict the character through plot development, rather than suddenly inserting a game character into the main text. (Yu Yu Hakusho and Hunter are of the same mother and father, and the combined world view is confusing to a group of readers who have never seen it)

It's so messy that I can't stand it anymore. I thought it was Hunter and Youbai at first. The FC game is the protagonist of Goldfinger. I feel like I can still see it. Now everything is added to it. If you can add it to your own Goldfinger, what's going on?

It's really frustrating. The author is a Gon-Jie. He keeps bringing in Gon-Jie's private goods in the article, and intentionally alienates the friendship between Gon-Jie and Killua...

Starting from the Dark Martial Arts Tournament, a series of other characters have been added. The selling point of your book is not the chaos, and the telekinesis ability has become more and more confusing. I am thinking, do you want to write in the direction of the mastermind behind the scenes?

I am bored. It didn't attract me at all. The game I played when I was a kid is indeed a classic. But just like that, classics cannot be eaten as food. I can't understand why the protagonist is obsessed with old games. The more the game develops, the more interesting it becomes. Now it feels like the world of immortality becomes more powerful as it gets older. Also, the main character makes me feel as if he can go offline indefinitely just to play the game. I don't like Little Japan very much for personal reasons. Every time I see the protagonist working with Little Japan, I feel panicked.

After reading a few chapters, I immediately thought, what the hell is this? Cassettes can be used by everyone, but the protagonist must have certain restrictions when using a cassette. In other worlds, I wouldn't say anything, but this is the world of hunters. The game is about wits. I don't believe that other people will not use the cassette to do anything good. Unless the author lowers the intelligence and overpowers other people's IQ, but in this way, the characteristics of the hunter will be lost.

The stitching is correct. The author combines this old-fashioned game with story plots, and the thousands of combinations have always been a feature. But the problem is... The author suddenly derailed the train at a certain point, adding new elements too fast - the original Castlevania rhythm was still okay. But when Kirby started to show some signs of success, he suddenly lost control at the tournament. In order to have various gags and new things, the author directly broke away from the original rhythm and added too many things at once that made readers choke. Moreover, these things did not serve the story, but were added just for the sake of new additions. It is more appropriate to use the word "out of control new additions" to describe it. ↓You feed the cat food one bowl at a time, and the readers will be very satisfied. You suddenly fell down a mountain... # Retreat

The author is too miscellaneous and is trying to filter readers. The plots of games or characters that you don't know will be very boring.

The plot of Dracula is boring from the beginning, supermodel

Various cassette clearances, real world clearances, and physical clearances are too messy and divided. It does not show the power of game-like abilities at all. For example: the characteristics brought by game templates cannot be superimposed (you cannot step on the left foot and the right foot to go to the sky, what kind of cheats are you using? Don't cheat if you are afraid that the cheats are too big and you cannot grasp them). There is no clear strong point. Although Qi is an indicator of energy, it is not as refreshing as the game panel after all (even if the panel is simple, you can't just use a few Qi to express strength). The most unacceptable thing is that you can't use abilities across games. For a hoarding party, if you have the space and ability to store thousands or eight hundred various supplies, how can you allow it?

I don't know what I'm reading. The original setting was a mixed world of Yuyou and Hunter. In the middle, I created a secret realm to add Castlevania and New Blood. The world of Ninja Turtles was also sewn into it. When I saw this, I knew the book was going to explode. There were a bunch of miscellaneous abilities and settings. More than half of the words in one chapter were about settings that would not be seen a few times in the future. We were so stupid. The dark fighting will be even more terrible. I will use the secret realm permissions to show it before. The fighting will directly release a bunch of game characters from other worlds. Then why do you set up the secret realm to project the world? Okay. Now I have to sew the GBA again. This book will be good before it is put on the shelves. I can barely read it before the brigade is destroyed The following is purely pure.

What I have seen so far are those in the comment section who say that the author seems to be stuck in a cycle of wanting and wanting, not only in terms of the protagonist's character, but also in terms of setting. The protagonist is a being who is willing to plunge the world into chaos just to play games. There seems to be a bit of a lack of self-awareness. It seems that he still regards himself as a good person, but his behavior is not what a good person can do. It gives people a feeling of double standards, and they particularly hate Xiao Jie. But the reason given seems to be that Xiaojie is too egotistical, but isn't the protagonist also egotistical? So there seems to be a fundamental problem with the character design. I don't reject a protagonist who is particularly self-centered. I want to play games and don't care about other people. However, your character design must be logically self-consistent and cannot have double standards. The protagonist is currently like a guy playing a game, and he is acting like a substitute. It was obviously his influence that deceived others, but he said that it was the world that had harmed him anyway. I was right, and then continued to attack the evil forces he believed to be evil.

Hunter Hunter will be republished with new content in two days. Wouldn't it be uncomfortable if the setting is different from the author's outline? Well, it's quite difficult to comment on a new fan article written by a fan whose original work has been dead for many years, but it turns out that the author has republished it.

What plot will follow? I've just seen the Ant King and don't know the follow-up to Hunter, but Yu Yu Hakusho is about to enter the Demon World Conference, and won't it be the end after it's finished? Doesn't it mean it was written in the early 100s?

When I saw the early stage of the Castlevania chapter, I just wanted to keep watching it until the main character's telekinesis ability was added with the function of connecting the demonic realm to the real world without any update restrictions.

Should you try to put the Dark Cloth together and put together the parts of Libra and Sagittarius? The Dark Cloth is not strong enough and can be strengthened by integrating other Holy Cloths and other materials.

Although it's a hodgepodge, it's really exciting. What's the point of just looking at the full-time hunter? Hunter looks like an unfinished work, with nothing to go on.

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