I Guarded Impel Down City as a Pirate for a Hundred Years

In fact, when I just watched One Piece, one of the protagonists' lifelong dream is to be the Pirate King, me? ? ? ? ? Based on the protagonist's ideal, he doesn't like the government but wants freedom, so doesn't his ideal want to be an adventurer? When did a career in murder and robbery become an ideal one? And then there's the death of the unkilling navy, me? ? ? ? What does the author want to express? Do good people have to die? But do all people without any shortcomings have to die miserably? As for Doflamingo and the Celestial Dragons, I wish they all died miserably. In that case, they are not human beings or even beasts. What would they look like in the author's writing? There are many people who like Doflamingo, his charisma? I don't understand you very well. It's like a foreign murderer who actually falls in love with someone and gets married. Aren't you afraid that people will look at you and kill you with a calm face? So I generally have no interest in One Piece, and I don't like the fandom, but this article is very good. First of all, the protagonist's identity is that the navy does not need to kill people and rob. At least no matter how corrupt the government is, the purpose of the navy is to protect, not to kill and arson, but to have discipline, not chaos, and then the protagonist's three views are important to him. After gaining ability, he showed it. He is compassionate and upright and will not ignore someone's evil just when someone is suffering. He can think and do something and refrain from doing something as a human being. It seems that the nine-year compulsory education has not been abandoned, unlike the protagonists in many books who have gone to the dog's belly for the nine-year compulsory education. It suits the taste and looks very comfortable.

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*The content of this article has been converted from traditional to simplified. Please forgive me if there are typos or unclear words. Travel to Impel Down City about a hundred years before the main plot of One Piece. The protagonist's ability is to become stronger by participating in the replenishment operation. This is the first One Piece fanfic that I have read. Compared with the contemporary Naruto, I always felt that the characters and plot of One Piece were not familiar enough to me. I wanted to try the Pirates fanfic several times but soon after I started, I gave up because I didn't see anything interesting in it. The beginning of this book was almost completely separated from the original world events, which made me feel quite involved, so I kept reading. What attracted me the most at first was the justice of the navy. I think this concept was not described that much in the original work. I can't imagine the navy in the original work having the guts to shout such lines. "The navy has the courage to bear any truth. Even if the 20 kings did stand on the side of justice more than 700 years ago, no matter how great their achievements were, it would not be enough for their descendants to enjoy the privilege of lawlessness for more than 700 years." Rebel the World, Five Old Stars, Celestial Dragons The volunteers have changed from a pirate group to a protagonist who has stood at the top of the navy all the way from Impel Down City, and it has also allowed the navy to shine here. "The navy has the courage to withstand any truth. Even if the 20 kings more than 700 years ago did stand on the perspective of justice, no matter how great their achievements were, it would not be enough." Let their descendants enjoy the lawless privileges for more than seven hundred years." Or officially let the pirates disappear, let adventurers come on, and explore the starry sky. "I am very confused. Is there any inevitable connection between yearning for freedom and being a pirate? Pirates are thieves. What's the point of being attacked? Is it wrong? "" What is the ability to yearn for freedom and roam the sea burning, killing and looting? " I think Lieutenant General Doug with the Inspiration Fruit is the biggest highlight in this book until about 15% of the time when he completely explodes all the charm of this righteous Lieutenant General who is full of faith. Doug's inner conflict is well written. The conflict between the justice of the Celestial Dragons and the Navy is a very interesting topic. Doug is the benchmark of the Navy, so he cannot leave a stain, so after becoming a hero, he cannot exercise the justice he believed in in the past. What a disappointing reality is this? "The Encouragement Fruit is really a good fruit. After I received the order to hunt down Sapphire, I would encourage myself once every day when I woke up: Although she is not a pirate, although she has saved many people and slaves, she will probably be more harmful than the big pirate. So this time, I still have to choose to be a coward... Listen to the arrangements of the World Government, and you will be taken away... For a public execution!" Although the old man in front of me was smiling, his eyes were blood red and his whole body was shaking. The other side stories are also interesting, but the main story becomes more and more boring after the exploration of the universe begins. The story of Sapphire and Jellal, "Brother, stop crying." "After everything has passed, I knew you would find me, and I have been looking for you." "You, your eyes..." "It's okay, it doesn't hurt a long time ago. I did almost die at that time, no. It was a blessing in disguise that the Tianlong people lost interest in me who was blind and did not take me away to be their slave. You know me, brother, I can see everything clearly without my eyes. They threw me out of the auction house, and I got up and found a kind doctor. Doctor Take me in and let me survive. Just let everything go. Don't be a pirate anymore, brother, find a place where no one knows us, and start again..." "Okay, okay..." "But do you think that for Sapphire, when she was kidnapped and suffered that pain? , Does her original beautiful and happy world no longer exist? You can enjoy privileges, but you do not have the privilege to prevent those who have destroyed the world from you. After all, there are many things that are more painful than death. " Ana's story of wanting to live. "Over the years, I have followed my father's example and done countless similar experiments. All the guys who 'accidentally ate' Devil Fruits all heroically died on their own initiative, unlike you, who killed a whole planet just to survive!" "Since you have the courage to choose to live, then don't be afraid of anything, don't mind other people's eyes, don't let some idiots see the joke." The story of Naika running forward. "I, I'm too stupid..." "They, they all say I'm stupid..." After a few words, Naika couldn't accurately describe the treatment he received. He just cried again and was pressed on his head by a big hand. "If you run fast, there is only the sound of wind in your ears, and if you run slowly, your ears will be filled with gossip. You have to run, little girl, run as hard as you can." Naika didn't understand and was still crying. "I, I run pretty fast." To sum up, this is a good naval novel that almost only draws on the background of pirates. Most of the plots are original. Although the branch plots and justice stories are old-fashioned, at least about 20%, Lieutenant General Doug gave me a pretty good reading experience. The expansion of the map in the middle and later stages, and even the exploration of the starry sky, are relatively stripped-down parts and are not recommended.

Personally, I think the writing is okay, but the characterization is not good. Except for the protagonist, the portrayal of others is basically not obvious. But after the book left the world of One Piece, it was obvious that it wanted to write a group portrait, but it didn't work well. Moreover, part of the plot has no feeling. It is obviously a very meaningful and touching scene, but it is not written in a shocking way. In short, this book is suitable for those who read stories, not those who give up original ideas in order to read fan fiction. (I personally like to read fanfics, such as Pirates, Naruto, and many Sword Art Online fanfics. But I feel that fanfics should not be limited to the framework of the original work. The original work provides a colorful world and shows us the tip of the iceberg of this world. Fan works are to depict those things that are not shown to us. At the same time, In my opinion, such fan works may be truly good works if they inject their own thoughts. If the fan works have to be limited to plots and the like, I can only see different people getting on Luffy's ship and going to different and the same endings. I personally prefer history. Let me give an example of the Three Kingdoms. I have read many Three Kingdoms time travel fan works. I have played many online games about the Three Kingdoms, but after watching Shenzhou III, I no longer have any interest in them. Because most of the Three Kingdoms novels, without exception, have the ending of unifying China and creating a glorious era. Of course, they have their own ideas, but they are all limited to the Three Kingdoms era. He uses a special method to escape. He wrote his own thoughts and stories within the framework of the Three Kingdoms. Even if I don't agree with all his views, I still think he wrote it very well. But maybe it's because of the difference in writing style that the group portraits in this book are not as good as Shen San.) The ones in parentheses are personal opinions, so don't comment if you don't like them.

Scam It was promised for a hundred years... And it was gone in less than ten years ヽ('⌒´メ)ノ

I think it's pretty good, and it fits my idea of ​​a fanfic very well. Fan fandom does not mean that it must be limited to the framework of the original work. This book was set in Qinghai in the early stage, and was created based on the framework of the One Piece world (the original characters appeared less at that time). At this time, the world framework is what connects this book and One Piece. After being put on the shelf, the world framework is extended, jumping from Qinghai to the sea of ​​​​stars, and the shadow of Qinghai is everywhere in the sea of ​​​​stars. This should be intentional by the author. In the sea of ​​stars, the character who connects this book with One Piece becomes a character. This step is relatively difficult to handle. On the one hand, it requires a relatively in-depth study of the original characters in order to portray it well, and on the other hand, it must not steal the spotlight from the protagonist. It is necessary to write the effect of a group portrait, but also to unfold it from the perspective of the protagonist, so that the protagonist cannot be disconnected. Here, I personally think that a better way to deal with it is to arrange a popular original companion for the protagonist to go on adventures with. (The author arranged Ana, and Ana's prototype should be Robin, right?) Actually, I have thought about writing a fanfic before. The general idea is as I just analyzed, borrowing the world frame + characters in the early stage, and borrowing characters in the later stage to expand the world frame. In the end, due to lack of ability + laziness, I did not write.

You promised to stay for a hundred years, why did you run out early?

Highly recommended, very interesting, fattened and ready to be slaughtered

It's good to read Ozu Deseki and this one are both to my liking, but I don't follow Naruto, and the fandom is a little bit incomprehensible This One Piece book is the most comfortable to watch among the few I have read so far. The protagonist is portrayed and the story concept is Oda's style of One Piece Oda does not go out of his way to depict details realistically, and is from the Age of Discovery. The turbulent storm and the grand struggle of 800 years are the main theme behind the hot-blooded comics, which occasionally flash and echo back and forth Other fans either highlight realistic details, or use other abilities as features to highlight personal passion This one also seems to give me a feeling similar to that when reading comics Great! !

The author of the Pig's Foot Devil Fruit can create his own, such as the Force Fruit, refer to Naruto, Pain's Gravity, Repulsion, and the Gravity of the Pirate Fujitora, which is the superior fruit of the Gravity Fruit. It can also be like the Tyrant Bear's Meatball Fruit, which can bounce all forces. When awakened, it can control all forces. Like Accelerator's rebound force in A Certain Magical Index, it can rebound all forces. This Force Fruit will not be weaker than the Shock Fruit. It can increase elasticity and so on. Combat power is the strongest in the world. Fujitora can pull a meteorite or a pig's trotters to pull hundreds of islands as big as he wants to destroy the world. He can put the repulsive force on the sword and the slashing blow is stronger than Big Mom and Kaido's Ha Hai. This fruit is very imaginative. References for the author.

In fact, I am a little resistant to watching One Piece fanfics now. The reason is very simple. I feel that there is something wrong with Oda. I didn't think about it in detail before, but now the more I think about it, the more I feel that the three views of One Piece are confusing. 1: Regarding the contradictions in history, first of all, Robin in the protagonist group is very persistent in the blank one hundred years of history, and is determined to retrieve the past history. From one plot, it can be seen that Oda is affirmative of history, but in Fishman Island Oda shows a completely different side, in other words, it is a double standard. First of all, it's not an exaggeration to say that the crimes committed by humans against fish-men are countless, right? But Oda shaped Aaron into a villain, and then used various subtle ways to show that Tiger's behavior of rejecting human blood was not correct. In short, Fishman Shima Oda tried his best to tell readers a truth. The historical hatred of the past should not be inherited by current people. I don't know how you feel, but as a grandfather who died in the Nanjing Massacre, I can't accept it. 2: There is no interpretation of the word "justice" at all. The understanding of justice in any work is different, but justice in One Piece is very confusing. Oda's views on the justice of the navy and the freedom of pirates are very contradictory. This once again confirmed to me that Oda's political level is at an extremely low level. Of course, this The point has something to do with Japanese education. There are no political classes in Japan, let alone words like princes, generals, and ministers, rather than being kind, written into textbooks, so One Piece has gradually become a story about a group of second generations. This is Japan's obsession with blood engraved in the bones, and the comic One Piece also made Oda become a typical 'Japanese' in my eyes. 3: With an almost ignorant understanding of the army and military discipline, Oda deliberately wanted to express the justice of pirates and brainlessly lowered the lower limit of the navy. For example, one of Garp's sons and two grandsons are both criminals, but instead of changing, he remained firmly entrenched in the position of lieutenant general, and the navy soldiers still called him a naval hero. It was very confusing. The army is a place where merit cannot be concealed. I believe that anyone who has served in the military knows the consequences of this kind of political mistake. Then the most infuriating part for me is the battle on top. The pirates were really embarrassed in this battle, and the navy was slapped in the face in this section. The key is that the slap in the face was not because of the result of the top nor what Whitebeard said before he died, but because of the actions of the navy. Garp didn't take any action during the whole process. The only time he took action was to hit one of his own people. During the Warring States Period, he took only a handful of shots from beginning to end and basically didn't move. Kizaru, paddling. Green pheasant, paddling in the water. Akainu is the most death-defying but is portrayed as a villain. Especially the part about deserters, I really can't accept it. There are deserters in an army, and Akainu kills the deserters. How wrong is this? I don't know what everyone thinks, but my opinion is that Pirates will most likely overturn in the later stages. Just think that I am talking nonsense. I also know that One Piece has many fans and may be scolded, but I still want to say that One Piece may become the second giant in the later period. The justice emphasized by One Piece is like a joke in the camp created by Oda. It is really difficult for me to have better expectations for it.

This is the sense of the picture 🙂 Figo who pushed into the city to practice with prisoners,,, corrected small mistakes

Fast forward to the Impel City Navy Lingling: "Grandpa Figo! You are not young anymore! You can't be so willful anymore!"

I'm so impressed after reading this book by the author. Can you tell me more about the author? I really like reading your book. Or recommend some books like yours that I've read so much.

I think the author Xingkong Hou writes very well, why are so many people criticizing her?

The world will get better, and the Navy's justice will never be absent! I, Doug, firmly believe in this!

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I got caught

I find that more and more people are beginning to use the modern social environment to introduce the world government and navy in the pirate world without thinking, and say that the pirates are useless, regardless of some of them who never rob civilians, or the entire group of pirates in this world background The only effect it has is to kill with one shot, and there are many people who agree with it. At first, I was too lazy to pay attention to it. One Piece is a hot-blooded battle anime, just watch it for fun. Why do you want it to be so complicated, and you have to dig deep into some truths and meanings in a manga? Don't we watch anime for entertainment? But seeing that not only are some readers being stupid, but now there are almost no new fan books with protagonists who are pirates. I am a little annoyed by the monotonous naval articles. These people think that pirates should not exist. For the navy that maintains order, the pirates who go around burning, killing and looting are just a bunch of garbage and should be swept away. This includes the protagonist group who has never actively harmed civilians and some who have been killed by the world government. Of course, pirates who are forced to live are equivalent to those pirates who are good-hearted, and the majority of pirates are not good people. This logic of thinking is not a problem at all in modern society. Pirates are a cancer, but in the context of the world of One Piece, if there are not so many pirates holding back the navy, how dark will the world be by then if there are not so many pirates holding back the navy? Without the constraints of pirates, can the revolutionary army develop on its own? The pirate group is an uncertain factor, used to cause chaos to the world government. Without stirring up trouble in front of the pirates, and relying solely on the revolutionary army to slowly develop in secret, the hope of overthrowing the world government of the Celestial Dragons is too slim. Some people may say that the world government is the world government. The navy is the navy, and the navy is still the party of justice. Haha, just like pirates are not all evil people, are there still a lot of rat shit in the navy? There are not a few people who favor the World Government. Of course, many of those high-level officials have justice. But if the pirates are gone, what will be the consequences for these people? Needless to say, the behavior of the Celestial Dragons. To the Celestial Dragons, the navy is just a dog used to deal with pirates. When the pirates are gone, those navy with righteous hearts will either be treated as dogs or killed and replaced with obedient ones. And in the current era of great pirates, the navy can only obey orders. Who wants to let people have Im? Some people may say, let the World Government rule forever. At least the World Government will maintain social order. Isn't it better than being suddenly killed by pirates? Haha, saying something like this is really despicable. The Qing Dynasty has died, and you still want to be a slave? If the world government with this background is not overthrown, it will be a slow death. Most civilians in this world will basically never see the Celestial Dragons in their lifetime. It is true, but if they don't see them, they won't be persecuted? People directly persecute your country, and then many civilians will die from war, hunger, etc. The Tianlong people are the biggest cancer in the world. If you want to overthrow this group, then pirates have their role to play. Maybe there is a more clever way to overthrow, but in this world of pirates with the political thinking that Japanese cartoonists are thinking about, pirates in this world are just such a group. To be honest, the reason why I have said so much in such a long way is mainly because there are very few pirate fan fiction in which the protagonist is a pirate. As long as the protagonist is a pirate, it is easy to be criticized. As a result, many authors can only write naval novels. Some people have said that if the protagonist is not a pirate or a navy, he can be something else. Which force should he choose? Pirate hunter? This business is too weak, let alone encountering the Celestial Dragons killing civilians in the street, and then the protagonist is wanted for fighting against the Celestial Dragons. Even if you meet any rat shit in the navy, you will be wanted at will. If you resist, you will be wanted. Anyway, you will be treated like a pirate in the end, so why not become a pirate from the beginning and suffer the indignity for nothing. Then there is the Revolutionary Army. The Revolutionary Army can only hide and carry out troubles secretly, so it is not easy to write excitingly. At least it is not as exciting as being a pirate. Pirates can have all kinds of adventures, all kinds of confrontations, and all kinds of wanton publicity, and it does not hinder secret cooperation with the Revolutionary Army. Therefore, the two forces that are best and easiest to write about are pirates and the navy. But now there are too many naval stories, and they are a bit tired of aesthetics. Pirates are suppressed by some people. I know some people will say that there are no good pirates, even the protagonist Luffy, because the pirates released by breaking into the impel city have caused trouble to the world. In the end, Luffy did indirectly cause a big disaster, but I just watch the anime and have fun, so I don't want to bring civilians to have a personal experience, right? Why did Luffy break into Impel Down to save Ace? This is human nature. Regardless of whether rescuing Ace will harm others, saving a loved one who is about to be executed still has many worries. For example, if your family is about to be killed for offending a powerful force, you still have to worry about whether the process of saving your family will affect those innocent people who will be affected in the future? Can you still be rational when things get tough? Spider-Man has done something like letting go of robbers, but it was his own Anko who died. With Luffy's mind, how could he think so much? What are you thinking about? Luffy gives me the impression that he is a stupid, straight-faced person who takes action when encountering an injustice. Being a pirate is purely for adventure, and his eyes light up when he sees new things. For those who hate Luffy because of the impel city incident and feel that Luffy does things without considering the consequences, maybe some people are noble and can understand the suffering of those civilians, but there are still many Most of the people who hate Luffy have never watched the anime and only read the fan fiction, and then they follow what others say. Well, no one mentions the people Luffy saved before, right? Alabasta is a country alone, and people who often do good deeds indirectly do bad things and are criticized in various ways. Aren't you bullying honest people? I feel that if I say so much on impulse, some people will criticize me. Forget it, I have written it all. It is normal to have different opinions. Finally, I want to say, it is just an anime, right?

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Siyang has opened a pirate ship, come and catch up ●‿●

I'm going to chase One Piece first. I'll watch it after I'm done. I'll turn on automatic subscription first.

"Unless the ending of One Piece is blessed by a Sage of Six Paths similar to Naruto and turns Luffy into a god, why should he fight UR with Shirahoshi and her giant Neptune? Or cheat again?" The author really predicted it from God, and Luffy really cheated and became a god again. Oh my God, the author really left the mark!

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The author has such great imagination and arranged the ending. Oda should take a look

After reading a little bit, I guessed that it was an original work. Although the writing is pretty good, I came here to read the Pirates fanfic. It can be said that this book has little to do with Pirates. I can't stand this kind of fanfic that has a lot of original content, but this kind of book is quite popular.

If I had known that writing a book after Li Siyang's book became popular would be such a virtue, then I think a group of fans, including me, would not be so supportive of this book, allowing the author to barely live a well-off life and still work hard to write a book seriously. This can be considered a modern version of the farmer and the snake, right?

This seems to be the top pirate article with over 10,000 orders and first order over 10,000.